Good Afternoon,
The title is inspiring as the word means happiness and life which is the given title in this work of art
SUNSHINE
As the song goes
You make.me happy
When skies are gray
That is how great and precious the sunshine is to me
Wonderful lines that completed this precious poem.
Thank You for the read.
Write.on.
Good Afternoon,
The title is very meaningful
My Souls Song
Inspiring and full of love
Nice and wise words that completed this work of art.
IT is wonderful to know thsr in life there is also a soul song.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for the nice read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
This is lively and lovely.
Interesting and Captivating title
LIFE
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented all the way.
The written lines clearly express life
and all its essenc3.
Highly impressive work of art.
Thank You for the worthwhile read
Write on
Good Afternoon,
The Pair
as in perfect combinstion thar serves as a great and wonderful title of this nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry.I admire each line that completed this poem with a good flow
Fascinating as it is.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Beautiful free verse poetry.
Beautiful title too
Love Is Here To Stay
A great affirmation of two hearts through a well written and nicely presented work of art.
The written lines fit for the given title..
The nice picture of a Heart adds.more meaning into this poem.
Wonderful as it is.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Very interesting Royal typewriter story behind the poetry
Surely itdoes not give a good result as letter E is missing so there is a problem in spelling
Well .better buy a new one
Hahahaha
The poem has a good flow and is well written
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
The calmness of Ian's spirit was interrupted uour frustrating gestures and actions like heavy dramatic role.
Possibly talk it over whatever the differences to gain a harmonious togetherness and clearing the Air too.
Oh
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
A nice way to describe a delicious and very refreshing drink through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
LEMONADE
Truly a delightful drink as one sits by the garden in a very sunny day.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
An invitation to one and all who is interested in knowing a very special soul with a very special characteristic...
Very interesting introduction..
Very intriguing too that makes one's curiosity arises.
This is how I understand this
So That Something Is Here
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Prose that touches life of yesterday, today and a possible tomorrow...
It expresses a philosophical message of oneself's very own existence.
The title fits for the written lines
Tidbits Of Experience
I'll take my chances on the far outside edges
My favorite line in this work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Morning,
An interesting as well as an intriguing title of a free verse poetry
Shake It Off
The poem expresses a philosophical message as in to turn off the negativity of living
This is how I understand this well presented work of art
Good Evening
The suit that suits.
The poem is wonderful as in it is a nice picture that adds more meaning into this work of art with a fashionable title
That Suits Me
I can vividly picture a suit with elegance and style
A beige or a green both looks wonderful indeed
I admire the creativeness.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A poem so full.of love and honor to a dearest Mother.
Reading between the lines makes me feel like singing the words as a beautiful lyrics of a ballad with a lovely tune
Each line is precious and pure with great dedication
You are so blessed to have the best mother dearest.
Awesome all the way .
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A three line poetry that sounds.like a Haiku to.me.
It is about the fourth Monty of the Year..
APRIL
Springtime in your country.
I believe it is a wonderful season although I nevee experience it living in the tropical Philippines
Three joyful lines that completed this work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Evening,
The importance of a comb to men and women alike for good grooming.
And here is a free verse poetry about a comb
The lines fit for the given title and it exoresses a philosophical message.
A poem that is well written and nicely presented.
Write on
Good Evening,
A very important day to remember
Friday Afternoon
Where one can enjoy and live life to its fullest
Along with the kittens
Yes..
Why not..
I love it that way too
This is a very interesting work of art so full of life.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
Wow.. A first major purchase and there's a treasure in the carpet
Amazing
What a blessing.
Zak and Jon are very lucky to own this
House Of Surprises
Great story that is so full of excitement and joy.
I wish to have a house like this too.
Thank You for the wonderful read.
Good Afternoon
Possibly Anna was hallucinating at the time she thought she saw a Big Stsr.
Good that she woke up and was btought in the hospital.
The story has a good flow and is well written.
The given title is a part of Anna's dream.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented Prose with a very captivsting title
Illuminatihg The Unknown
This clarifies two kinds of darkness that you give importance as a part of your wonderful existence.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
A great read.
Good Afternoon,
Interesting short story with a great title
The Surprise
Anna, the star of the story and did something unforgettable and very specisl.
Truly a surpise.
I enjoy reading this beautiful story.
A wholesome family story thst is full.of excitement and fun
Thank You for sharing and for the read Great...
Good Afternoon,
A well written Poetry that is full.of.love and life.
The message is especially addressed to someone special in your heart and life.
With a truthful title
Often
Thinking about this person with your
Peace , love and smile.
This is very inspiring.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The writing of a sentimental journey but with Hope for a better and brighter tomorrow.
Chsrge everything to experience and move on with life as in Let Go, let live, let love..let God.
There is always a good reason for everything.
Now is the timr to smile..to dream BIG and realize those dreams.
Smile and soar like an eagle.Writimg all the hurt and pain is a way of releasing them all and healing begins.
All is well and all will be well for you.
Thank You for sharing
The Last Page Of My Heart
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
An Abcedarius Poetry based on the
Alphabet
Twenty six line poetry.
WOW..
This is wonderful ..the presentation is great and is well written all the way.
A Winning Piece
Congratulations
A brilliant and knowledgeable poet.
This is highly impressive
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon
The place where we laid to rest is the title of this well written and nicely presented
free verse poetry
At The Grave
This is where we visit and offer prayers for our dearly departed
The poem has a good flow and it fits for the chosen lines
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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