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Review of Saving Melvin  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
A thrilling story depicting the nasty job of police officer trying to enforce law and order particularly among the alcoholics. It must be very awesome to deal with such fellows. Most of the time when they are drunk they create more problems for others that for themselves. The car accident was provoked due to Melvin'n carelessness which could have cost his life. It was a brilliant idea to cover the skull with the scalp till it was sutured. However, is spite of this the wretched chap continues to booze and did not learn any lesson from the mishap.
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Review of Family Christmas  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A practical story for spending Christmas. The whole day seems to be fully occupied. It is one other rare occasions to unite the entire family for celebration. Thee is much of laughter and fun on that day. The small and the elder ones enjoy themselves together. The sharing of gifts is a great event in the family bonding the relationship. But as pointed out we must have a thought for those children who for one reason or another cannot celebrate the festival.
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Review of Leaving home  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A nostalgic poem depicting the sentiments of the college boy leaving home for the first time. Feelings of heart ache and sadness to part from t his Disneyland. In fact we have all gone through this home sickness once in our life. But life is not only playing and merry making. There are other serious matters to handle.The poem seems to been written through emotions. You have to liberate them in order to write freely.
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Review of Bitter-sour  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A realistic analysis of the past olden days. Considering the mode of living to-day and bulk of problems we encounter I will unhesitatingly say that the bygone era was far much better than to- day. In childhood we were wearing rose tinted glasses but as soon as we grow up we must face the harsh reality. Those were the days. Old is gold.
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Review of Dusk to Dawn  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem reflecting on the benefits of darkness. It is an opportunity to do a self critic. During that specific moment different types of thoughts cross the mind. it is a moment of tranquility which procures peace of mind . It contributes towards meditation. But it is also a sign of escapism from one self and by avoiding light.
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Review of A Christmas Scene  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A good descriptive piece portraying the festivities during Christmas. The decorations seem to be sumptuous and suitable for this auspicious occasion. All the requisites of the festival have been minutely programmed. While waiting for the arrival of Santa Claus, the person is enjoying a song on the record player. Indeed it must be a beautiful scenery. But why the gifts are displayed before the arrival of Santa Claus?
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Review of Phoenix  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A romantic piece depicting the love which the person cannot express fully. It is compared with the phoenix. The bird symbolises love and continuity. Through the bird the poet evokes periods of time spent together which will never return. Feelings of nostalgia. But the phoenix is supposed to be born again from its ashes
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Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem written in the form of a love letter. The person is deeply in love with the girl but he feels that he cannot fulfill the desires of his beloved . He looks joyful and desperate at the same time. Happy because the love is reciprocal, sad since the love seems impossible on the practical side. But it is difficult to obliterate her completely from the mind.
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Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem illustrating the preparations carried out to receive a special guest.It is announcing the arrival of somebody coming on holidays. Ice cream, chocolate and doughnut are proposed as desert. But the reader gets little or no information about the guest itself. The table is almost set and everybody is patiently awaiting for the arrival of the important person.
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Review of Swept to sea  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem written in a quite different way. It appears an amalgamation of words through which the poet tries to express different situations. The reader can grasp the strength and weakness of the poet across the lines. There is a repetition of the word cry several times which account for the lamentable conjecture in which the individual finds himself. It requires some fine tuning.
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Review of God's Mistake  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A tragic poem evoking the life of a desperate chap. He seems to be frustrated with the existence. There are innumerable problems which he finds difficult to resolve. But can he fight these hurdles all alone? Of course, he needs the support of a saviour. And only God can save him. But he must knock at the right door.
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Review of Cruel Fate  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A romantic poem depicting the impacts of love on the individual. The idea of going apart from his/ her lover already starts to torment the person mentally. The lovers are being manipulated by the hands of fate. Man is a mere puppet in the hands of destiny. Will the lovers be successful in their goals?
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Review of The Battle  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
A completely different writing style with particular writing in each stanza. The poem is set on the climate changes depicting on the approach of the storm and its impacts on the environment. The wind is blowing over the leaves and affecting the animals also. There is a sudden transformation of the weather.
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Review of By Royal Decree  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A sensitive poem portraying how the king was profoundly affected by the death of his queen. He was terribly grieved by this unexpected demise of his beloved. However, he continued to reign but in a grieved state. Finally, he ceased laughing. The jester Snoot succeeded to make him laugh for a last time by making him swallow the poison. He fulfilled the king's last wish
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Review of In the trap.  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
A philosophical poem based on the realities of life. The poet paints the dark sides of life with particular emphasis on punishment or rewards according to our deeds- karma. What we are to day and what will become tomorrow cannot be predicted. He believes in the present and not in the future. It is a veracity that our present will shape our future. The poem seems to be written in a disorganised style.
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Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
A story starting in an ordinary manner with the girl enjoying herself on Christmas. She seems to be happy under the snow listening to that melodious song. However, it turns into a nightmare with the apparition of the beast. She tries hard to fight against the animal and it pays at the end. The sky looks blue gain.
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Review of Deputy Smith  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting story analyzing the way and methods how the crime was committed . According to the photographs it might be the sheriff but they seem to be misleading. His friend suspects him but cannot really believe it. After many investigations and inquiries he comes to the conclusion that it can't be him
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Review of She Dances  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
A good poem praising the artistic qualities of the dancer. She seems to be swaying her body in a rhythmical manner and accompanied by a good choregraphy. The bodily movements are beautifully described and a real feast for the eyes. But why is she a poison and the writer wants a tactile appreciation?
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Review of TE AMO  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
A romantic poem describing the profound love which the person feels for the other companion. We see to what extent he/ she is immersed in love that it should survive even after departure from this world. The lover does not accept defeat at any cost. It portrays eternal love.
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Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A poem portraying what's happening after dinner. Everybody seems to be occupied with a particular form of entertainment. Some are watching TV, the smaller ones are playing outside. But there is sorrow on this auspicious occasion when the mother remembers her father and sheds a tear. Indeed at such particular time the dear ones come into mind and their absences are strongly felt.
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Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A poem based on how a child views the behaviour of elders towards children. The child seems to appreciate what's going on around him. Although he is still twelve years, he knows much about the pleasures of grown up people. However, there is no time to build a relationship because there is a new scent every day and they are temporary
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Review of NOSTALOGIA  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting poem reminiscent about the pleasant moments of childhood. But alas! this period will never return. Feelings of nostalgia of course. Childhood should be enjoyed to the maximum since it comes once in a lifetime. The topic is well chosen whereby everyone remembers childhood as if it was yesterday. Long live childhood!
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Review of Let's Face IT  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A realistic piece emphasizing on the importance of thanks. It is really good mannered and politeness. People who are not thankful rarely succeed in life. A good analysis of different aspects of life where thanking must be applied The reader gets an overview of the various situations in real life which can be rectified with just a' thank you'.
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Review of And I Said "OH"  Open in new Window.
Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A romantic poem portraying how everything seems to be good in love. At the beginning the lover feels to be living in another world with all the ecstasies of love. But when coming back to reality it is completely different. The word' oh' is well placed at the end of the poem to account for the disillusion.
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Review by Boz Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A sad story portraying how the canines are being parked in the kennel without paying heed to their freedom and needs. In fact they require care and attention just like human beings. These creatures also need love and companionship. When the lady enters the kennel the dogs manifest a great recognition and joy. We see them frolicking and jumping around. But unfortunately some of them have to be eliminated which provokes tears into the eyes of the lady.
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