Good Morning,
Hahaha
The emding makes me laugh asand Paul
and Joni are not aware of the real story why Mitzi and Jack got tired and sleeping together in the yard.
Truly a Precious sight.
Nice name for dogs.
An interesting story indeed.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Mom, Dad and three children.
Dad's.indifference attitude as he prefers to be in his study room always.
The first paragraph.makes me wonder..
Is he seeing the Ghost of his mother
and the last paragraph makes me think that he died and as he wakes up his ghost is at the train station.
This is how I understand
Permanent Residence...
Write on.
Good Morning
The title is very interesting that makes the poem so captivating
Perfection
A situation that is not for the human being to reach as the famous line says
Nobody's Prrfect
The poem haa a good flow and is well written all the way.
It expresses a pholosophical message through poetic words and.lines that fit for the given title.
Thank You for the read.
A poem from the depthness of the heart and soul. Expressing the great desire to enjoy a sound sleep aa the evening goes by
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
The last three lines are philosophical lines that exoresses it all.
Thank You for the read
Good Evening
A free verse poetry that explains about this special time of the year
Thanksgiving Day
All the written lines are wonderful that fit for the given title
Thanksgiving Showing You Care
A Precious poem showing and sharing a very grateful heart that is truly blessed.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
Interesting and captivating title about life
The Abyss And The Anchor
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that is insightful, enlightening as well as very inspiring.
The last two lines make a great and wonderful conclusion.
The poem has a good flow and with an Awesone rhythm and rhyme.
I am so glad to have read this.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
The given title is captivating as well as meaningful
True To Myself
Yes this three lines are powerful.lines thar leads to harmony in living
Reading between the lines makes the affirmation clear to live life with reason, with meaning and with fulfillment.
Thank You for the nice read.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that speaks of the psinful truth that is happening everywhere in the world.
The violence against women and children and the concerned people react to end it NOW.
Reading between the lines makes me sad that this is reall5 happening.
Reading The given title
Rage of Mothers
Makes me pray that such sad happening ends.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented
Love Poetry with an interesting title
I Love Now As A Man Should Love
Love without expecting anything back
A love, pure and Holy, beautiful and lovely
My favorite lines jn this poem..
Yes .
Very true..Love is the greatest and it is real.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented
Like a drama full of suspense.
The story behind the poetry expresses a busy life along with all its struggles
And the so.much cleaning and clearing as an
Aftermath
Yes..the written lines fit for the given title
Thank You for the read
Write on
Good Afternoon
Henry is so blessed to have a kind hearted person to rescue and to help him all the way while being stranded without any spare tire...
Wrong move while traveling in a desert.
The story has a great lesson to share especially those who love to travel hy car.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
Yes..tne best is yet to come.i believe
in these words as.much ss I believe the word Hope in.our every existence
This is a well written Essay that speaks of life and the strong determination to never give up on your dreams
This is written in very nice philosophical way.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
Mehrabian. The given title and I am not familiar with this word..thus my curiosity arises on what is this all about.
Reading between the lines makes me. Learn that this is a particular.place.
Magical as it is.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
The title proves on how fast time flies.as in yesterday looks different from today as ww.look.into our physical appearance.thus the given title
Love Traces Kn Senior Faces
The chosen lines fit for the given title
Very true indeed
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry is very interesting.
April fool's day and the great ending
that fits the given title
Birth Of A Superhero
And BAtman st that
This is an amazing read all the way
The poem has a good flow and is a joyful read.
I admire the creativeness.
Write on.
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Good Morning,
A crime story or an alien story.
In a coma and he can hear the conversation as a guide on whst really is happening.
I wish that he can recover and not going to die
This can be a very interesting beginning of a book basing.on it's suspense.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Morning,
An interesting and Captivating title of an Essay
The Critic
The Essay describes fully your true idrntity and the effect.of your judgment.
Well.
The world need a critic that gives positive result not destructive and damaging but for the better or for the best result.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that speaks.of the truth about a cat and a dog with the interesting title
Battle
Yes..this is happening and I have seen it with my very own eyes the fight between a dog and a cat.
Very convincing.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.it speaks of beauty and blessing and also honoring The Most High.
The three last.lines make a great conclusion that makes this work of art so inspiring and so meaningful.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Morning,
It is a Great story that gives importsnce to yesterday through
The Christmas Box
Yes such great mementos that serve aa a souvenir of the many great bonding moments at Christmas time.
This can be kept to have the future generation glimpse of the past
I think we'll leave it for them.i agree with this line.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Yes...
Merry Christmas...
Good Morning
WOW..
I love the Specisl message that this poetry brings.it speaks of the true desire of the heart.
The title is captivating as well as interesting
Truth In Action
The written lines fit for the given title
I admire the wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
You have great Haiku poetry being shared here in this Awesome Community.
WOW...
Truly wonderful concise, nice and wisw poem.
naked and alive
like a beautiful haiku
she sings to my soul.
My favorite.
Thank You for sharing your talent and
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The coldness of wintee is being expressed here in a very precious way through an interesting title
Winter Comfort
The poem is well written and nicely presented all the way.
The last line expresses it wonderfully and as the great conclusion of the story behind the poetry
Thank You for the read.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A Love Poetry with a nice title
Sweet Dreams
Lovely all the way
Another Winning Piece by a Great Poet
Admirablw chosen lines that completed this wonderful work of art.
This is well written and nicely presented poem with a good flow.
Thank You for the read
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that seeks for help on how to mend a broken heart.
The answer is.not that easy to find but surely there is a good answer to this.
The poem is intriguing and very interesting.
A search for cure of the broken heart.
A very deeply emotional piece.
Thank You for the read.
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