Nicely written details and a mixture of good reflections and bad luck people encounter as they go through their days. Look, listen and be proud. A good style and easy to follow. Food for thought. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and blends them together with a nice flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman should be in charge of her flowers but maybe the couple go half in half on flower ideas. Good descriptions and lovely reflections. Good concepts and names for the flowers. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a clown with a baby pig, chicken and a dog. They get a special treat and the little pig chokes but CPR is performed and the little pig is saved. Heartwarming and the money spent on treats is used for charity. I am glad the pig was saved. Well rounded characters and cute. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a hiker getting lost and found an abandoned cabin and the paintings on the wall scared him. He stayed anyway. He wakes up and finds windows where paintings were. This holds the reader's interest and has a mystery about it. Creative and easy to follow. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and there are better jobs a person can like then doing the one he is working at, at the moment. A good style and easy to follow and the person's new job lead to other things he was missing out on. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters with suitable dialogue. The father and his children trying to reconnect. Some helpful people giving advice. Seems like the father made new friends and reconnected with his children. A good style and easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a cautionary gala. Some good reflections and easy to follow. S fantasy kind of purpose. Blessings. Knowledge and eagerness. A good style and some well chosen words make a good scenario. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in focus and gives this a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Vegan. I have thought of being Vegan. Simplify. Paying bills. Wanting to do things differently. Easy to relate to. A good style. Some good plans. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Good concepts. Always: Megan
Sometimes in life, we think things are taken away from us like at a job or family things but we try to work them out. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good reflections at the end about the smile of the earth, glitter of the sun and paving the way to rekindle. A good style and nice message in this short pem. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes, life can be beautiful. We do ask why we are here. We see good things in life as well as the bad. I appreciate your views and I get this. Looks like you spent time with this and put some thought into this. A good presentation Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I was a teen in the 70s. I love that music the best. Flower power. Smile faces. Love is.... I did enjoy the 80s music and things that happened. This holds the reader's interest and holds some good memories. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a loss of innocence can be sad. Some good reflections and some not so good. We do need encouragement as we go through life. Creative and colorful. Wayward dreams. We do have them. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written but this leaves us hanging. What did Angel do? Here's hoping she didn't marry the man her mother chose. This has a good style and holds the reader's interest. This has good potential but needs some background information about Angel and her family. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and these limericks are entertaining. A car full of rust and it moans when started. Talking mushrooms. Good call. A Doctor passing out pills. I appreciate the humor and rhyme pattern. The words are set in motion and have a creative flair. A good style and creative. Entertaining. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this dog is having an adventure. This makes a person smile watching a dog having fun. The dog gets dirty but to Rosie, it is worth it. She had fun. Good descriptions and neat imagery. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Cereal on the kitchen table all spread out. Milk lying on it's side in the fridge. Milk be a flying dinosaur. Nicely written details and the little boy has a wild imagination. The mother not saying anything. Ahe is a fantasy writer and knows about imagination. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and walking in the rain with someone who is special but the couple haven't said their feelings out loud, yet. Going to a coffee shop. Flirting and being happy. A good style and easy to follow with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and lovely reflections. Skies of blue. Flowers dance in the ground. Life awakens for another day. Trees spread their branches wide. Some good lines. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. This is creative with nice hues. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and trusting God and praying is so important. Easy to follow with good words of wisdom. This is enlightening and uplifting. The holy Bible. Faith and favor with God is important. A good devotional and a good style. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Jar Jar drove me nuts. I remember how he walked and talked. I am a big Star Wars fan. The bow being silly. I had to smile at this. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. National Umbrella Day. I hope Sam got his clothes and umbrella. The cat riding on the dog. Cute. Good scenario about what everyone in town was doing. Easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. Thanks for sharing the stastics and references to this poem. A good presentation and this holds the reader's interest. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and medical tests and hospital stays and bad news are no fun. Good news is always a blessing. Easy to follow and we have all been there. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Prayers are so important. I pray for everyone and everybody. Bless you. Always: Megan
We do love our characters and stories and don't like suggestions about changing. Editing is hard at times. I get this. Nicely written details and some concerns about rewriting. One star reviews hurt. Publishers. We take their suggestions into consideration. A good presentation and I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and war is always awful. The forgotten soldiers. I don't think they are ever forgotten. I understand the meaning. Food for thought. Easy to follow with good drama and suspense. This holds the reader's interest. Impressive writing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I find myself singing a song about going to Zion thatwevsang in Church years ago. Zion is Heaven and I like the term. Creative and colorful. Easy to follow. Words of wisdom and words to live by. This is uplifting and inspiring. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
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