I loved this lyric, really great!
it sounds like you've written lyrics before.
very emotional and the words flowed smoothly with rhythm and rhyme and rock and roll!
I seriously think you could also sing it as a soul song too!
Good luck for the cometition, I'm sure you'll do well.
Take care and keep writing,
AuntyNelly
Your words portray how the mother is distraught after the loss of her son. The fact that she can see him
and that he can say I love you for the last time filled her heart with joy.
Now she knows sje has her Angel watching over her always!
Hi James,
Yobear pointed this poetry out to me and told me it was a masterpiece.
I agree with her. Very touching and emotional.
Yes a mother should never have to experience the loss of a child. It's too traumatic!
I loved reading this story. It was emotional and very romantic, almost the kind you only see in films but would love to happen for real.
The way you described Mattie was so detailed that I could almost picture him.
A spoilt girl who falls in love with the servant.
It sounds like a fairytale but with skill you turned it to a real life drama.
I could feel and imagine the characters , especially the father ,daughter and Mattie .
Sad that only after the father's death brought happiness ever after!
I really enjoyed this poem.
Your words portrayed the emotions of a person who is
reliable and will always be there in good times or
bad times.
I particularly liked the stanza where you say,
''I have my umbrella ready etc''.
By the way I noticed you haven't written anything in your bio block.
You should do as this communicates a little more about you to the people reading your work.
Well done. A good try!
Well written with good rhyming and display.
Your words portrayed that dreams are the best illusions in life , to sweep away the bad times and
start again with the new.
Well done!
I found this piece in LExi's romance/love NL.
Good use of the film titles, well written with flow
and rhyming , welll displayed.
Your words portray emotion and passion.
I think this survey was very interesting. The selection gets harder and harder!
I love anything to do with cinema! Will be going to
the 'Venice Film Festival' soon.
Thank you for introducing Cinema to this site. I
would have liked to have done something in this topic
but obviously you've beat me to it.
At your disposal in the future for cooperation in other surveys or anything to do with Cinema.
Well done, the five senses are portrayed perfectly here. I liked reading this poem, it was full of emotion and passion.
Your words expressed the true love we all search for.
I think it's a great initiative and will encourage people to review more.
Thank you for all the work you do on the site,it's
appreciated immensely!
Take care and well done,
AuntyNelly
Well done , this poem was well written with good rhyming and display.
It expresses emotion and nostalgia for old friends
and hope for the new friends to be made in life.
You used the prompt for the competition with skill.
Hi Lexi,
A very interesting survey! I enjoyed answering the
questions. Perhaps in the future we can think of a
competition with questions that don't give away the
titles of the film. Either you've seen the film and
know the answers or you don't get the points!
Is that an idea? Am interested to help if you ever
think of picking up this idea.
Take care and well done.
Anto
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