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Review of State of Mind  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My favorite statement is:
"Happiness is a state of mind."
I enjoyed reading this statement because I agree with it and I realized many years ago that we have decisions we can make and depending on our choices we can be happy or unhappy, but I like being positive and happy. You clearly explained your position. Your words talked to me and I was glad to listen.

Thank you for writing and sharing your happiness word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of 3 Letters  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
When you used the word "hate" the flow of reading your poem stopped for a few seconds because it felt like a hammer blow. For me to hate someone is a very strong negative and should be used very, very carefully. I hope love and respect mend the hurt and separation if it's meant to be. Being lost in the ocean of life alone isn't a nice place to be, but I hope you will not be alone for long. Your words worked well together, the story is clear, and the scene is easy to visualize.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of High Winds  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Imagining the wind as your words described it made your poetry vivid. I live in the mountains and can relate to the windy situations. Blowing wind through the plains caused me to ponder how long it would be before the wind stopped its trip through the plains.

Thank you for writing and sharing your windy word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Indeed, we should not put off what we can do today. You reminded me of keeping things in perspective and I considered the apparent finality of death, but for me, it is moving on rather than having no life. I've thought about death periodically and your words brought me back to this again. Avoiding conversations, preparations, and other things related to death should be dealt with and you showed me these clearly with your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
For me success is to not give up and to persist until success is reached. I felt the despair of not succeeding through your words. I pictured a person struggling and then finding happiness in their success. Your poem showed me the scenes of what it was explaining.

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Review of Life in Prison  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
After I read your story I also hoped it won't be that bad, but things are challenging these days. I saw a person stuck in prison and another from the outside world conversing in your scene. It was like being there but not being seen. The conversation is realistic and the questions asked seemed to be typical as too the answers to those questions. I wonder if the questions were unusual or the answers were a cause for concern how your story would be different.

Thank you for writing and sharing your prison interview word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Camping Out  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your setting is very peaceful because of the words you chose and the way you presented the scene, I could feel relaxation and the satisfaction of being in nature and having a wonderful camping experience. I smelled the bacon cooking in my imagination and my mouth watered as those words flowed through my mind. The flickering fire and its warmth wrapped around me as did your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your camping word art with me and WdC members

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Review of The Cage  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The ending was wonderful because of the example you used. After reading the last sentence I pictured the warrior breaking out of the cage by using a pen. The scene changed to a writer using a pen in my mind.

Thank you for writing and sharing your mighty pen word art with me and WdC members

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Review of The Dragon Awake  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
For me your story is about hope in the face of being old, but also the hope for renewal. Reading your words gave me the idea about the preciousness of life. I was able to picture the dragon shedding his skin and see the new skin as it was revealed along with the renewed spirit.

Thank you for writing and sharing your dragon word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The pauses between statements ring out to me because of your description. I didn't have any bumpy or jarring words take me away from your poetic story. I visualized the scenes the mountain described and this is another silent sound because I paused to see. This story I think is meant to be read and considered slowly for best effect.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art of silent sounds with me and WdC members

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Review of Down in the Dell  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The rhythm of your poem for me was uplifting, bouncy, and happy. The words played together making the reading easy and fun. The sounds of these words smoothly guided me through your poetic story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your bouncy and happy poetic story with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a good thing to be able to use a pause button especially when something important is about to happen and you are interrupted. I can understand the need to complete a mission and also the necessity of doing chores. This conflict worked well in your story because it is a part of lifes reality. I saw the scene in my imagination. The characters are realistic. Dialogue is easy to read and is like a normal conversation between parent and child.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I'm sure she was devastated twofold because of the loss of her husband and her son because he was happily settled and would not return. I could feel the distress and emptiness through your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about loss and a life of emptiness with me and WdC members.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I'm sure she was devastated twofold because of the loss of her husband and her son because he was happily settled and would not return. I could feel the distress and emptiness through your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about loss and a life of emptiness with me and WdC members.


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Review of Housing Project  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I remember well acquiring my first house and turning it into my home. I can imagine Lenas' Joy and happiness when everything was finished. She seems to be a dedicated teacher and homeowner. The house also in my mind had a personality change from a lonely and broken place to a thriving and uplifted dwelling.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Lena and her house with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your story I imagined the scenes, and characters, and felt the emotions. My imagination does this naturally, but my heart felt sad for Jackie. This sadness slightly distracted me from the story but it should have because the character was struggling with her mother's inability to remember her birthday. I wondered if Jackie's mother was having issues with her mental abilities and what the diagnoses might be.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the importance of birthdays with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I read your poem as a matter-of-fact experience. You explained to me how life is precious no matter the circumstances and I wholeheartedly agree. You gave good advice when you mentioned seeing things from a distance. Time will allow for changes and hopefully, they will be positive changes. I'm with you on hoping for positive changes.

Thank you for writing and sharing your life lessons with me and WdC members

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Review of Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The end of your story made the biggest impact on me because I felt like excitement wrapped around me like a blanket because of the many discoveries made throughout time and space. It was a huge discovery that I felt like the description explained. Your story reminds me of Geneses.

Chosing genres for your story will help potential readers find and want to read your story. Adding genres also helps the quills learn about your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing about time and space as well as showing off your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Dawn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I thought about parents and children while reading your story and if people thought about this also we might have fewer wars. You showed how a parent will go to great lengths to protect the child. Humanity should follow this example. This to me is evident through your story. The narrative is presented realistically and the voice of reason rang true. I felt as if I was in the story and got to know the characters and their plight.

Thank you for writing about war and peace sharing your word art showing the difference and sharing it with me and WdC members.

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Review of Malachi  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Your narrative kept me reading because it felt like you were telling the story to me as we sat and enjoyed a drink. I could hear the evil laughter in my imagination, and see the action and facial expressions you described. It was as if I was in your story.
You tell a good story. I wonder what Malachi did while he experienced his emotions. For example did he clench his fists, beat on something, stomp his feet, or something else?

Showing what happens through words of action helps make the story more interesting to the reader and makes the characters more realistic and someone the reader can get to know.

Thank you for writing and sharing your leprechaun word art with me and WdC members.{/c

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I pictured ideas in words spilling out as more thoughts clamored to be released. It seems there is a tug-of-war because in some ways the need for fellowship is trying to dominate while the need for privacy is also battling for supremacy. Living does not seem to be easy when thoughts battle and drag a person into places they do not want to go. These ideas came to me as I read your poem.

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Review of My Psalm  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poetic tribute to God, I felt like peacefulness wrapped arms around me. It was calming and I focused on every word. The visuals from my imagination were like seeing a world full of God's love, holding HIs hand as He guided me, and having a very safe place with Him.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Loner  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poetetic story I felt your energy trying to escape. Your words conveyed the need to stay away from the many energies that people were carrying inside yet they reached out and troubled you. It seems you are very sensitive to energy. Right now I can't think of what this is called. Take the alone time you need and choose carefully with whom and where you spend your time because this can be helpful.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm very glad I found your words through [read and review]. I agree with you. You clearly stated the reasons for sharing with children the battle between good and evil. Certainly, children shouldn't be terrorized or terribly frightened, but a little bit of fear can help them understand the necessity for proper discernment. The scriptures teach balance and we humans should not unbalance the things of the scriptures. You wrote a very good message.

Thank you for writing and sharing your biblical word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Preparation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
When I reached the end of your poetic story I felt like it was the end and there was nothing, but I couldn't help thinking about eternal life beyond this planet Earth. You used action words that triggered emotions which kept me focused on your story. I visualized the scene and felt as if I was watching this event in person.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the end with me and WdC members

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