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Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A poem boasting the qualities of Javert who is a loyal and devoted representative of the law. With a strict character and determination he endeavours to eliminate injustice and establish law and order. His mission is to kill the culprits for the the survival of justice. But the poem requires a little flexibility.
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Review of Shaman's Trance  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem evoking the search of identity. The individual is not aware about the environment and thinks to be in a dream. There is darkness everywhere and no complete orientation. The atmosphere is wrapped with a strange silence. The presence of shadows tend to complicate the surrounding. The writing can be simplified for better understanding
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Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A funny poem describing in what circumstances John met Donna and how he fell for her. The foul smell of the girl does not seem to lessen John.'s enthusiasm. But again he reminds the reader about the bad smell in Donna. In fact ,perfumes cannot promote good hygiene. Hence, the boy's appeal to bathe before going on a date. At the end John is relieved to get rid of her when she returns to Mitch.
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Review of Marianne  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A satirical poem narrating the downfall of the king who was cruel to the subjects. Marianne, portrayed as a saviour tries her best to liberate the country from the atrocities of the king. Many signs of the downfall are clearly described by the writer and almost all the predictions come true. An epic written to celebrate victory.
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Review of Croatia  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
A travel article painting a picture of Croatia, a country once torn by war and political instability. The author gives the reader an overview of the interesting sites which are worthwhile visiting. Much emphasis is also laid on the gastronomy which consists of seafood. Very little information about culture.It requires more details about climate,weather and hotels.
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Review of All Die Once  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem related to the melancholic aspect of life. Life is short and it must be lived to the fullest. Don't let trivial matters ruin our existence. It must be spent happily and harmoniously for death is awaiting us in every nook and corner. Don't waste life by committing blunders and then regretting afterwards. Life is a unique opportunity.
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Review of My shed.  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem reflecting upon the advice of the parent to his son. In fact, it was a good idea to annex a shed to the house. Sometimes, we may need something which is stored there. Then its importance is realised. Instead of buying the items every time it is practicable to keep them for future use. But the things must be arranged tidily. Your father was right.
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Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful poem illustrating the faithfulness of the person towards the other. Devotion of heart and soul to the beloved one. The individual helps other people without expecting to get something in return. Very rare nowadays. The presence of the special person is of utmost importance. Without her life is incomplete. Indeed, it is a unique form of loyalty.
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Review of Untitled  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The untitled poem can be given several titles. It evokes only negative feelings like hatred, darkness, bleeding emotions, death. The word revenge prevails throughout the poem.. However, at the end we see the emergence of love which deletes all the bleak aspects of the piece of writing.
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Review of Hatred Swells  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
The poem is based on all the evil things which take place after sunset in the night. Although being short the poem expresses many ideas. The crying of demons symbolizes ghastly occurrences at night. The attention of the reader is diverted towards the world of supernatural.. However, it requires more elaboration
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Review of Missing You  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E
The poem reminds us of the strong bond between mother and baby. Maternal love is prevalent throughout the poem . The mother is missing the child very much after his demise. She still feels his presence everywhere and cannot bear these sufferings. We see how she is being tormented by this void left in her life.
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Review of My Wish  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A pathetic poem depicting how mother cares extremely for her son. She is preparing herself morally for the departure of her boy but still cannot disguise this suffering with joy. Only the presence of her child means a lot to the mother. The child is a victim of an incurable disease. Even then she wishes to live the last moments with him
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Review of A Pet Shop Visit  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Interesting poem describing how the pet came home from the store and despite all precautions taken by the owner it finally succumbs. The fellow is so engrossed in its admiration that he hardly believes in its death. We see the importance of pets in our life. The movements of the fish in the bowl is accurately painted. To wipe out his sorrow he gets another fish from the store.
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Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Funny poem portraying how the sheriff abused of his power to exploit the weaknesses of other people. We see how Lolly Pop makes use of his authority to seduce Samantha, a girl much younger than him. He tried all means to trap the girl but he failed. The girl avoided him every time. Finally, the sheriff was eliminated by Samantha through the sex organ. Indeed, we learn a good lesson never to abuse one's authority.
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Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The short story illustrated how the girl is struggling to get out of darkness. The man is not convinced that she can move towards light. However ,after many efforts she attains the target but is dragged to darkness by her opponent. She returns to the original point.So many efforts in vain.
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Review of Trial  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It seems to be a competition between the women to become the apprentice . There is a tussle and even blood spilling between the three to get the woman. Finally only the strongest one survives. I get the impression that there is lesbianism with the licking of fur.
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Review of Love Unending  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
From the story the reader learns that the woman has started to live again after the death of her partner. She has completely for gotten the past. But on e thing which strikes the mind is that she had been a battered woman. Although she is enjoying her freedom she is still being haunted by the man's spirit
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Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A good piece of fiction describing how a father is trying to protect his child who had been deserted. But at certain points of the story the reader does not understand clearly what is actually happening. It needs a little more simplification and refining as regards the portraying of the characters.
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Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Incomplete words and sentences which are sometimes confusing. Only one 'e' letter is missing. Is this an innovative style? I do not understand the real meaning of this piece of writing. Perhaps the writer can give more details whether it is a monologue by Sylvia or simply a reflection.
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Review of Able  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Few words explaining many things. The reader admires the bravery of the girl who puts her courage in her both hands and darts forward in spite of danger behind her. The souvenir is used as support to proceed ahead without panicking. But the author has not given us any details about the type of danger and its origin.
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Review of Bunkhouse Porch  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
A poem relating how the cowboys were spending time after work.It is probably referring to olden days when there was no other entertainment. It was a moment of relaxation and merry making. They must be having a nice time telling jokes and stories. But nowadays there are modern forms of entertainment and pastime.
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Review of Gatsby  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
A poem evocative of the past. It depicts how the chap was enveloped with happiness when there was love all around. But now there is feeling of nostalgia. The word beginning comes as a leitmotiv throughout the poem. The reader can feel the suffering of the lover when he is living in the present. He/she wants to turn time back.
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Review of Canvas of Mind  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem is well illustrated with the mysteries of the universe. We see that everything functions according to the preset rules and regulations of the cosmos. The Creator has provided a perfect coordination for the smooth running of the world. Indeed, it is beyond our mind to explain each and every detail of the system. Even science has failed to understand this mystery. All these happenings prove the existence of God.
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Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem paying tribute to the sea and its contents. A marvelous portray of the ocean with the splashing of waves and foam. It underlines the importance of the sea which serves as a companion to man in loneliness. By observing it the individual can achieve tranquility and peace of mind. It is an escapism in the world of mystery.
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Review of the same moon  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
A romantic poem illustrated with the moon used as a metaphor. In fact, in certain cultures it symbolizes love. Just like the moon brings light around and illuminates the earth in the same way love reflects light and happiness in the life of man. Although the title is moon very little mention is made about it throughout the poem.
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