Good Evening,
The modern world and the great importance of
The Water Cooler
This is the great message that is being conveyed in this free verse poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
Each written lines fit for the given title .
Thank You for sharing
this nicely presented poetry.
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Good Evening,
A biographical Essay that is about buying and owning a car...brand new or used.well..whstever is affordable with the budget and it serves its purpose..then it is fine..and all will be well
Due to wear and tear..one has to buy another one as need arises and you and your family are so blessed to do it and to have it .
Thank You for sharing a great experience.
Thank You for the read too.
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Good Evening,
A Quatern form of poetry.
Thank You for the information Note that makes me admire more of this poem on April fool's day .
Yes. I was fooled many times in my High School days but the amusing and funny way so I laughed it off. Hahaha
This one is courageous with strong determination on never to be fooled.
Brilliant..
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Good Afternoon,
The given title makes me very curious to know what is this story about .
One Angry Mother
One of the Adventures of Captain Hook and this one is showing his mean heart to a girl and good that she's being protected by the tree who acted as the mother.
I believe that Captain Hook learned a great lesson here
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
Good thinking poetry but you need to think twice before making any decision as you continue your journey.
A poem that sounds like a tongue twister to me.
I think it is very nice to think that our mind is still thinking
That is because to think is the source of Power.
Fascinating and Amusing poetry.
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Good Afternoon,
The stages of Life is being expressed here in this well written free verse poetry.
The kids with their toys and surely they enjoy but as time passes by eventually the toys will be placed in the attic as storage.
The poem has a good flow and a nice rhythm and rhyme.
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The Box Of Toys
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Good Afternoon,
The story behind the poetry described a philosophical message through poetic words and lines of this work of art,
Sad to note as one experience the great pain of betrayal from someone you love and the pain lingers.
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that expresses the comparison of the mind to the forest..
Dark and Scary.
Then the great words ===
Find your voice
Or your light
For it may be your escape
And through that guidance
Maybe the exit of the forest..
These lines are.my favorite lines thar expresses hope.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
That Night
An unforgettable night and such a night to gain an experience to test your strength against temptation that may lead to unending sorrow.
A story so believable as men the not sincere ones will truly test you if you take the bait.
The last two lines explained it too well .
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that expresses a very importsnt and interesting topic
Forgotten Values
Yes..one has to keep and practice those preciois values that guides for a better today and a wonderful tomorrow.
There is a great lesson being shared here in this work of art.
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Good Morning,
A nice, concise and wise.
Haiku poetry.
The nice picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
I admire the three lines that described the situation as well as the present condition of the msin character of the story behind the Haiku poetry.
Surrounded by books..
That is great
I wish it's me.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
A well written tribute to a Hero, a soldier who served the Motherland and did such great sacrifices
The poem is meaningful and very touching as it tells a story of a great man through well written poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
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For the soldier...
I Salute You.
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Good Morning,
A poem or a song this. Is well written and nicely presented.
If this is a song I Wonder what the tinr is.
.
A rock.or a.pop somg.
Possibly.
It speaks.of the true desire of the heart
I dream of a better world
Where we are all equal
Where we don't need to twist reason.
These three lines are my favorite lines.
They make sense
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning ,
A very inspiring title of a very wonderful poetry thatshares a message of positive thinking.
Yes.. the poem is admirable and gives Much encouragement that strentghens the heart aa to face life with great confidence.
Very true a confident heart is a winning heart.
Thank you for sharing.
Good Morning,
This is a free verse poetry that expresses about life's not always a bed of roses.
Challenges, fears, worries or anxieties occur and all we need is strength to live and to find and make ways to survive them all.
This is how I understand this poem that is philosophical in its own way.
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Good Evening,
The story behind this philosophical
Message poetry is very interesting to me,
It expresses Yesterday, Today and
Tomorrow in a nice and wise poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Yes..the man made the right decision at the end.
Thank you so much for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Evening,
This is a very special writing that shares a very precious information, knowledge and great lesson in livint life with such awareness and great expectatio
It also shares a strong belief in The Most High as a great source of Wonderful and Great blessings of guidance, protection and healing.
And that we need one another.
Brilliant and unforgettable.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
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Good Afternoon,
Another great poem from a brilliant poet with great faith in his heart.
The given title expresses Power so Mighty.
This poem reminds me of a meaningful lyrics of one of my favorite gospel songs.
God makes a way when there seems to be no way..
The last line said it all
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented Essay sharing a very important topic that is a part of old age
Dementia
With your mother's age of 96 I am not surprise to know that she has Dementia.
My 97 year old mother too.
A sad reality
Reading the last five lines makes me admire your great and wise thinking about it.
And I agree with You.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Good Afternoon,
A very inspiring piece.
A free verse poetry of great awareness of what is going on with life.
It expresses great concern and the expectation of helping others be with all sincerity.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Highly impressive
Everybody Everywhere
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Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that expresses
Acceptance and by doing so you gain peace and happiness as well as harmony of living.
The poem has a good flow and is nicely written and nicely prsented all the way.
I enjoy reading this.
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that expresses the facts of life and all its essence..
The given title is captivating as everyday in our lives decisions has to be made and we need to see to it that such decisions give positive results or we suffer the consequence.
This writing is very truthful and honest.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read
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Good Afternoon,
A new form of Japanese poetry that I learned today
Kanshi Poetry form
The given title is captivating
My Road
The picture adds more meaning into this wonderful work of art
.
The message exoresess the essence of life in a philosophical way.
The road of life may be crooked or straight Yet we will try to do our best and enjoy life to ita fullest.
Great talent.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A very fascinating as well as inspiring title of a free verse poetry with a good flow
Frienda Are My Home
You are greatly blessed as you have true friends that serves as the true treaaures of the heart.
I am so happy for you
Wonderful lines that completed this Great work of art.
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Good Afternoon,
A nicely and
wisely written about this very special Hindu festival popularly known as
Diwali Festival
The poem is wonderful in its own precious way .
The detailed information and ecplanation below tbe poetry makes your readers admire more of thix festival.
Thank You for the great read
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