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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words showed me the characters as if I were there with them. I could see the shop and Elias working on the pocket watch as the storm quieted. The conversation is realistic and gave me insight into the personalities of the characters. I wonder what else the clockmaker knows and can do and how he feels about his work and influence on the towns people.

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Review of The Snow Queen  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
As I read your poetic story of the queen she became darker especially when I reached the end of the story where she kills them all. For me it was sad to witness things go from a nice snowy white and a beautiful glowing face to a dark ness of the heart and body. I enjoyed the rhythm of your poem story. It was like the story was singing it's tale to me.

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Review of Rose Red  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I imagined the characters, the conversation, and scene as I read your holiday short story. I can believe your story and I was not taken out of it except[t for noticing the typo below.

[Her laughter faded as realized the impossibility of her situation.]
she

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Review of Clown Chase  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Shivers up the spine is the least of this problem leaving me to wonder if there were the possibility of escape or if doom had its clutches on the victim and the awareness hadn't set in for them yet. The worst of this story is the nightmare and the daymare together make for a horror that I certainly wouldn't want to be involved in for any reason. I could visualize the scenes, hear the sounds, and be fully in the story through your words that describe things very well.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I appreciate the love of God and Jesus that is all over the words your shared with me here because I prefer the light to the darkness. You were talking to me through your written words and reminding me of most important things to keep me focused on truth and happiness rather than the things of this world. Thank you for taking the time to present the things of God in your own words and share these special and very important facts from scripture in Jesus' name, amen.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote words of peaceful bliss and showed me your enjoyment of your journey as you walked without a particular path in the scene. I could imagine someone accompanying you as silently each one took in details of a beautiful view of the scenery passing by at a leisurely pace. I'm glad you enjoy one of the greatest gifts in life.

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Review of The Saw Mill  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Memories of true love and the excitement of meeting and together making precious memories are felt in your poetic words. I invisioned a couple and then more couples as they, in turn, made memories s time PASSED AND YOUTH FADED, THE MILL BECAME OLD AND BROKEN, AND THE MEMORIES LINGERED WHILE THE PEOPLE WENT ONTO OTHER PASTIMES AND PASSIONS. BUT, THE MEMORIES LINGERED. Oops, caps lock mistake, sorry not yelling.

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Review of Dawn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could imagine your beautiful garden and you enjoying the sunrise, the animals beginning their day with play, and nature bestowing a beautiful rainbow of colors for your eyes to enjoy. The rhythm as I read your poem carried smoothly from scene to scene. Your words unveiled a spectacular day full of happiness and joy.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the wonderful day greeting you and your joy with me and WdC members.

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Review of Much  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words capture the essence of your situation so that I was able to visualize broken words, a broken writer, or a writer with a broken typewriter or electronic device used to write, and a beam of sunlight streaming through a window adding hope to the situation.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art from deep within with me and WdC members.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I liked the way you delivered your story because it was as if you were telling it to me while we sat and enjoyed a beverage. I was wondering if the husband had something to do with her death, but it's probably because of writing for many years that I pondered this idea. Your story is believable, the characters are realistic, and the plot is a good murder mystery.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is evident that you did thorough research. The format of this presentation makes reading the information easy and also easy to find a topic as needed for future reference. The facts seem obtainable as desired tasks for weight loss and most likely many people will be glad you wrote this information.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt the peacefulness of your words and believe your peacefulness inside shines through brightly. I agree that with God we can have inner peace. All of what you wrote is valid and understandable. I have high hopes that more people will read your story about having peace.

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Review of I Blame  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I find the blame and don't blame parts of your poem a bit confusing. It seems you don't blame for the not-good things and blame for the positive things. Did I misunderstand? I could feel the turmoil and distress within your words. The scenes of this story are visible in my mind.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed laughing at the part about the braille; I'm allowed. I know braille so can relate. I was carried from word to word and scene to scene in a smooth and joyous manner. The scenes are vivid and easy to see. I'm very glad I found your review through read and review.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me about your Christmas Eve Dilems with me and WdC members

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Review of Trfyddhdj  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I've said and written many times to concur writers block just write even when it's only the ABCs. It seems there is a great story somewhere within these letters. I look forward to reading your story. Keep writing and let your imagination free to create your word art. Send the editor on a long vacation and invite this editor back when it's time to edit.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
I felt the loss of your grandmother as suddenly hitting a well and being empty. I could see the scene with the various machines and people working to threat bobbing. Seeing and related are not one of my strengths but O know enough to understand what is happening.

For readers who might not know about the things related to sewing you could add colorful descriptions to your story. For example you could describe what a bobbin looks like and how it functions adding the color of thread someone was using and perhaps what they thought about their task.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can kinds relate because of an experience I had through a family member. She was homeless for a while and was retired. I could see you struggling to make ends meat. I hope you find an avenue by which you can procure the funds you need.

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Review of Cat  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"if I fits, I sits" The cat looks contented and seems to be enjoying the scene. The cat in a box instead of Jack in a box. It could be cramped but my cats often squeeze into tight places. Her thoughts elsewhere or there is something very interesting. The cat picture and poem go well together.

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Review of Navagation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your story I was able to imagine the scene, characters, and hear the conversation. This story reminds me of the TV shows aired during the fifties and sixties. I'm glad the father had a sense of humor. Jeff seems to be a bright and respectful child.

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Review of Million Questions  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Tragedy permeates your poem's story. I visualized the scenes based on the descriptions and events you wrote for readers to see and experience. I can not imagine how people feel when they are faced with these circumstances but I certainly felt sadness and the feeling of wishing there was some way to help.

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Review of Panic  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The characters from the asylum seemed to have a plan that didn't work out too well for Charles Ross. I was able to easily imagine the scene in detail and got to know the characters. I wonder how Charles Ross reacted when he finally realized he was going to be hit by the vehicle or if he was unaware of what was happening. Did Charles Ross have a death wish? Did the other fellow intend for Charles Ross to die?

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about three interesting characters and the demise of one of them and your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Images Of Autumn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed the rhythm of your poem and the way the words sounded as I read your poem because of the energy and excitement of the season. It felt like I was dancing with the leaves. I could see two people swiftly walking as they took in the events while heading for home.

Thank you for writing and sharing your autumn poem and word art with me and WdC members

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Review of I Don't Know  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
From what you presented here I would deduce that you have a very creative mind and this is beneficial for writers. I encourage you to set your imagination free to create and then share what you have with readers. Spelling, typing, and grammar are my strengths but writing is in my blood, so I write. Go for it and enjoy the process.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your words I saw chaos and inhumane actions. It felt as if things were seriously coming unglued and society was antisocial at best. The restless upheaval seemed to engulf me as I witnessed the dark side of humanity. Then statues stood dark and dreary This is what my mind created.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The joy of finding a bird friend brought with the challenges of getting the bird to a better place evoked emotions of hope and dread because I wasn't certain there would be a happy ending. I was able to visualize the actions and events as I heard the bird sing to the character. I felt relieved and hopeful that the bird and person would have nice wonderful days.

Thank you for writing about the bird and the adventure from the city and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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