A very accurate and informative survey.
I agree with you. I usually tend to rate higher than
lower but that all depends on how I feel about the
Piece,how it's displayed and the emotions it gives.
I know you should take the form and grammer into
consideration, but that often comes second place to
me even though it might be wrong.
I usually rate and review more with the heart than the
technical side. I guess that isn't much use to help someone improve their writing, but it certainly gives
them morew encouragement.
Well done and keep writing and reviewing.
Take care
AuntyNelly
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These topics are very interesting and helpful.
When reviewing many pieces in a day, it gets difficult to be original and to vary terminology.
Also one should bear in mind to review with a fresh mind as with tiredness you tend to give a rushed
review and perhaps omit to give the real feelings and
emotions the piece portrays.
Usually I try to read a piece several times before I review it to give my true impressions and suggestions
if I have any.
Keep up the good work. It's appreciated!
Take care
AuntyNelly
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I really loved this poem. A true touch to Christmas.
Very descriptive and good rhyming, I almost felt I
was there at bethlehem participating at this beautiful
spectacular scene.
Well done and keep writing.
AuntYNelly
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Well written apart from the 3rd paragraph in the middle: 'I and my past seem dead rights for all that times I could have spent the nights'. Perhaps it could
be written slightly different.
I enjpoyed reading this piece.
Well done and keep writing.
AuntyNelly
The title is really original and appropriate.
Well written, good flow and descriptive.
It's a shame that the majority of us are into jobs which we don't exactly like, but are forced to put up.
Only a few are lucky.
Personally I quite envy musicians who play music for a living. Although it's difficult , you see the passion they put into it when they're playing.
I think the same can be said for writing.
I wish you luck in your BA in English and hope your
future will be '' en rose''.
Keep writing and greetings for the upcoming festivities.
I really loved this poem.
Good phrasing and rhyming paragraphs.
Very emotional and romantic.
I particularly liked the part where you wrote 'what fate befalls us fools,who tumble in those pools?
It makes me smile to think that women are not the only fools in love!
Keep writing and well done!
Take care and enjoy the Christmas holidays.
AuntyNelly
I enjoyed this piece very much. Well written and very
touching.
Being Italian , I also read the italian original version. I preferred it, perhaps because italian is
a more romantic language. Also because it was born in
italian.
I have also written a poem in italian and then trnaslatedit to Italian, but I preferred the original version here as well.
If you have time I'd like you to read it and give me your point of view.
It's called ''Love and then nothing''and the original
italian version is called '' L'amore e po' niente.
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