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Review of School Blues  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading the reassuring statements in your poetic story. It's nice when children are given heart-felt encouragement and knowledge that the parent will be with them and help them. Yer scene and characters are easy to imagine and the characters realistic and easy to get to know.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with me and WdC members.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Many people think winning a game is so important and it matter but as you showed family is more important, relationships are more important, and fellowship is more important. Music is uplifting and helpful too which is demonstrated in your story. I got to know the characters, see the scene and action, and enjoy a nicely written story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your family focused word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
My view of this poetic story is of light grey going darker with every change until it is almost black. This reminder me of the process of life, but a life with many challenges and one that had little if any joy. The ending was very dark like death. I also saw this as a visual of winter as changes occurred. Another possible view is of the changes i n society and changes in the way people see things. I also considered someone who is struggling with mental and spiritual, and possible physical challenges.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Run  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed getting to know these characters in your prison escape story. If you decide, you could make a novel or series from this beginning by adding history elements and then going forward, plus adding information about the characters so readers can get to know them better.

Thank you for writing and sharing your prison break word art story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Kitty Wishes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Put a stamp on it and mail the kitty to me. I could feel the longing and hope through your kitty words. I wanted to reach out and pet that kitty then being it home with me. I visualized many kittys being adopted and hope they will have wonderful homes.

Thank you for writing and sharing your kitty word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel lighter and my heart and spirit are uplifter after reading your poem. I enjoyed the happy rhythm of your words. Guided gently and with excitement for an adventure each day I felt your enthusiasm.

Thank you for writing and sharing your happy poem with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Curiosity can be worse but sometimes the urge is very, very strong as you vividly showed me through your dialogue. The mystery about what will happen next loomed large and kept me reading your story. I enjoyed the way you presented the scene because I got to visualize the action and to know the characters. The big surprise was Dad handcuffed to the pull-up bar. I figured he was busy but didn't see that coming.

Thank you for writing and sharing your family story with me and WdC members.

Other genres that might help readers find your story: drama, mystery, experience, parenting.


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Review of Memories  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words show that we humans are creatures of habit. Your observation of thinking the same way result in doing things the same way, it shows in your description of how humans react to stimuli. Finding another way out of a safe place or routine is making the choice to change and think differently which you mentioned in an opposite way because of the last statements.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Ken, you wrote a heart felt poetic story about survival that touched me as if I were there with this person. Their choice of making money is one, I could see through your words, of desperation and survival for her and her children. A mothers love knows no bounds especially when it comes to taking care of children. It is sad the people are driven to these extremes. I saw the mother and children, felt her desperation, and hoped for a better life for all of them.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about love and desperation with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm glad I found your information about Odeta Rose through READ and REVIEW because I didn't know about her. I found it interesting learning about here abilities and multi-genre writings.

To help potential readers find your item: These genres might be helpful__writing, biographical

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Review of User-Friendly  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like the way the situation did a 180 because it seems people are taking too lightly the challenges of robotics and artificial intelligence. As good as these things can be they also can get out of control. An example is the way computers are helpful, but if they took over everything, then what?

Thank you for writing and sharing your robotic and AI story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Saved  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your story introduced me to a character who apparently had too much curiosity. I got to know her well because of good details about her reactions to her situation. I also felt the emotions of being trapped in an abandoned building which was scary.

Thank you for writing and sharing your scary word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Giveaway  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the push and pull of both sides of a reaction as I read about embracing something verses eschewing something. Visualizing a spotlight on black and white came to my mind. I saw in my imagination the revealing of a persons reactions to events which showed people who and what they liked and disliked.

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Review of Small Comforts  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your poem about the kingdom and the king because I imagined funny pictures of each event. The rhythm jauntily took me through the story. The coughing dust in my mind had all kinds of funny movements.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your amazing and funny story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Stake Your Claim  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The rhythm, word order, story, and scene wove a love story that I could visualize. Two lovers enjoying each other through the night completely invested in each other moved toward a maddening extract or was it ending. I think this is a possible two ending depending on how the reader views this story.

To help potential readers find your poetic story you can use genres such as romance.love, experience, personal, or others.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
It sounds like a mix of Frankenstein, Outer Limits, and Twilight Zone with a bit of comedy thrown in because of the brightly colored flowers, pink eyes, and wobbliness. The matter of fact dialogue fit the story well. Characters, scenes, dialogue, and story plot work well together and are realistic.

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This poetic story touched me and uplifted my spirit. It felt like Jesus was sitting across from me telling His story. I am in agreement, yes Jesus is my savior.

Thank you for writing and sharing this spiritually uplifting word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Pay Attention  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can enjoy nonsense because there are times when we need to relax and enjoy life to the fullest. Something that might be meaningless on the surface might have treasures underneath. Living fully in the moment is a powerful and often a very good thing to do. There are times when letting go and being honest with ones self is freeing and enjoyable. Letting go of troubles is like leaving slavery behind. These thoughts came to me as I read your nonsense word art.

Thank you for writing and sharing your nonsense word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the blossom as your choice of an example because blossoms have beauty and when we thrive this is a beautiful sight. Your poem is very encouraging and for this I thank you.

Some genres to help potential readers find your poem are: nature, environment, inspirational, or self help.

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Review of About Dad  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You created some down to earth characters who I hope are allowed to do more on the page or screen in the future. The scene is a typical get to know you scene bringing realism to your story. Dialogue helped me get to know the characters and tone of the situation.

Genres that would help potential readers find your story are: drama, experience, or relationship.

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Review of Little Children  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The message of hope for humanity to take care of and properly guide the children is clear. Your words smoothly guided me through your song story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your song story of hope for the future word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of after the bees  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I know when it is water it seems the pollinators are dead, but many are slumbering/hibernating. I could see in my minds eye the drab and emptiness of winter as the longing for colorful spring nagged and waited to have release again.

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Review of Time Bandit  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh the lure of French Fries. I was able too know the characters in brief, see the scene in my imagination, and chuckled when I reached the end of your story. Thinking about those French Fries made may mouth water and I could smell them too. I should find that time machine so I can go along and have French Fries.

Thank you for writing this interesting story about a time machine, French Fries, and Hero in the making and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Shame  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In my imagination I saw Rosy pointing to the spot. I felt like that spot was going to become alive, jump up and wrap its self around me. I am agreement with you that these and other horrible acts are not just a one person shame, but a shame and blot on society because so many people turn blind eyes to these horrors.

Thank you for writing about this personal and emotional subject and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poetic story tis sad, challenging, and even a warning. I thought about communication or the lack of it while reading your love story.

Genres that would help potential readers and The Quills find this love story are: drama, emotional, experience, personal, relationship, romance/love.

Thank you for writing and sharing your love story with me and WdC members.


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