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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello,
A very powerful message shared within a short amount of words. The world's becoming so negative and self-centered, that many people even forgot how to be kind in the first place. It doesn't take much to be good to others, only the willpower. I would love to know how Samantha spread kindness through social media.

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Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
One of the things I like about your story is the easy to read font. And yes, true inspiration can hit when we least expect it. I just wish Sara all the best with her writing, and hope her story took her a very long way. Is this, by any chance, inspired by true events?
All the best with the Writer’s Cramp!

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Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you for the tiny little trip to the USA. Got a glimpse of quite a few of the states through your story. It made me kinda laugh and cry at the same time. Hey, Alaska has Salmon fish, that’s yummy, right? I do agree about the adapt part, though, just layer up and grab a cup of hot coffee.
All the best with the Writer’s Cramp

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Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there,
Happy WDC Anniversary.

I could completely relate to the story as I have more than one similar experience. Today, even I work as a freelance writer, thanks to my teachers. I’m sure being creative since childhood has helped you in more than one way.
Keep writing!

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Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,
Happy Account Anniversary.

I didn’t know polar bears had black skin, I enjoyed seeing the bears, growing from cubs to adults. I wonder why Ahana Bear was so afraid of humans, though? They’re such gigantic creatures, they can certainly fight back, or can’t they? This was such an enjoyable story, I’m sure children would love it. I’d surely want to know more about Ahana’s adventures as an adult.
Keep writing!

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Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Kiya,
That cute little explorer on your folder lured me in, and I flew onto this one. What I loved most about this story, were the Muslim characters, who possibly migrated into the USA. Being a Muslim, and an international student somewhere in California for a few years, these characters seemed very relatable. I love the way the story unfolded, the little sensory details, the chubby cute little hands swallowed into winter wear, just so cute. I love the positivity this story radiates, life may be rough but do not give up!
If I may suggest, you could add a little bit of mischief from the little kid, and show the young couple’s romance a little more, as you still had some words left.
Keep writing!

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Review of Fleas  Open in new Window.
Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Fleas?? Are you afraid of them?


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Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Oh my God! Poop! Hahaha, yes, very true, it’s important, yet forgotten at times. And that little boy, so clever, he would never eat his veggies no matter how hard his mother tried! That monster did not seem scary, though! I’d love to know what happened next? All the best with the Writer’s Cramp.
Keep writing!


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Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I think you may use the AI as her friend instead of a foe, or instead of AI taking over human, make the AI a nice little assistant for her. Also, you may introduce a pet to keep her company to combat the loneliness after breakup. Don’t let her go back to her boyfriend, help her find another boy.
Keep writing!


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Review of A Trivial Matter  Open in new Window.
Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I loved this story of yours, like I always do. Families often find the “same-gender-romance” quite sensitive, but burying the truth under lies, just to save reputation? Nah, that’s not something good at all! I loved this story from start to end, it was not monotonous. I just wish that suicide didn’t happen.
Keep writing, all the best with The Writer’s Cramp.

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Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow!
Thank you for such an unusual piece to read. At the beginning, I started to think that the doctors would try to turn this lady into a grasshopper in the long run. Or maybe she’d learn to talk to grasshoppers.
You had won Yesterday’s cramp, congrats for that! And all the best with this round too!
Keep writing!
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Review of Bound North  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow!!
I love the way you’ve portrayed the entire story, I’m glad his master and Amos shared such a sacred bond, that one did not wish the other to be sold, but to be freed instead. All the best with the Cramp. Keep writing so I can keep reading!

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Review of Hitchhiking Tales  Open in new Window.
Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow! That should have been quite the experience. It was an interesting prompt.
Keep writing!


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Review of Family Tree  Open in new Window.
Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow!
This story was quite the time travel for me. I could actually visualize all the scenes, including the lady as I read. That chance encounter blossoming into a pretty romance was also good. I just wish you’d talk a little more about the giant family, though.

Keep writing!
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Review of I Met Mr. C.  Open in new Window.
Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi,
Your relative had witnessed quite a number of historical events. It was clever of him to record all those down for future generations. The part about his child was seriously heartbreaking though. I believe he’s still an angel, watching over all of you.
Write on!
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Review of The Fireplace  Open in new Window.
Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi there,
The fireplace got burned up
They escaped outside
neighbor’s house
I

This doesn’t really look like a short story, it looks like a rough draft instead. It has a good potential, I’d have expanded this a lot more if I were you.
Keep writing
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Review of Squirrel Hunting  Open in new Window.
Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi,
Was this written from experience? Wow, I don’t know what I’d have done in such a scenario. Too bad the squirrel wasn’t edible either. I flew into your port for a good laughter, and got one through this. How was the getting FAT experience from there onwards?
Keep writing

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Review of On that Square  Open in new Window.
Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi Kiya,
Although I didn’t quite understand what exactly the protest was about, I did enjoy this story as the romance element gradually unfolded. I got hooked to the scene where this man helped this woman escape, and everything afterwards. I hope you win the cramp.
Keep writing!
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Review of Lonesomeness  Open in new Window.
Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi,
This is like a very common feeling that stays with many of us. Oftentimes, we don’t know what’s causing that feeling though. I was wondering, was this a poem or an essay? And no, this feeling doesn’t go away, we have to keep battling with it.

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Review of The Intruder  Open in new Window.
Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi there,
Sci-fi is not really my cup of tea, so I settled on this one instead. I was wondering if this has a bit of supernatural element in this, because if the attacker was really shot, how could he show up again? I did like the story from the beginning, but the ending seems a bit confusing, what exactly happened there?

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Review of HAPPINESS  Open in new Window.
Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,
Yes, it doesn’t really take much to be happy, if you know how to be content with the little pleasures of life. I completely agree with you on this. How do you create the happiness baskets? But honestly, sometimes alone means lonely, I can never stay alone.
Keep writing

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Review of Dear Me 2026  Open in new Window.
Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi,
I like all your little goals, all of these seem do able. I was just wondering, why is the letter this short. ? The word limit was 2000, so you can expand this a lot if you wish. The Bradbury seems like a good challenge to take part in.
All the best with the contest.
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Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi,
I haven’t read fantasy in a while, so this was a nice change for me. I must admit, though, I was actually expecting some kind of a romance between the two characters. This is a pretty long story, but every word is worth reading. I like the way you’ve created the setting, enough to hook the reader till the end.
Keep writing!

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Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi,
I thought this was a poem of heartbreak at first, but is it, really? I do like the little story you’ve told using poetic verses, it was easy to visualize. Why do you have “bells” bolded, though? And what’s the last line implying? I’d prefer to read a few more lines here, seems a little abruptly ended.
Keep writing!
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Review of The birthday gift  Open in new Window.
Review by Humming Bird Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Koyel,
I flew into your port to read something nice and dropped on this one. Honestly, I was expecting a younger child when I first saw the title. Your story flows well, maybe, just enlarging the font a little bit would increase readability. I’m glad the girl finally found her long lost friend.
Keep writing!
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