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Review of I MISS HER KISSES  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amazingly people often take the simple things for granted which you show through your story. These simple things coupled with the precious kiss have huge meaning for you. I saw in my mind every kiss you wrote about. I could feel the loss of those precious times.

Thank you for writing and sharing your wonderful and priceless moments of you and your wife with me and WdC members in your word art.

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Review of THE ONWARD MARCH  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I do not allow one person to run-in anything because either it is important to fight for what is right and keep moving forward or it is best to ignore this person because they do not understand and are harmless, but if a good person does nothing to protect what is right they agree with what is wrong. I thought of this while reading your poem. I was not distracted while reading, the words work well together the rhythm is nice and carried me smoothly from beginning to ending, and There is much room for thought about what your words convey.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a fantastic story which I appreciate. Humans are responsible for what is and is not done. I like this idea in your story because it shows how people can mistreat nature and bring things to ruins. I hope people will see that it is more important to take care of our natural resources than it is to make money.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about respecting nature and taking care of our natural resources in your word art and sharing it with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I was able to imagine the shouts of joy, cake flying about, feel the excitement of the events taste the sweetness of the icing as a child licked their fingers, and see everything clearly including the imperfect perfection. Your story is nicely written and shows a wonderful party that everyone enjoyed and even shows how imperfection can be viewed differently as perfection.

Thank you for writing and sharing the party word art with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The rhythm of your poem was steady and carried me smoothly from the beginning to the end of your snow story. It also had a happy bounce as the words flowed through my mind.

I could see and feel the snow as it fell from the sky. You showed me a vivid picture of the snow flakes as they blanketed the area where you watched this event.

Thank you for writing and sharing your snow story word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of Jayce's Profile  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You created a good and in-depth start for a story that is calling me to read it. I would like to know more about the story and this character because there seems to be some underlying issues that can be developed.

Thank you for writing and sharing this profile word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote the sum and substance of a climate boiling over or trying to do so. I am challenged to function in this heat. Hopefully my review will be helpful.

What you share in this piece tells it all as far as my understanding goes or in the case of too much heat might not. I was reminded because of reading your poetry about the recent very, very cold winter with degrees in the minus digits which is opposite the current situation. I'm sure people will die because someone will deliberately turn off the electricity in certain areas and blame someone or something else.

Sadly, we have nowhere to go and many people feel they can do nothing, so nothing changes. I get the idea about the greed of companies who take advantage of people. I understand about the politics and people who mistakenly believe they are in charge, for me, God is in charge but will not interfere with human freewill.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about humans and our environment especially the heatwave with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a good idea that I hadn't thought to do until I found your item. I appreciate knowing about your information because I now have a templet to use. Your information is easy to read and understand. The page is organized and there are no distractions.

Thank you for writing and creating this page and sharing your word art about this activity with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words calmly guided me from the beginning to the end of your poem without any distractions. It seemed peaceful, and yet there was a small amount of resistance woven into the fabric of this story. Resigning to the enviable seemed to be the strongest lament. I can imagine a tug-of-war between wanting life and facing death. There is however, Hope of life ofter death or at least so it seems so within your words.

Please consider the following genres to add: experience, emotional, personal which will help readers find your item.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about considering death and the response to it with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your poem, I considered the possibility of a tug0of0war between independence from what others expected of you and the freedom to be who you really are with no strings attached. It seemed as if this was a dance between giving into those who were trying to create what they wanted and you being who you are. The music rhythm disrupted by the storms that came and went depending on the people involved in this challenging situation.

Thank you for writing and sharing your challenging battle between being truly who you are and who others expect you to be word art with me and WdC members

Be you and let your word art shine.

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Review of Skyward Channel  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I felt the urgency for survival and the horror of the situation as your words ushered me forward toward the finality of this situation. I could imagine the whirling sounds, shuddering of the ship as it was taken up but the storm, feel and see the fear of people scrambling to survive, and know that in the end all would be lost.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the storm with me and WdC members.


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Review of Another Goodbye  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As your words showed me this story, I felt as if I had lost something or someone. I could imagine you feeling empty and alone, but at the end see you moving forward into the future with confidence. Hope entered into my being and I realized you were going to be ok. I'm glad the loss did not knock you down and keep you down.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about loss with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! You wrapped a lot of stuff into this poem. I could see the destruction and chaos but most vivid was the child. Fear of the horror penetrated my being as I read your words. I can imagine many emotions flowing through this child as the mind pondered why and how this happened and for what he or she wound up in this situation. Every word spoke to me and I was not distracted.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The rhythm of your poem was a smooth reading experience as I followed your love story. The words you chose guided me through the scene and helped me to know the characters and the plot. It seems there is disappointment at the end but you never know what the future may bring.

Thank you for writing and sharing your love poem story word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote an inspirational poem that I hope many people will read and take to heart. I noticed the rhythm changed but this was not very distracting as I read your words. I very much like the positive message about our abilities to make changes so we can have a better world. I trust God which is what Is keeping me grounded.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about a better future with me and WdC members


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
WOW! I could feel the anger and frustration because of this horrible situation through your words. You wrote from your heart. I'm sorry you had this experience and hope everything is much better for you now. While reading your story I could imagine the scene, characters, dialogue, and emotions. There was nothing to distract me.

To help people find what you wrote you could use genres such as personal, experience, dark, drama, educational, relationship, or tragedy which can be found under browse by genre for additional possible genre options.

Thank you for writing and sharing your dramatic experience word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of To Live is Christ  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you very, very much for writing these words and reminding me where to look and focus my life. Your words are encouraging and uplifting to my spirit and every fiber of my being. I felt joy and happiness as I read and considered the meanings. Nothing distracted me while taking in every word and concert.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Jesus with me and WdC members.


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Review of Doggy Shoes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
If I could reach out and pet your dog I would. Lucy is a happy dog because of her personality which is wonderful. I can see her easy going ways and joy of living and frolicking on walks. It's wonderful she has shoes to protect her feet and that she likes them. There is nothing in your poem to distract the reader and it makes knowing Lucy and seeing her actions and adventures easy because of your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Lucy with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read about Cameron's adventure seeking a jelly-filled doughnut I wondered if He was going to blow up after drinking many cups of coffee and eating many doughnuts. I also wondered if the coffee was going to spring a leak. I could see Cameron with the jitters and gradually getting angry until he exploded from within because he couldn't find a jelly-filled doughnut.

I was not distracted by anything while reading your story.

The ending is wonderful. It takes the kindness of a child to get adults to realize the true meaning of things. A free doughnut is more than a free sweet treat.

Thank you for writing and sharing your doughnut story word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of Old Log  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your words that guided me from idea to idea, I could smell the rotting, feel the fragility, see the trunk lying lifeless or so it seemed, and yet hope gripped me. This hope is because I know underneath this dead trunk, through it, and without it there would not be life teaming and thriving. There would not be a renewal of life through death. Nature is a great survivor. I thought of these things because your words brought them to my mind.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story about the tree trunk and your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Within Arms Reach  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your story it felt like taking a trip through the arts. I could see in my mind creativity frolicking about as ideas became artwork. Emotions raced as this artwork was set out for all to see and admire, but you stood in the shadows unnoticed, yet your light shone. These ideas and images formed as I read your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your creativity and word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Balloon  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I watched through your words as you experimented with space flight using figures and a balloon for each one. As they ascended into the unknown with no hope of return there was a sense of loss with the sense of adventure. Your astronaut doll seems to have the greatest chance for survival and the ability to go further into the realms of space than another figure before.

I felt like I went on this adventure with these figures.

Thank you for writing and sharing your space travel word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Today, I Will  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
As the words twirled, swirled, and cavorted about I saw them changing positions until they found their right places within sentences and then the sentences formed paragraphs. The story became a living community of words and I visited there while reading your poetry in motion.

Genres that would fit this artistic poetry might be writing, action/adventure because this is an adventure with words, mystery because writing can be a mystery, thriller because it is thrilling to go wherever the words take you, and personal because writing is a personal experience. There are other possibilities of course.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members about words and showing what the imagination creates.


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Review of Wanderer  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I could imagine a figure searching down every street, path, and trail looking for love or other treasures related to love. Feeling the pull and gentleness of love guiding the figure forward yet not one to love can be found, however, the world is explored daily and nightly. A broken heart beats with this uearning.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem with me and WdC members

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Review of PTSD  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read through your story at first you show him as the ideal person, but as the story continues he gradually becomes more of his real self until he is completely exposed as a person to be avoided and possibly feared. I could see through your story he uses psychological means to control and manipulate. When I got to the end it was as if something heavy dropped to the ground shattering life.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about things not being as they seam

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