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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I liked the way you delivered your story because it was as if you were telling it to me while we sat and enjoyed a beverage. I was wondering if the husband had something to do with her death, but it's probably because of writing for many years that I pondered this idea. Your story is believable, the characters are realistic, and the plot is a good murder mystery.

Thank you for writing and sharing the perfect murder story with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is evident that you did thorough research. The format of this presentation makes reading the information easy and also easy to find a topic as needed for future reference. The facts seem obtainable as desired tasks for weight loss and most likely many people will be glad you wrote this information.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt the peacefulness of your words and believe your peacefulness inside shines through brightly. I agree that with God we can have inner peace. All of what you wrote is valid and understandable. I have high hopes that more people will read your story about having peace.

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Review of I Blame  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I find the blame and don't blame parts of your poem a bit confusing. It seems you don't blame for the not-good things and blame for the positive things. Did I misunderstand? I could feel the turmoil and distress within your words. The scenes of this story are visible in my mind.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed laughing at the part about the braille; I'm allowed. I know braille so can relate. I was carried from word to word and scene to scene in a smooth and joyous manner. The scenes are vivid and easy to see. I'm very glad I found your review through read and review.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me about your Christmas Eve Dilems with me and WdC members

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Review of Trfyddhdj  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I've said and written many times to concur writers block just write even when it's only the ABCs. It seems there is a great story somewhere within these letters. I look forward to reading your story. Keep writing and let your imagination free to create your word art. Send the editor on a long vacation and invite this editor back when it's time to edit.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
I felt the loss of your grandmother as suddenly hitting a well and being empty. I could see the scene with the various machines and people working to threat bobbing. Seeing and related are not one of my strengths but O know enough to understand what is happening.

For readers who might not know about the things related to sewing you could add colorful descriptions to your story. For example you could describe what a bobbin looks like and how it functions adding the color of thread someone was using and perhaps what they thought about their task.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can kinds relate because of an experience I had through a family member. She was homeless for a while and was retired. I could see you struggling to make ends meat. I hope you find an avenue by which you can procure the funds you need.

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Review of Cat  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
"if I fits, I sits" The cat looks contented and seems to be enjoying the scene. The cat in a box instead of Jack in a box. It could be cramped but my cats often squeeze into tight places. Her thoughts elsewhere or there is something very interesting. The cat picture and poem go well together.

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Review of Navagation  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your story I was able to imagine the scene, characters, and hear the conversation. This story reminds me of the TV shows aired during the fifties and sixties. I'm glad the father had a sense of humor. Jeff seems to be a bright and respectful child.

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Review of Million Questions  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Tragedy permeates your poem's story. I visualized the scenes based on the descriptions and events you wrote for readers to see and experience. I can not imagine how people feel when they are faced with these circumstances but I certainly felt sadness and the feeling of wishing there was some way to help.

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Review of Panic  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The characters from the asylum seemed to have a plan that didn't work out too well for Charles Ross. I was able to easily imagine the scene in detail and got to know the characters. I wonder how Charles Ross reacted when he finally realized he was going to be hit by the vehicle or if he was unaware of what was happening. Did Charles Ross have a death wish? Did the other fellow intend for Charles Ross to die?

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about three interesting characters and the demise of one of them and your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Images Of Autumn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed the rhythm of your poem and the way the words sounded as I read your poem because of the energy and excitement of the season. It felt like I was dancing with the leaves. I could see two people swiftly walking as they took in the events while heading for home.

Thank you for writing and sharing your autumn poem and word art with me and WdC members

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Review of I Don't Know  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
From what you presented here I would deduce that you have a very creative mind and this is beneficial for writers. I encourage you to set your imagination free to create and then share what you have with readers. Spelling, typing, and grammar are my strengths but writing is in my blood, so I write. Go for it and enjoy the process.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your words I saw chaos and inhumane actions. It felt as if things were seriously coming unglued and society was antisocial at best. The restless upheaval seemed to engulf me as I witnessed the dark side of humanity. Then statues stood dark and dreary This is what my mind created.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The joy of finding a bird friend brought with the challenges of getting the bird to a better place evoked emotions of hope and dread because I wasn't certain there would be a happy ending. I was able to visualize the actions and events as I heard the bird sing to the character. I felt relieved and hopeful that the bird and person would have nice wonderful days.

Thank you for writing about the bird and the adventure from the city and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A library saloon is an interesting concept that I had not considered before. I was able to visualize the characters doing their solitary activities, the scenes, and the library moving through the sky. I wondered what people were reading, writing, or if technology permits watching. I pondered why a library balloon existed and decided it is a mobile library or the this library is the place where people invest in stories and decide when they want to stop engaging with the stories.

Thank you for writing and sharing your library balloon word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Touched by Snow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I was able to picture in my mind the scenes of the young girl, the woman, and the old woman as they experienced the winter on the trees and surrounding areas, and the snow falling. The passage of time and life maturing is evident in your story. The emotions of the joy of life also can be felt by readers.

Thank you for writing and sharing your winter poem about life and your word art with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your words I saw the two birds dancing on a tree and also two beings dancing be they people or spirits or perhaps the imagination at work. Later in your poems story I visualized the insane chaos of a challenging world. Despite these troubles there were two people dancing twirling about the chaos as if they were in a world of their own.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about dancing and challenges with me and WdC members

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Review of Dawn of Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poem and focusing on the rhythm of the words I couldn't help thinking about writers because they have boundless imaginations and would fit this story also. I imagined seeing far and wide the expanse of imagined images and characters. Adding to this is a fantastic view of a world of fantasy the has bright colors and lively scenes. Your poem revved my imagination.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem's story with me and WdC members.

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Review of Planting Stones  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your poem's story I pictured in my mind's eye the details of the graveyard, felt the loneliness, and the quiet as it blanketed me during my mental visit. I could imagine someone standing as they observed this graveyard and wondered how and why things were as they were from his or her point of view. To be remembered is a great human need and this longing is felt most by me after reading the entirety of your poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story about being remembered and your word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of The Battle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your poem I followed you from body part to body part and saw the events clearly because of the words you chose to use to show your story. I could hear the fighting between the mind and heart as the tug of war was fought. Entering the lungs things became quiet as you focused on your breathing. When you relaxed and became calm I also felt these emotions. I'm glad the battle is over.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me about your triumph with me and WdC members.

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Review of The Dark...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
All the mannequins throughout the store and one with a shredded outfit were good visuals from your carefully chosen words. I could imagine a clothing store with night activities and then during the day everything quiet and still. The rhythm of your poem kept me reading because it was a bit different from many I've read before, thanks.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can relate to change and updating dreams because when worldly things dramatically change like it or not personal things are almost required to change at least in these recent times. I watched dreams fade, progress at a slower pace, seniors neglected and overlooked, and saw a person who longed for the good ole days as I read your poem story. I also in my imagination saw history changed and generations aimlessly looking about and there was no history to attract their attention.

Thank you for writing about the past and future dreams and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of SENRYU 0005  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the footprints because they match this poem's story nicely. I can imagine a person and dog enjoying their time together while traveling. This time can be slow and relaxing.

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