Good Morning,
The picture adds more meaning into this nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry that expresses great faith all the way.
Great title that is very meaningful
Don't Stop Believing
This sounds like a Gospel song to me.
I admire the creativeness.
Write on.
Good Evening,
And the music played..
This is lovely and lively all the way as it describes the given title in a nice and wise way..
Blues River Tuning
A meaningful and well written Prose or Essay.
It is full.of life in its harmonious rhythm.
I enjoy reading this.
Write on
Good Evening,
I love the given title simply because I love life.
Wonderful poem and it is.meaningful as well as inspiring and joyful.
Reading between the lines makes me firmly believe that truly life is worthliving.
With Chocolates..
It is great...
Hahaha
I love this poem all the way.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry with a very meaningful and Captivating title
A Valiant Goal
A Fantasy Credit Secured
Fascinating lines that completed this work of art.
The first stanza shares an intriguing beginning of a story behind the poetry.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
A Love poetry that sounds like a
lovely ballad to me.Full.of longings and speaks of the true desire of the heart.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
A poem in the woman's point of view addressed to a handsome man.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
This is Brilliant writing.
Fantasy genre.
This can be a wonderful Preface of an interesting book or Novel having
Nikki as the main character.
Fascinating indeed and interesting.
I admire the storyline.
Great talent.
Good luck for.more pages and more chapters.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A nicely written poetry more than twenty in years ago.
As true treasure.
The title is fascinating
Life Dreams
Yes.. This is full of life's realities.
I admire each precious line that
completed this work of art.
Thank You for sharing
And for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A well written poetry that affirms great faith to The Most High with His Mighty Protection from evil.
The poem has a good flow and is so very Powerful.
A First Prize Winner
Congratulations
Truly impressive.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Afternoon
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry in honor of a dearest mother.
A poem full of love and reminiscing sweet memories with her along with her lovely garden full.of different i
Lovely flowers
The nice picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for sharing
Her Crooked Smile
Write on.
Good Morning,
Written for a prompt..
The given title speaks of the ability to write, even in darkness.
This is a very special and precious gift.
Reading between the lines makes me understand fully why such title was given.
The last two lines that serve as the conclusion are my favorite lines.
The darkness may still follow me
Creative light will set me free.
A philosophical way.
Thank You for sharing
Where There Is Darkness, There I Write
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The story shares a great lesson both for parents as well as for children.
Young aa you are and full of dreams must be supported by parents to have such dreams be realized. In this story, the possible reason was that your Dad was surprised to know what you truly want to do with your life.
The possible answer to this is Communication GAP .. Surely he was not aware of what was going.on with your school activities. In a family, Open communication is a must and usually topics like this can be brought up during Family meals together .
In the last part of the story, your Dad realized how important
The Music Dream
to you and for You and that is the gift of love for each other.
The story is very touching as the same situation is happening to others too.
Follow your dreams and honor your parents for all the good things they have done for you.
Fiction or non fiction...
I pray for your success and happiness.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The poem that serves as a vision and it came along with poetic thoughts from the heart and soul
It is full of life and shares great observations.
I admire this highly impressive work of art.
Write on.
That's it.
I enjoy reading this Essay straight from the heart.
It speaks honestly of how you are spending wisely and nicely your precious time.
Yes.. That's it.. elevates the mind, heightens gladness and nurtures the creative act
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
God Bless.
Good Evening,
Yes . I agree with All my heart and soul.
Nothing compares with the beauty of the sea.
Nothing compares to with her being angry.
The given title is captivating and the written lines of this nicely presented poetry fit for the given title.
The rhythm and rhyme is great.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Grandpa Dave is an effective story teller as it resulted to an unforgettable happening of a true
Ghost Story.
I can imagine the reaction of the grandchildren and the whole family as well.
The venue is.perfect and conducive to this happening.
À very convincing ghost story that gives my reading time full focused and full attention.
I believe in Ghost stories Because
I experienced it myself with my own eyes.. making the famous words possible To See Is To Believe..
Brilliant Author
Thank You for the worthwhile read
Write on
Good Evening,
The given title is wonderful and great
The First Of These Is Love
The written lines are inspiring and so full of meaning.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Wise questions...
Nice answers..
Truly a highly impressive work of art.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
The given title is expressing a philosophical message
A Swan Dive
The picture adds more meaning into this nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry
A LOVE poem
The story behind the poetry is very sad as in sentimental like a heavy drama full.of assorted genre episodes.
I highly admire your great talent.of writing poetry.
Thank You for the read
Good Evening
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that expresses a health problem called dystonia.
The Poem describes it clearly and it is a sad reality.
I also have a share of health problem called Neuralgia and the never ending pain is excruciating.
Reading the lines at the last stanza gives me more than enough reason to smile and live the remaining time of my life with meaning, with reason and with fulfillment
You are an inspiration.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
WOW as in WOW...
Honestly this one of the best Love Stories that I read in this Awesome Community.
The title is interesting and intriguing.
Cat Girl
Splendid as in Remarkable and Unforgettable...
Great creativeness.
I can vividly picture what was going on as I gave full focus reading between the lines
I am truly impressed.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on
Good Evening,
Interesting and Great title of a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that has a good flow..
The Sacrifice of A Lamb
The lines fit for the given title.A deeply emotional piece.
Something to think over.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A very meaningful title for a very
meaningful poetry
My Mind
The poem exptesses a.message on what is in the mind that needs to be released the soonest the best.
The mind speaks of Freedom and all its essence through well written poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Absorbing..and insightful..
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
The given title is interesting as well as Captivating..
Wishful Thinking
The chosen lines fit for the given title..and oh so true
My favorite lines
Oh .wishful thinking
How I'm so done with you
Brilliant conclusion as well as a wise decision
Thank You for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting..
Good Afternoon,
And all is right indeed...
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
I love the wonderful title
Stars On Winter's Night
Admirable lines that completed this work of art all the way.
The rhythm and rhyme is Awesome.
Truly magical
I enjoy reading this
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Morning,
Reading the given title makes me wonder who this Fred is..
I read three more stanza..
The mother was mentioned
Tne father was mentioned
The kitty was mentioned
I am still wondering who fred is
Then teading the last stanza
I finally got an answer
and Fred , the teddy bear..
A brilliant poet
You let your readers curiousity arises.
Wonderful poetry all the way
Thank You for the Great read.
Write on..
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting title about women and about men too
Enchanting Women
The first stanza is about the women that the title speaks about
As the poem continues it speaks of men too and the lines about tbem are truthful and honest all the way
Thank You for the read
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