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Review of Echo Verse  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very interesting and Captivating title of a free verse poetry
Echo
The one word serves as the echo of the questioning soul
Well said ...
This is nice and wonderful thoughts that share a great message.
I admire each line that completed this work of art.
Write on.
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Review of Pets  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Yes.. Pets.need people.
People need pets.Very true.
I agree.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art that is well written and nicely presented.
I have my own Pets too and they make me happy.
Each line fits for the given title and this is so full 9f Life...
Wonderful life.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Review of Serenity  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Very nice titie.
Very nice story.
The busy coffee shop.
The empty coffee cup ..the pencil that keeps drawing..then the perfect object to draw..
The story with a good flow.
Yes..Whererver you are.. creativeness goes with you and here comes the great discovery of doing something precious
even in the busiest of places.
Great talent.
Thank You for sharing
Serenity
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A Biographical Essay thar shsres an unpleasant experience snd the fighting spirit to endure.

This is well written and nicely
presented short story.







Yes I agree with the last lines are surely very inspiring.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Review of Alphabet Party  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening
,
This is a very interesting work of art as in ABCEDARIAN Poetry and this one is inverted...from the last letter of the alphabet until the very first
ABC..
Reading between the lines this is truly an
Alphabet Party
It is indeed Fun to read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,,
A long and lasting love.
John truly cannot let go.
Good that he has a very understanding wife.
Very sad when one cannot let go of the past and still writing.hundreds of letters to her .
This is a well written and nicely presented
Where Oh Where
Thank You for sharing.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
True to its given title the poem expresses great beauty as being described in the lines that completed this work of art.
Nice picture that adds more meaning into this work of art
Each line is wonderful..the four lines indeed ..
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A beautiful story that.makes me cry
Jeffrey then and now remains the loving, reponsible and lovable son that every parent be proud of
I am so happy for you to be blessed fully with a loving husband and a highly admirable son
Very touching... Very meaningful..
Very nice
That What Sons Are For
Marvelous read.
Thank You for sharing
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Good Afternoon,
A tribute to this special Celebration of this Awesome Community we all.love,
Writing. Com.
A HAIKU poetry that expresses the Poet's grateful heart as
On This Occasion Of A Birthday
24 Years
Thank You for sharing a nice, concise and wise HAIKU poetry.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A very beautiful love story through a nicely written and nicely presented Poetry with a very interesting and captivating title
She Came To Me In A Dream
Truly an Awesome Dream that eventually becomes a Reality
Greater than Great love story.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Wow.
Tom is having the great experience of his life by meeting the Oracle and knowing his future.
Truly Amazing.
The story has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for sharing
The Wandering Child
Write on.
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Review of 09/02/12  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
The very special date as a title for this nicely written free verse poetry
September 02, 2012
Twelve years ago..
The lines expresses a lovely place that surrounds the main character of this poem
Baby Kitty
A poem so full.of.love and be special care.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on
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Review of The Dream  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A Fish...so Addie is a Fish.
Fish dreams too.
Probably
.
Hahaha
Very interesting and amusing ending about
The Dream
The story is Very convincing then the twist and turn at the last part.
Something different.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
350 pounders. Oh..my ..
Truly a good pair..
The given title fits for the written
lines of this very interesting short love story.
As in say it with doughnuts and Love begins.
Hahaha
Yes..I enjoy reading this
Love At First Bite
And more bites . haha
Amusing and Fascinating.
Write on
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A very special Summer to remember. It is about Mother and the Sweet Memories live forever.
A Prose so full of love and care for a mother dearest.

This is well written and nicely presented and very inspiring.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Review of The Oven Incident  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning
I love and enjoy reading your short stories.
They are all so realistic as a product of a great mind.
This one is lovely too.
From the oven to be fixed then a happy ending love story.
You are so blessed with talent in writing.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Review of Awake At Night  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Sleepless night and the.mind is wandering with some fearful thoughts.
This is how I understand is the message of this well written work of art.
Each line fits for the given title.

Yes..this happens and the best thing to do is to Pray and seek God's guidance and protection and you can sleep and wakes up tomorrow feel refreshed.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Going to the Mall  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Beautiful Story from the very beginning until the very end.
Yes... Nice and wise decision to buy it.
Sweet memories and all the love with it.
The old familiar place and Janet has a very good memory and a very loving heart.
Thank You for sharing
Going To The Mall
Write on.
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Review of The Shadow Hunter  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry is full of drama as it expresses the ebb and flow of life.
This is well written in philosophical all the way.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Thank You for sharing
The Shadow Hunter and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of In Praise of Dawn  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A beautiful poem about Dawn.
yes.the cold touch of dawn is refreshing and comforting.
I admire the wonderful lines that completed this work of art.
The highlighted words make this lovely poem more meaningful.
Thank You for sharing
In Praise Of Dawn
Writw on
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Review of In my dream...  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A nice title of a free verse poetry with a good flow
In My Dream
You are blessed to experience this wonderful dream and you described the dream so vivid and so well through pietic words and lines.
A dream that seems so real and is so full of life.
Thank you for sharing and for the read.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A deeply emotional piece that is being expressed in this Acrostic poetry.
A very painful experience in a love relationship that gives you a broken heart.
The poem is of hatred to plan a revenge.
A very sad reality.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Review of Blackberry  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A wonderful and delightful presentation of a free verse poetry about this Blackberry..
The.picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Descriptive in a very nice way.
It is a Great poem and I can vividly picture this very special and precious poem.that gives importsnce of this blackberry .
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
The given title is the question from the innermost soul...
Will I Be Remembered
The Poem also expresses your love for your dearest cat and the love of weekends.
My favorite line
Every morning I am greeter with true love...
I am happy for you..
You are truly blessed.
And in answer to the given question in the given title. Is
BIG YES..
You will surely be remembered.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review of A Writer's Issue  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A very interesting and Captivating title that speaks of a Writer and this emphasizes more about a Writer's block.
The lines are fit for the given title and is very truthful and with all honesty.
I admire the talent and Thank You sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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