Good Afternoon,
The given title is interesting as well as Captivating..
Wishful Thinking
The chosen lines fit for the given title..and oh so true
My favorite lines
Oh .wishful thinking
How I'm so done with you
Brilliant conclusion as well as a wise decision
Thank You for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting..
Good Afternoon,
And all is right indeed...
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
I love the wonderful title
Stars On Winter's Night
Admirable lines that completed this work of art all the way.
The rhythm and rhyme is Awesome.
Truly magical
I enjoy reading this
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Morning,
Reading the given title makes me wonder who this Fred is..
I read three more stanza..
The mother was mentioned
Tne father was mentioned
The kitty was mentioned
I am still wondering who fred is
Then teading the last stanza
I finally got an answer
and Fred , the teddy bear..
A brilliant poet
You let your readers curiousity arises.
Wonderful poetry all the way
Thank You for the Great read.
Write on..
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting title about women and about men too
Enchanting Women
The first stanza is about the women that the title speaks about
As the poem continues it speaks of men too and the lines about tbem are truthful and honest all the way
Thank You for the read
Good Afternoon,
A very precious and special Christmas Acrostic Poetry
A nostalgic
Christmas Memories
This is well written and nicely presented all the way..
Sweet memories of this Holiday are always the great treasures of the heart.
I love this poem.
Adorably adorable.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
Interesting title...captivating aa well as intriguing
The Dream Catcher
The first line is very prolific
100 dreams woven into its strings
Yes so many dreams,so many to be reached inspite of the mistakes along the way.
Yes..I believe in dreams and as I read between the.lines it inspire me more and more to keep on dreaming like the great message of this wonderful work of art.
Thank You for the worthwhile read
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Fascinating title of a free verse poetry thar is well written and nicely presented
The wonderful picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Living in a country composed of more than seven thousand islands ..reading the title.makes.me very curious to know what is this all about.
Yes .the title fits for the writteh lines
A comforting mood for my thoughts to grow..
My favorite line in this Awesome poetry.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
I admire the wonderful presentation of this well written free vsrse poetry.
The title is wonderful too
Connected
Reading between the lines i can truly see the significant connectedness.
A leaf dies.
but the tree goes on.
My favorite lines and the wonderful Conclusion of the atory behind the poetry.
Write on.
Good Morning
Yes..the World needs this.
Peace on Earth
Everyone needs it
Peace of mind
The given titlr is also serving its purpose.
The poem has a good flow.
The written lines are brilliant.
The presentation is awesome.
A highly impressive work of art.
I am so glad to have read this
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Hahaha
Opps..
This exclamation word matters.
A short poem dedicated to the modern Apps in this computerized generation.
FB and Twitter philosophers and it also.includes the popular wisdom
How about YouTube and the TikTok..
Not included...hahaha
Fascinating..
I admire the lines that completed this work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title is interesting and meaningful as in the Search thst is
Purposeful
Finding The Awe
The story behinf the poetry is full.of suspense.
Until I tripped...
This line serves as a beginning.of facing life's realities.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
The title is captivating as well as intriguing..
Not Sure Yet
This is a well written and nicely presented ESSAY.
It speaks freely of ehat you think of life and what you truly believe in life.
This sounds like a very interesting Prose to me.
Womderful as it is as you are entitled to ypur innermost honest opinion.
The last three lines serve as a great conclusion that said it all.
Write on
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that speaks of facts of life and its ending.
Very true..we are all going to depart in this world of the living and it is being expressed through poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Thank You for sharing
And We Depart
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that expresses an rexplanation about the Biblical
Malachi...
There are some questions here and the Poem has a good flow and it is grear to know some facts about the Holy Bible
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Nice and meaningful titie of a free verse poetry
Don't Give Up On You
The written lines fit for rhe given title of this work of art.
A well written and nicely presented poem that shares a great advice and wisdom.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Truly a dilemma.
The story behind the poetry reminds me of a beautiful song lyrics with a.lovely tune...
Torn between two lovers
Feeling like a fool
Loving both of you
Is breaking out the rule.
Yes..she has to choose one
And make a firm decision.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
I love the given title
Healing Together
The poem is wonderful and Precious all the way.
It expresses a caring heart and a beautiful soul.
The message is truthful and powerful The WRITTEH lines fit for the gives title.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Evening,
The given title is one of my favorite colors ..GREEN
Nice words and lines that completed this work of art
The poem is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Yes..The color green is the color of.life.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A very nice and inspiring title of a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
A Promise A Sense Or Ageless Duty
The written lines fit for the given title.
Tbe poem has an wonderful rhythm and rhyme
Beautiful as it is
Thank You for sharing and for the read
Good Afternoon,
A very eerie situation or weird idea that Eliza is telling Cammy.
That they are being followed and she can smell them.
Hmmm
That is really something and she persisted
The ordering of Pizza..
Great idea..
But I agree with the last line
Or do they even eat pizza..
Thank You for sharing
Good Afternoon,
Wow..
Interesting title
Dream Poem
Dach line has a corresponding explanation or specisl connectedness.
A very well.orgsnized poet.
Highly impressive.as well as highly admirable.
Something thar serves as a great example.
Thank you for sharing this
Good Afternoon,
There is a very special and precious message in this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that is Biblically inspired.
The title is also based on Biblical words..
The Wages Of Sin Is Death
Truly a meaningful reminder.
Thank You for the worthwhile read
Good Afternoon,
I love cats and I admire this lovely picture
This looks like our cat Gold who loves to eat plain rice mixed with hot and spicy sardines and after eating he goes to sleep for hours and when he wakes ip he stays at the garden and enjoys watching the butterflies.
Thank You for sharing and for enjoying This lovely picture
Good Afternoon,
Nice title of a poem
The Way
Nice lines that completed this free verse poetry that is truly showing the way to express the message of the given title.
each.line is.precious.
Each.line is important.
Each line fits for the given title
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A short story that is in connection with Election wherein America is very busy about this event nowadays.
I am happy for Elinor who finds a way of finishing her sewing project while while Mary is busy with this election activities.
The story is true and convincing.
And yes..one has to vote of course.
Thank You for the read
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