I found this in Read and Review. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Wisdom is so important. I am always seeking wisdom. Well chosen words and this is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening . Food for thought and words to live by. A neat rhyme pattern rounds this out with a good flair. A good devotional and tribune to our Lord. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and we should always be nice to others who have less then us. Easy to follow and well rounded characters. A lost coin and giving it to someone who needs it. Heartwarming. Creative and colorful. A good scenario. Tge old lady funds a friend in the end and gets her coin back. Good characters and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. People stay together for a lot of reasons and love is a plus and for others, love doesn't matter. A good style and creative with well chosen words. Some good reflections and food for thought. The reader is in tune with this. A good presentation. As it was to be. Good call and well defined reasons to support your beliefs. Always: Megan
Nicely defined details and a Princess and a scepter. It seems to me magical. These medieval people do remember Jesus is the savior. Good concept. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue for this era. The Great Witness. Good call. Looks like you put your imagination to work. I wish life was magical. Creative and I enjoyed reading this. The Princess having visions and they will help her be caring and a good Princess. A good style. This makes you smile and remember pur spiritual side. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and potato chip cookies sound good. The ingredients are in order and this looks delicious. Easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. I don't do recipes much but I do like potatoes and this looks interesting. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Learning to fly can have more then one meaning. Some good reflections and good advice for someone. I like the style and this is creative as well as colorful. We try to accept others and do our best. A neat rhyme pattern rounds this out with a good flair and puts the words in motion. Easy to follow and I enjoyed reading this. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a young girl has powers and has to hid them. Veridonia. Good name for a city. The Arcane Rebellion. Well rounded character. Elara had to use her powers. A good style with good descriptions. This holds the reader's interest. Nicely done. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We always wish we could find a door that leads to mystery and good things. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. Some good reflections and food for thought. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this is uplifting and inspiring. Enlightening and lovely reflections with good words of wisdom. Easy to follow and your devotion to God and Jesus shows. This has a good style and holds the reader's interest. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Smile. We do need more of those. A good style and easy to follow. Some good reflections. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I reas fast, too. I used to read fast in school and the teacher would get mad at me. They wanted us to read fast. I sometimes need to slow down when I read. A good style and this is entertaining. Sipping poems like scotch. I smiled as I read this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a young man just moved in and the teenage woman thinks the man is stalking her because he is following her. He lives by her and they became friends. Easy to follow and a good style. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A potential romance in the making. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
No pin on pallou. This is interesting and sounds like quite a wedding as the guests were all dressed up for the affair. Attention to details. Looks like you spent time with this and didn't miss a beat. A good style and I think we have all had wardrobe malfunctions. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I found this in Read and Review. Nicely written details and a woman sees a man who just died and she had just come back from his funeral. He wanted her to get the will he had changed out of his coat pocket. Susan is confused. She things the man lived but he was attacked by lions. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation with good characters. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good descriptions of your favorite room. Soft lighting. Log cabin walls. Horses, cows and goats in pastures. Lace scarves. Lace curtains. Long wooden dresser. I like this imagery. This holds the reader's interest. A good style and I feel like I was there. Well chosen words. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I found this in Read and Review. Nicely written details and I have heard about India's poor country area. You described this well with well rounded characters and sad concepts for the young man. This draws the reader in and looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and what a difference a full moon makes. Rabbits eating snakes. I like that concept. A magic rock and eerie concepts. The lovers on vacation in Mexico. Well rounded characters and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. A good imagination at work. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and we will always be a mother to our children. A good style and well chosen words. Lovely reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. Good descriptions and looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is a good idea to label food. Playing what's this in the freezer. Easy to follow and sounds like fun. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. A good style and a fun read. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I don't like skeletons in the yard at Halloween and spiders and cobwebs. Like you, I like scarecrows and white and orange pumpkins sitting on a haystack. A good scenario and nice style with food for thought. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Acceptance. Looks like trees want to be accepted like humans. Food for thought. Easy to follow. A good style with lovely reflections. A good scenario and neat imagery. A nice rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I hated when I lost my pet kitty. She was a tabby cat. I got a tortoiseshell cat and things worked out well. I am glad you found Spout and I am sorry he had a 30 hour ride. He looks so sweet. Heartwarming story. Glad you found each other. God bought you together. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A good style. Some good reflections and nice imagery. A neat scenario. Some good memories. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in focus, blends them together and rounds this out with a good flair. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Smoke dancer. An interesting dance it seems. Good descriptions and neat sound effects. A good style and looks like you spent time with this. I see a trace of a rhyme pattern that compliments this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and my mother is always losing things. Like her phone, credit cards or something. I sometimes think I am losing my things as well. Well rounded characters and easy to follow. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. I feel like the mother in this story. Always: Megan
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