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Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (5.0)
          I'm not proficient on the TECHNICAL aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, inspiration, humor and enjoyment.

          I read your "Smile at Your Neighbors"  Yeah! For the message and a double yeah for the the way it flowed. Could't improve a thing.

Cypress the frog kissing writer "Introduction of Cypress"  I saw your name in the list of active reviewers and was attracted by your UI treefrogz cypress is my name and frogkissing (encouragement) is my game.
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Review of Overwhelmed  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I am not proficient at reviewsing on the technical aspects, especially poetry. I read for wisdom, information, story, and entertainment.

          I read your "Overwhelmed"  I find it difficult to give you the encouragement because you have so many negative thoughts locked in.

You concluded, I'll just go to bed. So why not try something new tomorrow. As soon as you wake up say out loud, "today is the day the Lord has made, I will rejoice and be glad in it. Say it twice.

Then start your day and repeat that each time negative thoughts about yourself or your situaiton confront you.

It works for a lot of people.

Cypress the frog kissing writer
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Review of Fallen Angel  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I am not proficient in reviewing based on the technical aspects, especially on poetry. I read for wisdom, information, inspiration and enjoyment.

          I read your "Fallen Angel"  I love your masterful use of words and phrases in little bites. The full paragrpah closing was o.k. too

Cypress the frog kissing writer "Introduction of Cypress" 
http://cypresscreekkid.com
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Review of The Stargazer  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
          I am not proficient in reviewing based on the technical aspects, especially on poetry. I read for wisdom, information, inspiration and enjoyment.

          I read your "The Stargazer"  It is difficult to get a fish eye view of anything but you did very well.

Cypress the frog ksising writer "Introduction of Cypress" 

http://cypresscreekkid.com
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Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
          I am not proficient in reviewing based on the technical aspects, especially on poetry. I read for wisdom, information, inspiration and enjoyment.

          I read your "Short Nap/ Long Afternoon "  you language is very picturesque and your metaphors help see your picture

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of "Only You"  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
          I am not proficient in reviewing based on the technical aspects, especially on poetry. I read for wisdom, information, inspiration and enjoyment.

          I read your ""Only You""  you wrote this for SOMEONE, but not for me, and probably not for anyone but that does not matter. You get your own message from it and hopefully the person you wrote it for will also.
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Review of MY QUIET PLACE  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I am not proficient in reviewing based on the technical aspects, especially on poetry. I read for wisdom, information, inspiration and enjoyment.

          I read your "MY QUIET PLACE"  you did well in describing the thoughts going through as you ponder the natural setting.

Cypress the frog kissing writer "Introduction of Cypress" 

http://cypresscreekkid.com
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Review of In my dreams  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I am not proficient in reviewing based on the technical aspects, especially on poetry. I read for wisdom, information, inspiration and enjoyment.

          I read your "In my dreams"  you do with getting the thoughts to flow well, and you express your feeling and longing well.

Cypress the frog-kissing writer "Introduction of Cypress" 

http://cypresscreekkid.com
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Review of Trust in love  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
          I am not proficient at rating on the technical aspects, especially poetry. I read for the message,the feelings, for wisdom and enjoyment.

          I read your "Trust in love"  i read for message and your message and feeling are clear. However I don't agree with your philosophy.

Cy[ress
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Review by Cypress
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
          I am not proficient at rating on the technical aspects, especially poetry. I read for the message,the feelings, for wisdom and enjoyment.

          I read your "A Loveless Heart.. or Untitled"  I enjoyed your thoughts and you did quite well for now. I would understand it easier if it was paragraphed.

Cypress the frog kissing writer "Introduction of Cypress" 

http://cypresscreekkid.com
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Review of My Raven  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I am not proficient at rating on the technical aspects, especially poetry. I read for the message,the feelings, for wisdom and enjoyment.

          I read your "Invalid Item"  A very fascinating poem. Cleverness in each paragraph and in the ending. My birds are the opposite color. i do magic shows with snow white doves. That are symbolic of the opposite of ravens.

Cypress the frog kissing writer "Invalid Item" 

http://cypresscreekkid.com
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Review of Learn  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I am not proficient at rating on the technical aspects, especially poetry. I read for the message,the feelings, for wisdom and enjoyment.

          I read your "Learn"  your pooem flowes well and each paragraph hasw a good message. Life is truly a learning experience.

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
http://cypresscreekkid.com
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Review of Run With It  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
          I'm not proficient in the technical aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for the message, the feeling, for wisdom, inspiration and entertainment.

         I read your "Run With It"  I followed your train of thoughts througt it all then read it again to gean a bit more.

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
http://cypresscreekkid.com
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Review of SS Steel Flyer  
Review by Cypress
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
          I'm not proficient in the technical aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for the message, the feeling, for wisdom, inspiration and entertainment.

         I read your "SS Steel Flyer" I enjoyed your travelogue from the viewpoint of a civilian sailor.

          My traveloge was as a foot soldier, twnety-one years, Korea, Vietnam and worst of all the Pentagon.

Precious memories.

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
http://cypresscreekkid.com
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Review of Cult For Hire  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
          I'm not proficient in the technical aspects of reviewing. I read for the message, the feeling, for wisdom, inspiration and entertainment.

         I read your "Cult For Hire"  Look like a good introduction to your work. Hope to see the rest of it.

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
http://cypresscreekkid.com
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Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I'm not proficient in the technical aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for the message, the feeling, for wisdom, inspiration and entertainment.

         I read your "An Aside(Homage to love and Shakespeare)"  I know you put a lot of workin piecing it all together. I enjoyed it and thanks.
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Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I'm not proficient in the technical aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for the message, the feeling, for wisdom, inspiration and entertainment.

         I read your "The Path Less Travelled"  I read it and re-read it to glean some of your finer points, but did not really get the overall theme.
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Review of Emotions  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I'm not proficient in the technical aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for the message, the feeling, for wisdom, inspiration and entertainment.

         I read your "Emotions"  Great little poem and it raises I common quesiton that I deal with in my book http:cypresscreekkid.com Cypress says, "when it is over, let it be over, and move on to the next game."

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of Passing Soul  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I'm not proficient in rating on the technical aspects, especially of poetry. I mostly read for and enlightenment.

          I read your you use picturesque language and share the emotions and thoughts. I've seen a lot of death. No two alike. Death doesn't bother me.

          However, I HAVE NEVER DIED. I say that I don't mind dying, and I don't think I will really care much.

The ones who are left behind are also not alike. No one size fits all there either.

Cypress the frog-kissing writer.
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Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
I'm not proficient at rating by the technical things, especially poetry. I read for the fun and the story

I read your "~Breathless Desire~"  It moved slow and my mind had difficult getting the messages from the verses even though the words sounded good.

Maybe I shoudl write down some of my own musings and see how I sound.

Cypress the frog-kissing writer.
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Review of Windex  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm not proficient at rating by the technical things. I read for the fun and the story.

          I read your "Windex"  I must be older than you are because I don't remember much when I was that young.

But I do remember more about putting my nose and face to the window pane than my hands. Also glad my mother had beter things to do. House, garden, washing, ironing, cooking.

Cypress the frog-kissing writer
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Review of Good Night Lake  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
I'm not proficient at rating by the technical things. Especially poetry. I read for the fun and the story

          I read your "Good Night Lake" . Would make a good bedtime poem, I think the repetition plus the visual images you painted so well would probalby get me off to zzzz.

Cypress, the frog-kissing writer
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Review of Her Tears Fall  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
I'm not proficeint in reviewing the technical aspects, especially of poetry. I read for fun, message and feeling.

I read your "Her Tears Fall"  Plenty of message on your theme of the sadness and plenty of feeling about the loss. I often have to encourage a person to let the grief run, but put a cutoff date. Then after that each time affirm a positive message and move on.


Cypress the frog kissing writer. "Author's Introduction" 
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Review of The River  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
I'm not proficient on reviewing on the technical aspect, especially poetry. I read for fun, for messages and feeling - your "The River"  was all three. It really read like a story to me. And of course being raised on a farm it was picture perfect for me also.

Cypress
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Review of ~Y~  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (3.5)
I am not proficient in reviewing on the technical aspects, especially poetry. I read for thought, feeling and fun.

I read your "~Y~"  It was fun and it was clever and I enjoyed it but I don't know Y.

Cypress the frog kissing writer. Meet me "Author's Introduction" 
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