Good Evening,
Interesting and full of excitement is the main topic of this well written and nicely presented Essay with a title
CARNIVAL
Yes.. Carnival time is unforgettable time is what I understand as I read this piece.
Enjoyable and fun.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Evening,
Whew.. that was close.
Better not use that route as trouble awaits.
A short story full of suspense.
Eloise learned her lesson.
This is well written and nicely presented.
It is a scary exoerience too.
The story has a good flow.
Yes I agree with the ending.
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Good Evening,
Fall and autumn two of tbe four seasons in your country and it is being expressed or described through three line Haiku poetry.
Nice. Concise and wise.
Lovely too
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
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Evidence of Autumn
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Good Evening,
Childhood memories.
It linger and sadness fills the heart.
This is a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that expresses a philosophical message .
Nostalgic and deeply emotional piece all the way.
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Bittersweet...
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Good Evening,
This is lovely
this ia great.
Joyful Noise
A nicely written free verse poetry that shares gladness of the spirit.
The presentation is wonderful.
The message is philosophical
Nice and wise work of art.
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Joyful Noice
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Good Evening,
Reading the titie it expresses great expectations
Joyful Butterflies
Reading between the lines
expresses great creation
Yes this is a wonderful poem and the picture adds
more meaning jnto it.
Truly joyful and awesome.
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Good Evening,
Reading between the lines makes me believe your fighting spirit is truly great and that is highly admirable .
An acrostic poetry that expresses a pusitive mind and spirit
It is well written and nicely presented.
Nice work of art.
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Good Afternoon,
I can vividly picture what's going as the spider sat on your chest.
Hahaha that was scary
I guess .
The story is well written and nicely presented.
I admire the courageous son.
Yes
Thank You for sharing
Black Spider
Thank You for the read too
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Good Afternoon,
Hahaha
The trying hard plumber .
After all his willingness matters.
I enjoy reading this all the way .
Truthful and Amusing.
Most of all.. i love the given title.
Very positive. Very willing and sincere.
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I Can Do It
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Good Afternoon,
Haiku0083
This is very nice .
Three precious lines that completed this concise and wise work of art
Written for a contest.
I wish you win.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Good Morning,
The given title is Captivating as well as intriguing...
A Powerful Wrong
A Sense Of Manic Worth
It has some connectedness with what is going on with the world and the important message is being expressed in aphilosophical way.
This proves the poet's caring heart that is full of concern.
Thank You for the read.
Interesting and Captivating title of a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry
Cycle of Life
Very true.. life has many phases and each one is important and precious.
The message is philisophical and the whole story behind the poetry is Awesome .
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
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Good Evening,
A nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry that is deeply emotional all the way.
A poem that expresses so much longings for someone close to the heart
Feeling so alone since you been gone.
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How Do I Miss You
Thank You for the read too.
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Good Evening,
Amusing...hahaha And Susie loves it
I like the given title
Andrea Smiled .
It exoresess great expectations.
Both are having a great bonding time and that Each is a blessing to oneself And to others.
Admirable story.
Highly impressive too.
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Good Evening,
A free verse poetry that expresses the life of a working person.
The given message is philosophical as well as the given title
The lines at the last stanza are my favorite lines.
They are truly the most meaningful.
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Good Evening,
A very interesting comparison of a love relationship that is also being used as a title of this work of art...
VELCRO
Reading between the lines makes me understand fully why such title was given.
Yes.. I agree with the written lines that completed this meaningful poem .
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Good Evening,
A sad poem.
The pain of betrayal or a broken vow..Surely it gives so much pain.
The last stanza is a twist and turn that shares great joy.
This is a well written and nicely presented emotional piece
The poem has a good flow.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
Sad to note that such thoughts of an elderly, and this sad wish .
The poem is well written and nicely presented and such words and lines serve as death wish .
Truly it is not easy to be old as in really old.
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Good Afternoon,
This is a very interesting and Captivating title of a great information about
Global Health
Detailed and well explained all the way
A well written and nicely medical report or information that every one needs to know and to appreciate .
Thank You for the read.
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Good Morning,
A lovely poem with a good flow that expresses the cold touch of dawn through poetic words that completed this free verse work of art .
It is lively too .
I admire each written line.
This is highly impressive.
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DAWN
Thank You for the read too.
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Good Evening,
A free verse poetry that expresses a very important message.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
I admire the lines with the necessary counting.
This is lovely and lively.
The last two lines are my favorite lines.
They are brilliant.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
This is inspiring and meaningful title
In the Calm Waters
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
The message is being addressed to someone special whom the title represents
The last line said it all
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Good Evening
A Love poetry with a nice twist and turn.
The story behind the poetry is deeply emotional.
A relationship turn into turmoil
The poem has a good flow and the rhythm and rhyme is nice.
The last two lines serve as a positive conclusion.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The title speaks of war
Atomic Fire
that expresses great devastation.
The destruction of lives and properties in the most horrifying way .
The written lines fit for the given title.
A very sad part of the world history
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Evening,
A nicely written and nicely free verse poetry with a good flow.
The title is Captivating
The Bird
It describes of the bird and her movements, situation and condition in a philosophical way.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Thank You for the read.
Write on
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