Very interesting. I enjoyed this work. Only question I have is; does the references to actual literary work need to be given any sort of credit? Good job incorporating the mother goose stuff through the story.
Very nice use of dialogue. I would have liked to have been a little more emotionally tied to the characters. Overall, this seems like a very promising piece of work.
Loved the use of description. It was a pleasure reading such a detailed work. I would have liked to feel a little more emotional involvement, but the work is very good. You seem to have a wonderful ability to illustrate with your words. Again, a pleasure.
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