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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poetic words I envisioned a relationship between people, people and words, and people and things. All these seem to fit your poems story in different ways. The heart of a friend, lover, married couple, artist, writer and words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem about relationships, emotions, and i remember dreams now, with me and WdC members.


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Review of Sea Story  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The eyes haunt and I wonder if this was worse than the monster who stole the maiden from the lad. Your story has many elements of interest that kept me reading. I got to know the characters, see the scenes, and be involved in the adventure. There was nothing to distract me from reading. I hope to acquire a copy of the anthology.

Thank you for writing and sharing your steam punk adventure word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
ABC's are a place to start getting something on to paper or screen, but you want to create something fantastic and new, I get it. Please consider this: You are unique, therefore whatever word art you create is unique and fresh. Only you can write like you. These thoughts flooded me as I read your words about writing.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the challenges of writing with demand WdC members.


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Review of Slugger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The best part of hour story is when Jared's mother supported his efforts. One person gave their support to another person and the entire team won. You illustrated how now person can make a positive difference. I got to meet and know the characters, the scene is clear, and the actions are realistic.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with demand WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I get it and thinking is the key. Research is very important, but also being able to reason and consider the elements of a subject require learning how to understand the basics of language, word meanings, and history. Your poem encouraged me to think about the young people who sadly do not have the basic skills to do critical thinking. Your words spoke directly to me.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Saved by a Child  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the way you presented this story about Valentines Day because the characters were interesting and acted normally, the scene with Alex playing his dad as a valentines gift to his mom was something a child would in a unique way, and because your story has a happy ending. Just writing about Alex saving the marriage would have been dull if it was simply statement rather than a story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Alex and saving the marriage with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I imagined a clueless turkey enjoying life and totally unaware of its fate because Thanksgiving was drawing near. I also saw in my minds eye a feast with the turkey the center of attraction, people happily anticipating the delicious meal, and the barnyard quiet a subdued because the turkey was no longer strutting its stuff.

Thank you for writing and sharing your turkey poem story with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Rattlesnake  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like non venomous snakes and respect those with venom. They are beneficial creatures. Venomous sales can be dangerous but given the chance they would flee from humans or other critters unless as you wrote were cornered, surprised, or hunting for food. Your words of warning ring true. I visualized a rattler slithering and through about its bite.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members about the rattler.


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Review of Stampede  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I cheer for this wonderful victory because this is the way things should be considered; not by a few but by the many. You made this clear with your word choices and arrangement. I thought about the door mat. People should not be treated like a door mat and run over by a few who have greed driving their actions. I'm glad the carousel still stands.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art and pictures with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your historical poetic story about you and writing.com because it touched my heart and uplifted my spirit, I got to know about your history with WdC, and I recalled my experience when I found this website. The rhythm as I read it was bouncy and happy, full of enthusiasm, and showing the community spirit of WdC through the words.

Thank you for writing this poetic story and sharing your word about WdC with me and WdC members.


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Review of After the Rain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
You wrote a nice story about a beloved dog and her family which I enjoyed reading. I got to know the dog and family through your scene description. The characters are realistic and acted according to their circumstances. It would have been nice to give the dog a pat.

One thing distracted me from focusing on your story. When you use had it is PresenTense and not pasTense. Showing the story in the now keeps the reader in the action. Doe example when you write S/he had whatever, it is not as compelling as he did whatever or had whatever. He went to the story is better than had went to the store. Please ask any questions you might have.

Your story has a lot of potential. Editing will bring it into a livelier state for readers.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Love Authenticity  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your words I felt the sincerity of them, the purest intentions, and the unfettered need to share your feelings with readers. I imagined love as an entity or spirit, or energy that is light, true to its self, and unblemished. It is to me like pure unblemished and honest affection for humanity, nature, and life. Your words evoked these ideas.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic story about pure love with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
When people move from earth to another place it is difficult especially when it is unexpected. I could feel this in your words. I also felt the hope for reuniting someday.

Some genres you could use for this item to help potential readers find your poem are: personal, death, emotional, relationship, experience, spiritual

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
My first thought is that the future can be scary. I pictured a person in bed trying desperately to sleep and dream, but annoyed because sleep and dreams were fleeting. I could feel the desperate longing emotions of deprived sleep, no dreams, and the future far away without any idea of what will be. This would drive a person to desperate actions. The fear of the future looms. Your words evoked these ideas.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about fleeting dreams with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I processed your words of wisdom in your poem, I felt the excitement and a bit of fear depending on the subject at the moment. All the encouragement made me feel like I should devote more time to writing no matter what it may be or how it turns out. I could picture you writing this poem and enjoying the process.


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
You wrote an eerie story that kept me interested, but because of the sentence structure I was at times distracted from your story. Some editing will smooth the sentences so that readers are not distracted and taken out of the story. I was able to know the characters, visualize the scene, and see the action. Your story has room for expansion. I wonder why these events happen, how they were started, who the characters are-history and related info, and where, when, if there is more hidden story within this story.

Thank you for writing and sharing you're word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poetic story about work and getting things done I pictured a busy office setting with a dedicated and focused person multi-tasking and trying to do more so their boss would be pleased. Pride was alongside helping and so was ambition. The other workers were busy but didn't seem as determined to get their work completed. This scene came to me because of your carefully chosen words and the rhythm of your poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about work and striving for success with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poetic story is a very nice dream. I saw the scene of a person in bed relaxed and happy as they enjoyed their dream. Your words as I read them are a happy tone that gently showed me step by step the imagery of this wonderful dream and the persons restful sleep.

Thank you for writing and sharing your wonderful dream word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of A Touch of Evil  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Your words brought colorful, vivid, and earth shaking emotions through out me as I read your poetic story. The hues of red swirled about me as your story unfolded and ended in a dark evil embrace that I ran from in horror. It was like barely escaping dropping into an endless fiery fall for eternity. I can still feel the pricking of your words. The images you evoked are still in my mind and before my eyes of imagination.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story of evil and corruption with me and WdC members.


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Review of Pain stains  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! This is a very hard hitting very short story of pain and rage that I was able to feel deeply. Your words were oranges in a way that for me showed the scene vividly and put me right in the middle of everything. It was as if I had been punched into another galaxy. The pain must have been unbearable. I hope things are much better now.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about your experience with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I hope you do not disappear because you are a writer or else you wouldn't be here. My next thought is no matter what don't allow the editor to get in the way of your creativity. Your words have an effect on people, they cause pondering and at times help someone to be creative. You got me to consider your words and think about what you wrote. Please keep writing.

Some genres to add so potential readers and the Quills can find your writing are: personal, emotional, experience

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Review of Madness of March  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
March can be a challenging month, but this spring has been all over the place with ups and downs. I'm waiting for the weather to settle so I can take the rest of my plants outside. I thought about the gardening situation as I read your poem. It fits this spring very well.

Thank you for writing and sharing your March poetic word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Pictures  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Inspiration and words can create images that sometimes cause someone to become fascinated and...I can't think of the word right now...so they want to be with the creation every minute. I could see in my imagination a person in front of a screen focused on a beautiful someone as they longingly wanted to be inside the screen and in the picture.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic word art with me and WdC members

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Review of A Life of Roses  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your poem because the words told a nice story of believing, dedication, and faith. I like horses and could imagine a horse race, the winner at the winner's circle, and the people who enjoyed the victory.

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Review of Consume me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel through your words the longing for a very close and everlasting relationship.

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