~ The Poet's Place Cafe~

Ha! You have taken an entertaining twist on writer's block and transformed it into an enlightened vision of the problem.

Technically, you have the refrains a little mixed up. The second line of the first stanza should be the first line of the second stanza, the third line of the first stanza should be the first line of the third stanza, and the fourth line of the first stanza should be the first line of the fourth stanza.

Let the creativity flow from your soul!
Dave
"The Poet's Place "