I loved it, really spiritual and deep also liked the picture which accompanied the poem. It makes you feel nearer to heaven.
What a lovely message to receive on Valentine's day!
I saw this piece highlighted on Yobear's portfolio.
At first I thought it was her piece when I started reading it, then I saw it was yours. You always write
very beautiful poems.
Short but to the point. Well done, a good piece of
writing. Good rhyming and emotional.
In such a few words you described the closed up feelings of a special person, who is trying to escape
from the bitterness and disillusion of the past.
Well done. Well written, with good rhyming and layout.
Emotional and descriptive. Your words portray the
comfort and the helping hand of a friend.
True friendship also means telling the truth even if
it hurts.
I get the feeling that some pride here is being shown.
I think this request a review space is a great opportunity to publicise one's writing.
I have used it frequently and find it gives people more space. It's sometimes hard to choose a piece to read out of so many authors.
I usually seek them out here or out of the various NLS
which point out the most outstanding pieces.
Continue the great work and thank you once again.
Take care AuntyNelly
Beautiful! Are you the next of kin to William Shakespeare? LOL No, seriously I found it really
amazing. You have a natural flair for writing sonnets.
Please continue doing so.
Perhaps you could also ask Will for a review! LOL
Well done, I really enjoyed reading this piece.
Very emotional, romantic and good rhyming.
Good Job!
This was a very interesting topic. Well written and
explained fully, thank you.
I often wondered why I had so many people reading my pieces but not rating them.
Sometimes I thought that they wanted to give a low
rating so they remained anonymous.
But even that isn't the answer.
I enjoyed reading this piece.
Well done. It was sad and emotional though.
Full of regrets. I think one should not have any regrets for the past, because at the moment it's what you wanted to do.
The nostalgia of having a close family and losing out
on all the special occasions was portrayed fully in
your words.
Take care and keep writing, it does wonders for the mind!
Beautiful!
Well written with good rhyming and display.
Sad and emotion portrayed with intensity.
It's true, one must always learn to let go before
starting a new relationship.
Well done! I enjoyed reading this piece.
You chose quite a difficult topic to discuss but
you portrayed it very well.
Very meaningful words and emotions used.
I agree with you we are all part of the HUMAN RACE.
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