I found this piece very interesting and well written.
The topic you have chosen isn't easy to write about,
but you have managed to describe death and how it could be coped with,in a very imaginative and original manner.
Personally, death has already touched me very closely
with the passing away of my father almost seven years
ago. This totally distressed me cancelled my life for about two years. Then one day you just wake up and find
that the pain and the memories are still there but have softened with time.
You think it's impossible to cope with but when you
have to there's no escape! Even if you fight for your
life the creature catches up on you!
This was a brilliant piece!
I really enjoyed reading it. It was very descriptive
and well written, so one could easily use his imagination and actually picture the situations and
and panoramas as in picture.
It made me think that almost everyone, once in their life has wished to change their situation and enjoy the freedom to choose to live as they prefer to.
Mothers are wonderful creatures, and thank God they
exist. Life wouldn't be the same without them.
I, perhaps would have made more paragraphs as the
second paragraph is a block. Changing perhaps some
of the '' I love you because''as a bit repetitive.
After reading another piece of your poetry I was curious
to read other of your poems. I find we are quite similar in
liking to write about love , nature and music.
I also enjoyed reading this piece and you're quite
right about the music, I feel you can almost sing to
a rythm.
Take care and it has been a pleasure to travel through
your portfolio.
Regards Auntynelly
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