Nicely written details and a good word flow. The cows had a mind of their own and left but the man found them. The cows found some hay. Kissing cows. Easy to follow and a good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Entertaining. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and ice cream being contaminated by someone licking all 21 flavors. The girl getting 21 years in prison for it. Sad but her mother did it. I appreciate the humor in this. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good presentation. Always: Megan.
Nicely written details and I express my views to God when I am upset. Easy to follow and this is uplifting and inspiring. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Words of wisdom. Looks like you spent time with this. I get this. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I was thinking of another type of cow patties. This sounds like a good recipe with well defined ingredients. I was thinking of chocolate chips cookies but I see oats and cornflakes were added. Sounds good. This holds the reader's interest. The recipe is nicely defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Home means everything. A joyful heart. Sublime emotions. Happiness and love. good style. You wrote this from the heart. This holds the reader's interest. A good scenario and well chosen words. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Christmas. I do enjoy Christmas. Anticipation. Baked goodies. Snowmen. Snowball fights. Christmas colors. Christmas trees. Elf on a shelf. Good concepts. A good style. Lovely reflections. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I still miss my grandparents adter 25 years. Pop Pop liked dark chocolate. Grandpa being gruff but not meaning it. Cute. Some good reflections and a nice style. Your daughter being young when they died. Easy to follow. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Fire glow's softens. Long hours. Meals. A rocking chair. Restful passions and memories. Some good reflections. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and wraps this up with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Looks like there is no danger but the dog would protect the women. I am not sure what the men wanted but looks like they were harmless. This holds the reader's interest. A faithful dog. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good style. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Nature's embrace. It is nice when nature is on our side. Some good reflections and this is easy to follow. Creative and colorful. Embrace this lfe. Cherish each day. So worry of whats not to come. Food for thought. A good presentation. Lovely reflections. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and quite a conversation with one's shadow. Some good reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. Our shadow never deserts us. A good presentation. Always:;Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A life lived as we learn good values from our parents. A good style with food for thought. We live the best life we can. Life is meaning. Purpose with skill. We try to raise our children right as well. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It does seem like the students rule the school. Some students were mean to a sweet English teacher when I went to school. Easy to follow. Food for thought. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and sums this up with a good flair. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sports. A lot of people enjoy sports. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. Some good enthusiasm in this and sports does that to people. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters. Sad a teacher doesn't like a student and makes her life miserable. A teacher throwing a mason jar at a student and causing physical pain. The teacher gwts arrested. Justice prevailed. Well rounded characters and a good story line. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
It would be nice to know what the angel was trying to tell you. Some food for thought and this draws the reader in. Fairytale coming true. Easy to follow and a good style. Some good reflections. Sounds like a romance that went bad. This is well written. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is nice to enjoy nature. The sunset. The water. Nature does exist. This is creative and colorful. Nature is an art in itself. A good style with lovely reflections. This holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation . Always: Megan
Nicely written details and there are always places we don't want to go to. I get this. Pilsbury Street. Bakers thing. I would be bored too. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Creative and colorful. Cute and entertaining. A good presentation . I enjoyed reading this. Always:Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is nice to believe in nature. Beautiful and dangerous. Curiosity and adventure. God partakes. Good call. Nature can show us peace. A good style and nice scenario. Looks like you spent time with this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Rescuing an injured eagle and nursing it back to health. Heart touching and easy to follow. Setting it free would be hard for me. At least he is well. A good style and creative. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A horse named Millie. I laughed at the part thst says she looked like Medusa. Sounds like a good horse. Easy to follow and creative. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Home sweet home. Home is our sanctuary. The Lord is with us. Some good reflections. A nice style. I was in tune with this. Creative and colorful as well as enlightening and uplifting. A good presentation . Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Getting paychecks doesn't mean we are dedicated. We do a job the best we can and would appreciate respect and a thank you. Jobs are a hassle. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this . Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sometimes getting older is hard and you can't do the things they used to. We do forget things. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. A nice style. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We are getting rain today and we have had more then we need. A good style and easy to follow. Some good reflections. Creative and colorful. A nice scenario. The world and God's creatures do need the rain. A good presentation. Always: Megan
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