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I am not proficient in reviewing of the technicals of writing, especially poetry. I read for message and how words flow and the feeling they generate.
I read your "She loves me not" it moved well and I liked the ending. I wonder how it would have went if that last petal said "she loves me not,"
Hello;
I am not proficient in reviewing of the technicals of writing, especially poetry. I read for message and how words flow and the feeling they generate.
I read your "On Lies II" I liked the flow of your words and paragraphs. I don't comment on "busted love" I leave that to the song writers.
Hello;
I am not proficient in reviewing of the technicals of writing, especially poetry. I read for message and how words flow and the feeling they generate.
I read your "Mini Intro" Welcome to Writing.com. Get your feet wet right away. learn to post and learn to review.
Hello;
I am not proficient in reviewing of the technicals of writing, especially poetry. I read for message and how words flow and the feeling they generate.
I read your "My troubles" and it DID NOT MOVE ME, hope if moved you because that seems to be your problem.
So I'll share and old poem of mine> Of all the poets both great and small, are those who write on crap house walls.:
Hello;
I am not proficient in reviewing of the technicals of writing, especially poetry. I read for message and how words flow and the feeling they generate.
I read your "To The Dead Poet Of Obscurity" it made me wonder if effort was made to publish the poems prior to the decease of the author.
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I am not proficient in reviewing of the technicals of writing, especially poetry. I read for message and how words flow and the feeling they generate.
I read your "The Pianist" I usually have the best seat in the house, from my seat on the podium I can see the pianist - not his fingers which detract - but his face as it responds to the music.
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I am not proficient in reviewing of the technicals of writing, especially poetry. I read for message and how words flow and the feeling they generate.
I read your "The Tragedy" I'm not sure I got it right but it is sad if I did. It appears that the guidance counselor knew of the fathers death before the boy did.
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I am not proficient in reviewing of the technicals of writing, especially poetry. I read for message and how words flow and the feeling they generate.
I rad your "Heart" I liked your poem. You said it so well, much more beautiful than saying he heart is just a pump that pumps blood to the varios parts of the body.
That blood cares the life of the body, the oxygen, the calories, the protein, etc. and my brain could not function without it.
Hello;
I am not proficient in reviewing of the technicals of writing, especially poetry. I read for message and how words flow and the feeling they generate.
I read your "The end of the tunnel" It made me wonder, free advice is usually worth what you pay for it but nevertheless: Even if parents are a part of the problem the answer is in assuming responsibility for now and tomorrow. I'm a professional frog-kisser but can't do it until the frogs are ready to take responsibility.
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I am not proficient in reviewing of the technicals of writing, especially poetry. I read for message and how words flow and the feeling they generate.
I read your "My Guardian Angel" Your rhyme is fine but a bit stretched at points.
It is a good frog-kissing (encouraging) poem, I like it.
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I am not proficient in reviewing of the technicals of writing, especially poetry. I read for message and how words flow and the feeling they generate.
I read your "Decisions" It is a well written poem with a good quesiton. Wish I had the answer to your quesiton.
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I am not proficient in reviewing of the technicals of writing, especially poetry. I read for message and how words flow and the feeling they generate.
I read your "Disconnected" Your rhyme is fine and friend, I expect if Peter, Paul and Moses got together they would have disagreements. As Paul said to Moses, "Friends may come and friends may go and friends may peter out but you can always be my friend peter in or not.
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I am not proficient in reviewing of the technicals of writing. I read for message and how words flow and the feeling they generate.
I read your many don't think I had any schoolhousin but I did. I went to school - I often remember that day.
A one room school with one teacher teaching grade levels 1 through 8. It there was a kindergarden it must have been where we planted vegetables because I didn't walk thru it on my way to the first grade.
Schools now are much different. I had three sons who learned far more than I did. I have ten grandchildren who are brilliant in the three R's and a lot more.
I have not done to bad, I can read rite and figure.
I had a mother who helped me a lot. She did not do my lessons for me or help me with my lessons. She applied the paddle (board of education) to the seat of the problem if I got a bad report card.
The schools must have done all right because when I took a try at higher learning I had a 4.0 GPA (this is harder that GPs) while at the same time working full time.
A tip to parents: If you want to improve the schools make your children behave so that those who want to learn have an invornment in which they can.
Hello;
I am not proficient in reviewing of the technicals of writing, especially poetry. I read for message and how words flow and the feeling they generate.
I read your "Invalid Item" I liked plain easy style. You said it - I read it. I like the messages, I like to spend my time meditating on the message and not spend most of my time figuring out what the message is.
I am not proficient at reviewing the technical aspects. I read for meaning and feeling.
I read your and sympathize with your plight. You express yourself well but you need to learn how to put in periods, commas, and paragraphs, so that people can take smaller bites and enjoy what you serve them better.
I am not proficient at reviewing the technical aspects, especially of poetry. I read for meaning and feeling.
I read your "The real me" . That is a rather grim picture you paint. I suggest tomorrow morning you start painting with a different brush.
Here is the brush I use. The first thing I do when I get out of bed each morning I look in my mirror and say "This is the day the Lord has made, I will rejoice and be glad in it." Say it twice then start your day. Just do it.
I am not proficient at reviewing the technical aspects, especially of poetry. I read for meaning and feeling.
I read your "A love among the seasons" I liked it. It reminds me that love is for all seasons. However, mine is not seasons of three months each. I am near my 60th year of marriage, so my seasons are approximatley 20 years each.
Who knows with luck and providence I might get a fifth season.
I am not proficient at reviewing the technical aspects, especially of poetry. I read for meaning and feeling.
I read your "06-27-07" Of course it is written to one specific person but thanks for sharing it. Maybe I can write one similiar to my wife-mate of 57 years standing
I am not proficient at reviewing the technical aspects, especially of poetry. I read for meaning and feeling.
I ready your "mother earth!!" and I think it is appropriate in the day in which we are living -- a time when debate is strong about protectiing our invironment.
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