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Aug 19, 2019 at 11:49am
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Re: Re: Re: Jayne's Form of the week: Kural
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Thanks, Dave! I haven't written anything in forever.

Does it read better with 'autumn' instead of 'fall'?

crisp fall, frigid winter
glaciated psyche shivers

crisp autumn, frigid winter
glaciated psyche shivers

I'm leaning toward autumn.

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