Good Morning,
Interesting story..
Fantasy and it is well written all the way.
Full.of suspense.
These can be a beginning.of a Marvelous novel or book.
With the two main characters they can enjoy exploring as they continue their
FLIGHT
of unforgettable adventures.
Brilliant...
Write on
Good Morning,
A wonderful work of art through a free verse poery with a good flow.
It gives a very special.mention to the windows of the soul
The Eyes and this poem is entitled
Your Eyes
Describing the eyes of someone very close to your heart
Beautiful poetry.
Write on
Good Morning
A love poetry and it is lovely and you are so in love with all your love is there also
Thank you for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
The given title is so
full.of love and.more love.
I Love You so ..
This is well written and nicely presented and so full of life.
A very nice read.
Write on
God is blessing them both long lives to see each other again after all these years to be reunited and share stories of both experience and their walks of life as in friendship that lasts a lifetimr
Fascinating story all the way.
Thank You for sharing
What Matters In The End..
Great talent.
Write on.
Good Morning ,
Nice name...
Matthew...and the name of your boyfriend
WOW...
The poem has a good flow and it speaks nicely of your true feelings for hi
Yom and that love is
on the air.. And you are very.happy ..A lovw between two hearts and keep loving each other .
Be very happy.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Triolet form of poetry and it speaks of true and radiant beUty
PARADISE
Wonderful lines that completed this well written and nicely presented work of art.
Lovely surroundings is being described here and the poetic words are especially meant to be for this great place
Awesome
Paradise,
Write on.
Good Evening,
The given title is interesting
The Fragrance Of Fiction
Where in greatest creativeness occurs ,in thoughts and the writings goes on and on until it ends ,
This is how i undestand this brilliant work of art
Good Evening,
The presentation is uniquely nice.
The writing is nice an, ,d wise.
The title is Captivating and interesting
Grounds For Celebration
The free verse poetry
Emphasizes the importance of this day. The First Of May that is popularly known as Labor Day.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The given title fits for the written lines that expresses complete boredom as in nothing gives interest at all .
The poem has a good flow.
Reading the last line makes me smile as sleeping is a great solution
Thank You for sharing this and for the read
Good Evening,
A sweet very special Birthday greetings to the dearest birthday Celebrant
Pablo, a dearest grandson
The poem is well written and nicely presented and is so full of love.
The whole family loves this sweet child who turns ond in June.
Happy Birthday
Sweet Pablo
God Bless You Always
Good Evening,
An Epulaeryu Form of
Poetry
I love the given title simply because I Love
Those Sweet Little
M and Ms colored round or I called Dots chocolates,
I admire each line that completed this special work of art.
Buy a bag...
BIG YES .
Wonderful poem all the way.
Write on
God Bless..
Good Evening
Great title of a special writing about
FRIENDS
Getting together and enjoying delicious meals
Japanese Food in particular including the famous drknk5 called
SAKE
It is a joyful read.indeed.
Friends sharing wonderful moments in together.
Precious all the way.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
This is an amusing free verse poetry.
The title is captivating as I love both Roses as well as Potatoes.
Then you explore the world with your obsevations of some living things on earth and the non living too like the dress and the boots.
Life is truly colorful if you see it that way.
Nice and easy.
Great poem.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A Biographical free verse poetry that is very inspiring as well as interesting.
It soeaks of yesterday when you were young including what was all about it.
This is well written and nicely presented.
My favorite lines ,,,
Of the endless challenges presented every decade
Year, month and a day..
I admire these lines as life is not life without them.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
They are hugea and fearless but I can run so fast like the lady in this story.
I cannot blame you son for thinking that way and I cannot blMe5 you for your rwction and reason. It soon will pass as you be explain to each other.
But I wish they never raise Turkeys in that area again.
Have all of them be Roasted on Thanksgiving.Thamk You for sharing.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented
Thank You Letter to the founders.of this Awesome Community, Writing. Com.. Reading between the lines makes me so happy for you for having found a place you love and express the things that you love to do through Writing.
I love Writing. Com. Too.
A letter expressing the sincereness and gratefulness of your heart and soul
Yes..
A grateful heart will always be blessed.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Afternoon,
A short story that is well written and nicely presented.
It is expressing the great importance and the value
of work that also includes the young people on the way to college education to gain rxperience as well as to earn.
Admirable Story all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on
Good Afternoon
A well written and nicely presented story or ESsay.
This is written with all clearness and clarity and the great suspense of
Will the deer be caught by the crocodile or not... wherein the result gives a wonderful connectedness as we all face life courageously and facing bravely what has to come with being careful , watchful and Wise.
The lesson being shared is
AWESOME
Thank You for sharing
Right Thirst
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented deeply emotional PROSE from the deepest chamber of the heart and soul.
I can feel the great love for your Mother in every chosen written line as well as the depthness of Grief as she is gone too soon.
I am sorry for your loss.
Sending HUGS...
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A poetry that expresss a philosophical.message and with a captivating title
Reflections
It gives importance of the element WATER and its connectedness with life
Like the song
Bridge Over Troubled Water that is also very interesting and with meanjngful message
The last two lines make a great conclusion
Thank You for the read.Write on.
Good Afternoon
Reading between the lines of this fascinating free verse poetry..reminds me of a very famous song in our country being sang by.my favorite Jose Mari Chan...with a title
Beautiful Girl..
The poem has a good flow and it describes the girls physical beauty and the assumption of who she is.as in beautiful girl..whereever you are
Thank You for sharing
Girl On The Train
A well written and nicely presented work of art.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
Nice title of a free verse Poetry
Magical Moments
A Love So Sworn
It is well written and nicely presented all the way with a good flow.
It's rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
This is a very meaningful work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Morning,
A song, a poetry or a prayer and the words are being addressed to The Most High and it expresses the humble prayer from the heart.
The last few lines freely said it all.
Very touching and uplifting.
I admire this all the way.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Morning
A tribute to.one.of the very.important item that a Writer.must have
A Dictionary
The poem has a good flow and is honest, thoughtful and true.
It speaks of the dictionary's great importance to the life of a writer.
Perfectly Said.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Reading this makes me conclude that uou are a very knowledgeable poet and brilliant.
These are names in Mythology that surely only learned by few and that includes yourself.
Amazing and is being made into an
Acedarian poetry.
In answer to the question.. I believe it is the BUG..
Thank You for sharing your talent.
Write on.
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