What a very sad thing it was indeed, and from someone you loved and trusted. I know that something like that will take years to heal and a lifetime of guilt. But you did nothing wrong and should not ever blame yourself. How would you be expected to know about using protection at nine years of age?
I hope that you are no longer in harms way and that one-day you will be able to get on with your life.
Please continue to write about the pain and release it from your life. God bless and you've come to the right
place to express yourself.
Sincerely
Mduci
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A good one to be sure! Who really knows what the mind can and cannot know, or whether it can see you or not.
But isn't it funny how a child can one day crawl over to the piano and climb up on the bench and start to play a piece written by Mozart! Artificial Intelligence? It just may be. I like your piece and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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What a wonderful imagination you have! I love this story; it sounds so true. You've taken a favorite fairytale and made it into a real live experience. Flowerina, was of course my favorite
character and her friends the best yet. I could see
the visuals so clear right down to the sly ole salesman.
Thank you so much for sharing and I look forward to coming back soon for more ham on rye.
Take care
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What a lovely Fortissimo and such a lovely painting you've created! I can see those wild leaves dancing and swaying in the music of wind, the clashing thounder ringing out you've captured it all. I love each line and stanza, but this is by far my favorite,
'The sun returns
As woodwinds softly sing
Then the world is quiet
With one last simple string'
Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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I feel as if I just had lunch with a vampire. This was very scary. Written so very well, and for sometime I thought I was reading a beautiful love story (not). But it is not a love story that I should be reading this late at night. I fear I may have a nightmare! Just my own opinion of course.
I think this one could be rated to read 18+ I rarely read over 13+. Over all it will be a good read for those who like the gore and the sickness of this kind of love.
Good luck with your writing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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What a lovely poem you've written about your best friend. I hope they realize how dearly they are loved and trusted with all that is in you.
It is not often like you say; that someone comes along whom you can tell every single thing to about your life, and all that encompasses such a dear friendship.
To have such a friend is an honor and a pride.
Take care of it and keep writing.
Sincerely
Mduci
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You have such a sweet site! It's always a pleasure to come by for a little Intuey treat. This 'Summertime Sensation' is just adorable and the sounds of the white-capped waves crashing on the oceans floor sound so good and cooling to the heat we have today in California. Thank you for sharing and I'll be back soon.
Sincerely
Mduci
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What a wonderful story! Told so vividly and with so much visual effects. I enjoyed reading this little tale very much, it was delightful. A young lady Holmes, to be sure. I love the country where it takes place! When I go there again in just a few weeks to Salzburg for a few days I will think of your story and of Liselotte. Thank you so much and have a wonderful 1st WDC birthday.
Sincerely
Mduci
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I love the sun, but we all know that too much sun is rough on the skin! This piece is adorable and is one to keep for sure. I love the way you play with words and I find I do that a lot of the time.
The beat and the rhythm is just perfect for me and I could have read more into this piece. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com. I look forward to reading more of your work in the near future.
Sincerely
Mduci
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I must admit that from the time I got up this morning in very hot and sunny California, I have been laughing while doing my reviewing here at the WDC. Nowhere else can I get so many laughs for free. Thank you, thank you for this laughable cutie it had me in screaming tears. I could see this spinning lady falling off the treadmill, and then coming by taking the brownies out of green bag. Come to think of it I promised to make some brownies for my underweight sister today, so I'd better get on my weight...I mean way!
Take care and welcome to Writing.Com, I'll be back very soon for more good laughs.
Sincerely
Mduci
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Lady Winter is all that you've painted her to be and what a beautiful job you did with your brush dipped in emerald of the most vivid color, (also my favorite color). Would you believe that I could see the visual of her tipping so lightly among the orchids? What a picture, what a refreshing thought for a look towards winter. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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I always know if I need a good honest laugh I can run by your site and you'll have one for me every time.
This one is no exception, it is Saturday morning in my house, my sister likes to sleep in on sat. I like to laugh out loud and be thankful for another living day.
I'm sitting here laughing my insides out not far from her bedroom at my reference desk.
Picture her opening her door and glaring at me, then she looks at my pc and sees the bright yellow on the screen.
"Oh! Writing.com," she complains, "don't you ever take a breath?" as she slams her door.
Now I'm really screaming both at her and this last line, 'Life-its NOT like the brochure'
Thank you so much for this great read and a thousand laughs.
Wow! I really do love this one, I love every tiny short line.
This must be the cat's meow (excuse the pun) it is just super wonderful.
The last stanza is just what the doctor ordered for me tonight.
'we can only look above and within
my heart is my ocean
my dreams are in the sky
I live while alive
And my line is when I die'
Thank you so much for sharing this little darling, welcome to Writing.Com and keep up the great writing.
Sincerely
Mduci
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This is so very beautiful! Every word you speak/sing is just wonderful. You have filled my heart with the sound from above and I know in My Fathers House all is well. Thank you so much for sharing these words with me tonight they touched the core of my soul. We are living in time of peril and I don't think it can touch us if we just call on his name. I love your every line, but these stand out for me,
'We all try to blend with those
Who don’t want the yellow rose
But I disagree
Cover what you need to hide
But let your self go free'
I will come to visit again very soon to read more from your site and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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What a wonderful piece you've written and in reading I could feel the angel soaring to great heights high above the clouds and for a fleeting moment I felt that I was taking that same soaring flight!
I could close my eyes and see the picture you painted so very clear. Your intellect is powerful for one so young. Please continue to write and never let anything come between you and your gift. I love every line and these lines do stand out,
'Reached an endurable land,
rocks of heights, splendors of nature.
Desirable sights so grand;
surrendered it for a greater adventure.'
Good luck in your writing adventure and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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What a beautiful poem written for your mom! I can truly relate to this piece as I had that same beautiful relationship with my mom. She had the strength of ten men and the temper to match when
it came down to her children. I love every line
of your poetry and these are my favorite,
'How shall I thank you for your love?
You proved my worth; you gave me pride.
You helped me show to all the world
The fearless girl who lived inside.'
I hope I have shared that same strength with my children and that it will carry on over to my grandchildren. Thank you for sharing this lovely tribute and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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This is truly a little cutie! I love each one of your lines. I could really see this body all shinning and
sunscreened down laying across the sandy beach. At least for five minutes anywayout loud please.
In sunny California I'd really have to scrub those dirty sunshine skies(smog)abounds.
Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com, I look forward to visiting again soon.
Sincerely
Mduci
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I have a sister-in-law who lives in Holland and is
a member of the lightworkers, she sends me well being
healing cleanses and I know they really work and I always feel so much better and cleaner, after a good cleaning.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful relaxation and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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You hit a home run with me with this one! I love riding and I will be riding in the Cinque Terre
next month and it will be a big challenge for me
as there are five villages and lots of hills to climb.
I'm preparing myself for it, so it was refreshing to get your birds eye view on bike riding. Thanks for sharing.
Please continue to write and ride, welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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What a lovely bit of prose for the newly wedd's! This would make me very proud to know that someone with so much talent had written this for me on my wedding day.
Thank you so much for sharing this one and I look forward to reading everything in your port this weekend.
Please thank your Muse for bring this one out and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
Mduci
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. You've taken a favorite fairytale and made it into a real live experience. Flowerina, was of course my favorite