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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Good Afternoon,
A very inspiring song address to the people close to your heart to be sing a song of joy as you depart in this world of the look living.
An affirmation that all is well and all will be well in Paradise.
Precious Message.
Thank You for the read.
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Review of --WAR ZONED OUT--  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Afternoon
An essay about the world present peace and order situation specifically about Ukrain and Russia's ongoing war.
This is written by a USAF veteran whom I believe is knowledgeable about this situation or condition.
I wish this war will be over soonest so the people may end such great sufferings in their lives..meaning the people from Ukraine.
Thank You for the read
Write on
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A very inspiring song with wonderful lyrics and a great 8
Embracing The Will Of God
A free verse poetry or a special lyrics of a song of BB faith. Like a Gospel song to me.
Beautiful and Wonderful.
I am ao glas to have read this.
I wonder what the tune is.
Surely it is nice.
Write on
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,.
A very interesting painting and Volla wanted to buy but find it by expensive
Yes.. some paintings are truly very expensive.
This one the reason is justifiable.
Then.. reading the last part oh..
The painting is a mysterious work of art.
I wish to buy it..
Thank You for sharing.
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Review of Australia Day  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A nicely written importsnt part of history of a very famous country, Australia.
It speaks of Captain Arthur Phillip and how he discovered the place.
The last two lines are. Intriguing and interesting lines.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Write on.
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Review of Sound of Silence  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Reading the given title it reminds me of the famous song of Simon and Garfunkel with the same title and actually one of my favorite songs
Sound Of Silence
Reading between the lines I must say this is a portry that expresses the true feelings of the heart in the silence of your soul.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.

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Review of Reverie  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Yes..I agree with this line,
It wasn't all that important.
A short story well written and nicely presented.

John has a hearing problem so it is undestandable if he cannot digest the conversation or dialogue of the play so well.
Yes. what matters most is the harmonious daily livihg for both of you.
Nice story.
Write on.
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Review of The Long Goodbye  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A deeply emotional piece that is well written and nicely presented.
A free verse poetry that has a good flow.
This sounds like a ballad with a lonely tune as it really hurts to say goodbye.
The poem has a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
God loves both of you so much that after a very long period of time you keep in touch with each other again.
Truly two precious souls.
This letter is very touching and very special.
Nostalgic..as in sweet I'm memories reliving each moment recalling the past.

True friendship is the great message in this writing. It proves that a friend is a true treasure of the heart.
A great read.
Write on.
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Review of Still, We Dream  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
I love the blue letters that completed this wonderful work of art.
The title is very meaningful
Still, We Dream
Inspiring lines all the way as in the heart speaks
Wonderful message that you are conveying here.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Best regards.
God Bless...
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A very interesting title
Oh. Oh. My Name It Johnny O
It is your name so it is very be special and precious too.
A singer..
A songwriter

A poet
An Author
The great totality..
This is surely a lovely song with a lively tune.
I admire the creativeness.
Write on.
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Review of Grief.  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
An explanation and a description of Grief added with Acrostic poems and be all are well written and nicely presented
A brilliant way of explaining this feeling called Grief..
Each writing is wonderful and special and all are highly impressive.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review of Pumpkin Soup  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Oh..the missing Ken
And the presence of Pumpkin Soup..
Horrible to note that possibly he was abducted by one of the witches.

A Halloween story behind the poetry and it is bc scary.
How to make Ken appears again..
That is the biggest question that needs an answer.
I admire the creativeness.
Write on.
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Review of Longing  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A nicely written Prose or Essay and it is great to read as well as to enjoy.
The sun , the moon and the stars... The heavenly bodies and their connectedness in our life is a great reflection of existence and.longings for answers to the many questions at hand.
This is a fascinating work of art.
Thank You for the read
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Review of Things Change  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening
Brilliant Tina.

A very inspiring short story written by my favorite short storyteller
Jacky
I truly admire your talent as I enjoy reading it one by one
This is another beautiful story and is highly impressive as usual.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A wolf story.
This is full of suspense as in fighting for life ===
This is a terrible happening. Who can help him.. What needs to be done for survival.
This can be an interesting beginning of a book in the making.
As in write on for more chapters until the very end.
Thank you for sharing.
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Review of Time to Go Away  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Intriguing title
Time To Go Away
A free verse poetry that expresses a philosophical message about the world and its people.
It speaks of the unpleasant people with unpleasant deeds which truly are existing in this world.
A sad reality.
Thank You for the read.
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Review of Historic Hometown  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A very nicely written and nicely presented Essay with an interesting title
Historic Hometown
Thank You for bringing me to your hometown in
Edmonton Oklahoma
You are a writer with a caring and thoughtful heart and very observant with so much concern to the environment that surrounds you.
I am so glad to have read this.Thank You for sharing.
Write on
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Review of Cruel Perfection  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
An interesting and Captivating title of a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry
Cruel Protection
The poem has a wonderful rhythm and rhyme and with a good flow.
It speaks of the truth and nothing but the truth that nobody is perfect.
The last two lines make a wise conclusion.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Thank You for bringing me to the country of the Rising Sun popularly known as Japan through nicely written and nicely presented poems.
A very talented poet.
Beautiful and meanungful poems showcasing this wonderful country.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Review of Blue Rose  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A Haiku Poetry.
It is about a
BLUE ROSE
Three precious lines especially written for this beautiful flower.
Rose.. the queen of flowers.
Actually I have never seen a blue rose and I wish tp see it, touch and smell it too.

Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry about faith

The connection between The Most High and the human race.
With a special mention of the LORD's dying on the cross to save us from sins.
A poem that is well written and nicely presented..
Sacred too.
Thank You for sharing
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening
Yea they are all adorable.
Nice names too.
I have 5 cats too.
Father Cat
Mother Cat
Long
Short
Gold
The three are kittens and are all adorable too.
Cats are brilliant pets and manipulative too.
Thank You for sharing
Ma Kat and Kittens

Truly precious
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Review of I Have a Hero  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening
,
The well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that seems like a life's heavy drama.
Sentimental, touching and meaningful .
The given title fits for the chosen lines.
The last stanza said it all
Thank You for sharing and. For the read
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Review of With Great Thanks  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon
A great testimony on how grateful your heart as being a part.of this Awesome community of Writing. Com.
After the storm..here comes the Sunshine in your life making you feel.motivated to live life to its fullest and with.meanjng and fulfillment. Along with a new friend you met and enjoy his individuality is a great blessing that gives you Hope and a firm belief that life is worthliving.
Keep loving yourself so you can love others whokehrartedly too is the awesome message.in this wonderful read.
Thank You for sharing
With Great Thanks.
God Bless You Always.
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