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Review of Ignite  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am not proficient in rating on the technical aspects, especially poetry. I read for the message and feelings.

I read your "Ignite"  I liked your poem especially the two line format to compelte thoughts.

I asked myself it would be better if broken into four line stanzas but decided I liked it they way you have it

Cypress the frog kissing writer "Author's Introduction" 
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Review of Sandra  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm not proficient in reviewing on technical aspects, especially on poetry.

This is a review of your "Sandra"  This is neat and meaningful and a nice thing to do.

And it and it rhymes wlel also. I'm sure your mother liked it.

Cypress
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Review of Who  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (3.5)
I'm not proficient in reviewing on technical aspects, especially on poetry.

This is a review of your "Who"  Nothing wrong with what you wrote providing in it you speak what you feel and are talking to yourself.

And maybe it does make us feel better if we can voice the things that bug us. And if writing them like you did does not help then talk to trees. They listen well.
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Review of Time  
Review by Cypress
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I'm not proficient in reviewing on technical aspects, especially on poetry.

This is a review of your "Time" As one of the worlds best frog-kisser I understand the feelings that people go through when precious relationships vanish.

Time can be our best friend if we let things heal at their own pace.

cypress "Author's Introduction" 
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Review of Early Morning Sun  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
I'm not proficient in reviewing on technical aspects, especially on poetry.

This is a review of your "Early Morning Sun"  Your poem is well written and your scenes had feeling as well as painted good pictures.

I have been visiting hospital rooms and critical care places for over forty five years. It is never easy.

Cypress the frog kissing writer "Author's Introduction" 
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Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
I'm not proficient in reviewing on technical aspects, especially on poetry.

This is a review of your "The Essence of Spring"  I liked your poem, I usually get my first bout of Spring Fever in early February.

Your poem was well constructed and meaningful to me.

Cypress "Author's Introduction" 
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Review of The shore  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm not proficient in reviewing on technical aspects, especially on poetry.

This is a review of your "The shore" that was inspiring and beautiful. I may have to share that idea with one of my frogs who is looking for peace and calm. Write it in the sand and let the ocean take it away.

Write on

Cypress {item: 1280286}
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Review of Johnny B.  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
I'm not proficient in reviewing on technical aspects, especially on poetry.

This is a review of your "Johnny B." 

Your poem about the young soldier in nam and his girl at home is well written and tells the two way tragedy.

I was in the army as an enlisted man 21 years and spent my 21st year in nam. I landed at Dover when I returnedl. "Invalid Item" and it is true - I never looked back, don't write about it and don't talk about it.

Cypress
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Review of Just.........  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
I'm not proficient in reviewing on technical aspects, especially on poetry.

This is a review of your "Just........."  that was a nice calm poem of pleasant thought about memories that did not quite make it to the precious.

Your construction was good and the thoughts flowed smooth.

Cypress "Author's Introduction" 
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Review of Auburn Curls  
Review by Cypress
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I'm not proficient in reviewing on technical aspects, especially on poetry.

This is a review of your "Auburn Curls"  I read your lengthy prelude to the kiss. I'm glad I don't write about "busted love" because I was ready to tell you what I have to tell so many "get over it" then you got the kiss.

Enjoy

Cypress
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Review of Crows  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm not proficient in reviewing on technical aspects, especially on poetry.

This is a review of your "Crows"  I was fascinated with the come and go of your chain of thought about trees and fruit.

Who knows that only crows would eat it, Cypress is a hungry kid and joined the Army because they fed well.

Cypress "Author's Introduction" 
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Review of Clouded Image  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am not proficient at technically reviewing, especially poetry and I read more for the message.

This is my review of your poem "Clouded Image" 

The thoughts you expressed are the primary reason I do not write about "busted love" it gives the song writers something to write about.

Cypress "Author's Introduction" 
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Review by Cypress
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I am not proficient at technically reviewing,I read more for the message and feelings

This is my review of your story "Before the News Comes" 

When I read your opening I thought you would immediately go into your backstory, BUT NOT IN REVERSE GEAR.

It is unique to back track a step at a time it does not communicate well to me and I don't think it will comunnicate clearly and easily to others.

In my opinion, UNIQUE doesn't feed the bulldog.

Cypress
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Review of Twins  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am not proficient at technically reviewing. I read more for the message and feelings

This is my review of your first chapter "Twins" 

I was immediately drawn in by the title "twins." I am the father of twin boys, they are my babies, my babies are now 53 years old.

I like your lead in as you go into your back-story.

You may know this but I'll share in anyway, since this is your first chapter you might want to contemplate the fact that Elisha is a male name in the Bible.

Not that it makes any difference what you and I think, later on when people are reading Elisha they are going to think male.

Oh, Elisha was plowing with a team of oxen when the Lord called him to be Elijah's replacement.

Enjoy

Cypress the frog-kissing writer "Author's Introduction" 
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Review of Jump  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am not proficient at technically reviewing, especially poetry and I read more for the message.

This is my review of your poem "Jump" 

I think I understand your thoughts and feeling but as a professional frog kisser I would urge you to get a better viewpoint.

Cypress "Author's Introduction" 
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Review of My Favorite Boy  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am not proficient at technically reviewing, especially poetry and I read more for the message.

This is my review of your poem "My Favorite Boy"  I loved it. Very well expressed and a beautiful and meaningful message.

I will read more of yours.

Cypress "Author's Introduction" 
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Review by Cypress
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I am not proficient at technically reviewing, especially poetry and I read more for the message.

This is my review of your introduction "The Work Of Sophia Ruth"  Welcome and I hope you make friends and also share whatever you feel like sharing.

I like pink but pink type does not read well by my old eyes.

Cypress "Author's Introduction" 
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Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am not proficient at technically reviewing, especially poetry and I read more for the message.

This is my review of your poem "When Things Are Accidental"  I liked your language and your continuous movement and children do really like movement and things that look real.

cypress "Author's Introduction" 
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Review of Sanctity  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am not proficient at technically reviewing, especially poetry and I read more for the message.

This is my review of your poem "Sanctity"  I loved your picturesque language as you pictures you painted but I did not really relate to your ending line.

Cypress "Author's Introduction" 
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Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am not proficient at technically reviewing, especially poetry and I read more for the message.

This is my review of your "The Last Generation"  I liked the article and of course it should be calm and thoughtful since it deals with separating from loved ones.

I too think that this generation has greater opportunities to excell becaus eof the technical advances made by the last generation.

Writ one

Cypress "Author's Introduction" 
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Review of tomorrow  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am not proficient at technically reviewing, especially poetry and I read more for the message.

This is my review of your "tomorrow" 

I liked the progression of your poem and the truth you embedded in each verse and the conclusion.

It reminds me of some words I often use from Hebresw "If today you hear his voice harden not your heart" Tomorrow won't do.

Cypress "Author's Introduction" 
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Review of Thoughts of You  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am not proficient at technically reviewing, especially poetry and I read more for the message.

This is my review of your "Invalid Item"  I think you expressed your thoughts and feeling extremely well in your poem.

I hope that peoples grief will soon pass and that only the precious memories will remain.

Cypress the frog-kissing writer "Author's Introduction" 
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Review of The Storm  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am not proficient at technically reviewing, especially poetry and I read more for the message.

This is my review of your I liked the poem and in some spots I could actually visualize the scenes you painted.

I hope you success in benefitting from communicating with the writers here.

Cypress "Author's Introduction" 
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Review by Cypress
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I read your delightful and intriguing "There Could Be Tigers" your one sentence short paragrpah opening had me hooked from the start.

Then your backstory was natural and your pictures of the characters and their actions made them real to me.

The mystery goes on even after I know who Jason Cantor is. I won't say more -- let the readers see for themselves this is a fascinating and exciting read.

I'm on of the worlds best, if not the best, frog-kisser but I can't match the job your protagonist did with Mr. Cantor.

Next time "You fight I'll run."

Cypress "Author's Introduction" 
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Review of You and you  
Review by Cypress
Rated: E | (4.0)
          I am not proficient at reviewing the technicals, I read for thought, meaning and feeling.

          I read your "You and you" consisting of words and phrases and it seems light self talk.

          I would encourage to talk to others by putting those words and phrases into sentence.

          You will learn more about yourself if you try to express your thoughts to others, even to imaginary people, than you wil talking to yourself.

Cypress "Author's Introduction"  the frog kissing writer
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