Hi there,
The random review generated this item for me. I liked reading about your grandparents. The only grandparent I got was my maternal grandma, all others passed away before I was born.
This is a useful item, really, got to learn about two different simple cake recipes thanks to you. Keep writing!
Hi there,
I have a soft corner for fur-babies, hence your title dragged me in. I wish you’d describe Stubby a little more, I’d love to know what he/she looked like. What actually happened? Old age complications or something else? I can hear your longing for your pet in your words. Hope stubby is having fun in cat heaven.
Keep writing, Happy account anniversary
Hi there,
Yes, heartbreaks can be horrible. You could have mentioned in your poem why she left you? In the poem she seems so understanding, so comforting, I like the fact that you appreciate the happy moments spent with her, not many people can do that.
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Hiya, me humming again,
I love the way you describe nature. It’s like you are painting a clear picture for me to visualize the scene. I’ve never been to the place you live, so thank you for helping me travel through the words. I’d love to meet Shelly though, it seems like she just came and went away like a comet.
Keep writing, brother
Hi there, friend,
Your Military items came up on my newsfeed, so I wanted to try one out. This one’s a proper rhyming poem, with a nice rhythm too. I wonder what I’d say if someone handed me a cold gun, saying I’m gonna be famous one day. In this poem it looks like the soldier didn’t want to be in the military in the first place. And did you really have to kill this person in the end? I wish he’d live. There are thousands of people who are actually forced to serve in the army even if they don’t want to. This poem was both pleasant and sad to read at once.
Keep writing!
Hi,
I didn’t quite understand your story fully. What was happening here? Some friends were gossiping about some other friend for no reason, is that all? And I did enjoy reading the conversations, felt like I was there somewhere too, talking with them.
I’m listening to the rain as I write this. The details of the storm is so vivid, I felt as if I was walking inside the forest myself. I wonder what I’d do if caught in such a situation, maybe my phobias would kick in. I like the part where you mention the deer most, it shows there were other forms of life around with the man.
Keep writing!
Hello brother,
I came back humming into your port. And yes, “whatever” slaps me the same way it slaps you! Either whatever or “I am bad.” I believe that “whatever” is enough to shut out the door to any relationship. People forget that it’s hard to make, easy to break, but even harder to mend. People just don’t want to do the harder work.
Hello there,
Happy account anniversary. I flew into your port to read something, and landed on this.
This looks like such a sad tale of a daddy-daughter bond. Why does it always have to be that way? Can’t the sweet connection remain intact even after marriage?
I was in pain, so thanks for soothing me with this. Though it’s quite long, every word is worth it.
Hi there,
Happy account anniversary! Jane Austen happens to be one of my most favorite novelists, I adore pride and Prejudice. The only novel of hers I haven’t read was perhaps Northanger Abbey.
This looks like a well-researched item, thanks for teaching us more about her siblings and family.
Keep writing!
I’m 39, partially challenged, and still very afraid to marry to be honest. It’s far better for me to remain as a sister figure around, I’m not wife material, oh no!
But in my opinion, one should marry both for love and companionship, as finances come along the way, but these two matters always stay. Why did you include the videos? Is it your own? Just curious.
I came humming into your port to read something, and fished this out. I absolutely love the idea of writing down mini stories to pay rent. It’s obviously much safer and entertaining than any other ways. I wanted to read more of this, you can write a sequel if you will.
Hello again,
Came humming into your port and stumbled on this. I love the way you described writing as a way of stealing pain away. I’ve been battling some chronic pain all throughout my life, and this is how I fight, through words. You have used some beautiful imagery here. I’d like to read more of yours. Keep writing!
Hi Rupali,
A pleasure meeting you. Where are you from?
And if this poem is based on personal experiences, then let me tell you, you drop down again and again to rise up, finally to become successful, stronger. Keep writing. I'd love to read more from you.
Hi there,
This came up through Random Read and Review. I like the silent shouting in here, as if someone is asking for space but can’t get it. The last line really resonates with me, yes, obviously people bend, but only to make themselves stronger.
Keep writing!
Some good realizations. Sometimes people tend to care too much about external appearance or quality. It’s best to be happy with little, and work hard to get what we want instead of being jealous of others. This can also be extended into something longer if you will. Keep writing.
Hello,
Random reading found out this item for me. Could you finally share this with the person you wrote this for? Is it about a lost friendship? I think many of the readers will be able to relate to this as this is a very common feeling for all. I enjoyed reading this heartfelt poem. Keep writing!
Hello there,
A random read click generated this item. Is this poem meant to be a free verse, or you didn't think about any rhyme or rhythm while writing?
Yes, I know love does hurt, but I think it's better to forget all the bitterness, remember the time enjoyed and move forward.
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Greetings,
Being a Bangladeshi, I can completely relate to this. Sometimes the solution to our problems lie right under our fingers, but we don’t get to see it at all. I love the way this piece ended, as a reader I wouldn’t really appreciate something tragic here. Keep writing.
Hello there,
Yes, it’s always wiser to pen down your thoughts as paper has more patience than people. I enjoyed reading this sweet and rhythmic poem. I just wonder, why rain? Why not anything else?
Hello,
This one's a nice little tale told well in verses. Well, I did stumble on some words, because English is not my first language. I could kinda visualize the lady and that dragon in the end. Some kind of a related image used as a header, might add to the visual appeal. Keep writing!
Hi,
I came across this item through the read and review link. I was drawn to this because of the different format and the unique genre.
Your words just seems a little too clustered, you might try putting some space between the lines. I could actually visualize a group of teenagers talking as I read this. Enjoyable. Keep writing.
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