Good Afternoon,
Nice and wise Advice
Brilliant in its own soecial way.
Great title
Substitute And Gratitude
Wonderful combination as we continue the meaningful journey called life.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
The given title is truly precious as it is
The Precious Hope
The poem is well written and nicely presented all the way.
It gives a great importance to tne word Hope.
The written lines that completed this work of art are very meaningful lines that fit the given title.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Morning,
Wow.. this is fascinating
The title is captivating
Land Of Incarnadine Earth
Nice lyrics that completed this very special Music or Song
I love the counting in a unique way
six , five, six, seven
Surely this is a lovely and lively song.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A love story or drama in four acts.
Nice and wonderful scenes that you are shsring
Nice title too
Winter Light
The love story of Elena and Arjun.
This can be a great beginning of an interesting novel or book.
Thank You for the nice read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Great reason for having the picture of a lighthouse.
I have my favorite Lighthouse too. It is part of the story that I posted in my Port
Trip To PescadorIsland
For me it is a true treasure.
I love reading this all the way.
Very enlightening.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning
Reading the given Title reminds.me of
One of my favorite High School songs with the same title
To Sir With Love
Reading between the lines makes.me sad as the story behind the poetry is very touching snd shows a life ending.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
Good Morning,
A special Writing about a special place..One of my favorite places that I love to visit and to enjoy
The Library
The writing is descriptive of this special place through wonderful words from the very beginning until the end.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on
Good Evening,
She is with God now as she keeps her in your heart.
A poem so full of love and care honoring a person very close to the heart
The poem has a good flow and the rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Special message through a well written and nicely presented
A Place For Mama
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
The title is truly captivating
KIDS
You describe fully how your true feelings about kids in connectedness with your nieces.
You love them heartily but honestly admitted that you are not comfortable with their behavior as an in driving you nuts..
Yes..this happens as children has different characteristics and not all their actions are fun to be with.
Writing your true sentiments of the situation surely can guide you of what you want and what you do not want in life and surely fhat gives you peace and harmony as you continue your great journey.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
WOW..
Fifty five years of togetherness.A great achievement...A big blessing.
A union of two hearts strengthened by time.
I admire the written lines that completed this work of art.
It is a poem with all truthfulness, honesty and sincereness.
A great poem of love
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
The message is sad and deeply emotional.
The title expresses pain and hurtful feelings .
A heart crying out for love.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A deeply wounded heart crying out all the frustrations through a well written prose and poetry.
The terrible pain of betrayal is being expressed in this well written work of art
Sad to note that this happened.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
Good Afternoon,
A very special and precious song in life and with special request on not to take it away
Understandable..
The title is interesting and very special too.
The chosen lines fit for the given title.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
Beautiful story.
Beautiful Family.
Sweet Memories and the Collage that shows such special moments spent together
The story is precious and wonderful to read as in joyful to the heart.
Unforgettable..
Thank You for sharing
My Boys
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A crime story and sad to note that the childrrn were being involved with it too so Grandma has to find a way to escape with the children...but how long the hiding can be ...The Truth always come out.
The story is full of suspense and very sad this happened.
Write on.
Good Morning
Yes.I remember the TV series Miami Vice. We also enjoyed watching that here in the Philippines.
It gives us an idea on what Mismi Florida looks like
Thank You for sharing this and for the opportunity for me to read and to recall those moments watching that nice TV series
Write On.
Good Morning ,
This is fascinating as well as Amusing.
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
I enjoy teading this poem with wit and humor.
Thank You for sharing
Railroad Crossing
Write on.
Good Morning,
WOW..
How nice is the written description that serves as a great documentary of
My First Sip Of Wine
Written dramatically with excellence.
It is faacinating to read between the lines from the start to the very end.
I enjoy reading this all the way that it also makes me think of how did it happen in my own experience of the same situation...
Well...
Truly a story worth. Sharing.
Write on
Good Morning,
Nice lines that completed this wonderful work of art and the title is interesting
Chasing Bunnies
The picture adds more meaning into this nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The lines at the last stanza are truly fascinating as it serves as a great conclusion too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title is very inspiring as we all need
Life's Lessons
As we continue our journey.
The chosen lines fit for the given title.
The last stanza makes a perfect question that needs a perfect answer.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Evening,
The title is captivating as well as intriguing
To Wander
To roam around without an aim and thsr is such a waste of timr and waste of many valuable things to do.
This is a deeply emotional piece that needs to be presented at the right time.
A sad reality.
Write on
Good Evening,
Oh..Terrible happening for a TEA Invitation.
Karl and his wrong expectations led him to his end.
The small but terrible OMA.
The story is well written and nicely presented hut with a sad ending
Yes..
The last line is very true.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
Interesting title
Happy Rice Cooker
Jntersting lines too that completed this work of art.
I wish to thank the inventor of rice cooker as it makes cooking rice so easy and perfect
Truly great invention.
Great poem too.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The Top Winner Piece
Congratulations
Well Deserving because the story has a great lesson to share about true friendship.
The caring heart. The caring soul.
This is a beautiful and very meaningful story about friendship thar is well written and nicely presented.
Great..
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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