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Review of My Truest Love  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
          I am not proficient in reviewing the TECHNICAL aspects, especially poetry. I read for wisdom, story, inspiration, information, ideas and humor.

I read your "My Truest Love"  I liked your tall skinny little format.

Cypress the frog kissing writer "Introduction of Cypress" 

http://cypresscreekkid.com
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Review of Move On  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
          I am not proficient in reviewing the TECHNICAL aspects, especially poetry. I read for wisdom, story, inspiration, information, ideas and humor.

I read your "shadows of evil-chapter one" I enjoyed your story and your philosphy. Move on to higher ground.

Cypress the frog kissing writer "Introduction of Cypress" 

http://cypresscreekkid.com
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Review of 1 is not enough  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (5.0)
I read your "1 is not enough"  i though it was great. Read it through just for the message and immediately gave it 5.0. The went back to look for typos and saw "A crossing dooms up ahead" know that it shoule be "looms" I was about to mark you back down a bit. Then decided "dooms" is the better of the two words.

And your are right in your by line "you shouldn't go it alone" - we all need help from beyond ourselves.

Cypress the frog-kissing writer "Introduction of Cypress" does't have to go it alone. Frogs from slimy (should that be slimey) ponds all over are looking for him.

Well the squirrels are also looking for me --- they think I'm nuts.
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Review of The Breakup  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
          I am not proficient in reviewing the TECHNICAL aspects, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, information, inspiration, ideas, and enjoyment.

I read your "The Breakup"  Don't ask, they never tell you why. I think you have gained some wisdom from it.

Whether you win or whether you lose. When it is over go on to the next game with the attitude of a winner

Cypress the frog kissing writer "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of Someone Else  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
          I am not proficient in reviewing on the technical aspects, especially of poetry. I read for story, wisdom, information, inspiration and IDEAS.

I read your "Someone Else"  Precious and gallant thoughts and well expressed.

Cypress the frog kissing writer "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of Free Teen  
Review by Cypress
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
          I am not proficient in reviewing on the technical aspects, especially of poetry. I read for story, wisdom, information, inspiration and IDEAS.

I read your "Free Teen"  I loved your catchy little poem. Free is the way to be and women are free but the men don't know it.

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of Borrowed time  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
          I am not proficient in reviewing on the technical aspects, especially of poetry. I read for story, wisdom, information, inspiration and IDEAS.

I read your "Borrowed time"  I studied your comments on your memories. I have memories, many of them, but I do not have a one size fits all. I have precious memories, not so precious memories, horrible memories, happy memories, sad memoires.

Cypress the frog kissing writer "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
          I am not proficient in reviewing on the technical aspects. I read for story, wisdom, information, inspiration and IDEAS.

I read your "At the End of All Things"  Your story sounds like there should be a story to precede it. An itneresting character.

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of Down and Out  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
          I am not proficient in reviewing on the technical aspects, especially of poetry. I read for story, wisdom, information, inspiration and IDEAS.

I read your "Down and Out" I can understand the mood you are in and because you wrote this I think you are ready to change. I suggst that you set a definite time to make a turn. Maybe set the first thing tomorrow morning. As soon as you get out of bed. without delay say: "TODAY IS THE DAY THE LORD HAS MADE, I WILL REJOICE AND BE GLAD IN IT.

say it TWICE. Say it whether you believe it or not.

Then just do it. then BE STUBBORN. I KNOW YOU CAN BE STUBBORS SO REFUSE TO THINK NEGATIVE THOUGHTS. REFUSE TO THINK "DOWN AND OUT THOUGHTS" ALL DAY LONG.

You may have to repeat that "Today is the day quite a few times the first day. a little less the second DAY etc

Cypress the frog kisisng writer



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Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I am not proficient in the TECHNICAL aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, inspiration, and entertainment.

I read your "A Standish Woods Mystery"  I like your well balanced presentation. It was easy to read and comprehend. I like woods in winter best.

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of My People  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (5.0)
          I am not proficient in the TECHNICAL aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, inspiration, and entertainment.

I read your "My People"  I saw your by-line "this is powerful" so not skeptic, but hopeful I clicked it.

It was powerful. Powerfully written. Consistent from start to finish on your them or topic. No rambling. You said it well.

Friend and fellow pilgrim Cypress the frog-kissing writer. "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I am not proficient in the TECHNICAL aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, inspiration, and entertainment.

I read your "I know the Man in the Moon"  A well written poem with what I like most - consistency. You stayed with your theme all the way though - I sometiems read the ramblers but like your style better.

Oh I chose you. Because. Because your user name is FROGGY.

Cypress the frog kissing writer. My intro is in the link - what I have up so far is just the foundation for about fifty frog-kissing essays.

"Introduction of Cypress" 
http://cypresscreekkid.com
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Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I am not proficient in the TECHNICAL aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, inspiration, and entertainment.

I read your "I had your Ego for Breakfast."  Your title caught me - could not resist it. I relaxed and read it through not trying to analyze it. It got my attention and it was a good read. Thanks

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of Waiting to Live  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I am not proficient in the TECHNICAL aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, inspiration, and entertainment.

I read your "Waiting to Live"  I liked your poem. I'm now over 70 and have made a full turn. Some of my youthful ideas are better than my adult crack pot ideas.

A good write.

Cypress the frog kissing writer "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of Baby Grows Up  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (5.0)
          I am not proficient in the TECHNICAL aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, inspiration, and entertainment.

I read your "Baby Grows Up" A great piece of insight - of course you have been there and done that and most of us have. I can't think of any way to say it better but I would put a space between every other line or thought. Each age in a little stanza of two lines.

Cypress the frog kissing writer "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of An Ode to Sekhmet  
Review by Cypress
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
          I am not proficient in the TECHNICAL aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, inspiration, and entertainment.

I read your "An Ode to Sekhmet"  I liked your odd ode. I think it is a great little article. I could not say it better. I would have probalby said oh mother rain pee and brimstone on my enemies.

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of Fighting  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I am not proficient in the TECHNICAL aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, inspiration, and entertainment.

I read your "Fighting" I like your repetition of a good first line in each stanza. I think I agree with you: Media commercials and hype suck.

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of Regret  
Review by Cypress
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
          I am not proficient with the TECHNICAL aspects of reviewing. I read for wisdom, story, information, inspiration, and entertainment.

I read your "Regret"  Your thoughts are deep and your format is consistent and it is a though provoking poem.

Cypress
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Review of A Lone Destiny  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I am not proficient with the TECHNICAL aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for wisdom, story, information, inspiration, and entertainment.

I read your "A Lone Destiny" I paid close attention to the thoughts read it a second time. My conclusion is that lonliness is a habit, and when things change the feelin remains.

Cypress
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Review of Working Parents  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I am not proficient with the TECHNICAL aspects of reviewing, especially poetry. I read for wisdom, story, information, inspiration, and entertainment.

I read your "Working Parents"  I liked the content and loved the construction, with short lines at top and broadening at bottom. Good work.

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of Princess  
Review by Cypress
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
          I'm not proficient in the TECHNICAL aspects of writing, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, inspiration and enjoyment.

          I read your"Princess"  I saw the byline on your title and alreay knew who was boss.... but I went anyway.

People own dogs, cats own people.

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of These Hazel Eyes  
Review by Cypress
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
          I'm not proficient in the TECHNICAL aspects of writing, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, inspiration and enjoyment.

          I read your"These Hazel Eyes"  I'm wondering if any kin, especially father and mother, see anything deep within those hazel eyes.

You said it well, but unless they read your poem then I wonder if you are talking to yourself.

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of My dearest Woobie  
Review by Cypress
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
          I'm not proficient in the TECHNICAL aspects of writing, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, inspiration and enjoyment.

          I read your"My dearest Woobie" Oh, well, I learn something new. I never had a blanket. Our treasure was a sheepskin, hide side down, about two yards from the heating stove, warm and secure there even in dire weather.

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of My Angel  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I'm not proficient in the TECHNICAL aspects of writing, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, inspiration and enjoyment.

          I read your"My Angel"  Not much I can add - you said what you needed and wanted to say and it was easy to understand and feel.

Cypress "Introduction of Cypress" 
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Review of Inexorable Fate  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
          I'm not proficient in the TECHNICAL aspects of writing, especially poetry. I read for story, wisdom, inspiration and enjoyment.
joyment.

I read your"Inexorable Fate"  I liked the good balance in your format. I agree that fate has a hand in all of the things you mentioned, however, I think we tend to give fate the credit for many things that we bring on ourselves.... I know that I do. Thanks.

Cypress, the frog kissing writer "Introduction of Cypress" 

http://cypresscreekkid.com
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