Sometimes we have the best time basking in the wonderful memories of yesterday, yesteryear, or
anytime.
I look forward to being able to live in
the freshness of the moment spent with a love one
or dear friend's. Better yet is to catch them on
film or journals to be remembered when the memory begins to fade . Thank you for sharing and welcome
to Writing.Com.
I like how you've described this storm, I've seen a few like this. I love the rain and some milder storms
but those real strong ones can be quite concerning. I too love it when they pass, but worry for other places and cities where they may not be as secure.
Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
This is a little cutie for sure, your timing, rhyme, and rhythm was very much on time and I love your little painting. The visual was clear and it cut right to the chase. Thank you very much for sharing,
and welcome to Writing.Com.
A most fascinating story told in first person narration. At some points I could feel the hair
stand up on my arms and I felt a sense of dread for this young man. Who by being locked away in total isolation from all contact with anyone at anytime.
until the night visitor comes into his pitiful life.
The image of his alter ego Mr. Night became his only
link with the world and only as a listening board, as he never gave any hint that he could speak.
His steady decline into madness was quite obvious
and I'm sure that this would be the same if this would be the case today. It maybe the case in some
instances in this country or another.
I’m not familiar with the prison laws in the state of PA, but it certainly seems such a cruel thing to do to anyone for any reason. With the exception
of murder of which none was committed. Thank you for sharing this story and I look forward to learning more about this kind of torture.
This is so inspiring, I love every line and verse and
we all should be inspired to live to be one-hundred and six. I think I am insired to live that long, just so we can keep in touch and remind each other who we are .
Meg, dear you are a great talent and a wonderful friend. Thanks for sharing this one and I hope everyone will read and be inspired.
I must agree with this one, I hate to get up before the sun rises in the morning, and I hate to go to bed with the chickens. But I feel the need to go quickly to my covers when the sun goes down so fast. Thank you
my friend for sharing this one with me it makes a lot of sense to me!
Love and Hugs
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Oh! Meg, what a walk down memory lane that was and for sure I remember when, I use to ask my mom and dad; "did they have cars when you were young?" Or better yet I remember asking did they have cars in the old days, to which they would reply, "It wasn't that long ago." Now I hear my grandchildren ask their parents, the same questions that must be asked from each generation. What will it be in the year 2050? Not that I'll be around to hear it . Thanks Meg, I love it, and remember it well.
Have a wonderful week.
Sincerely
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What a perfect way to start the day! This was so beautifully written and the poem at the beginning
sets it right off. Thank you for sharing this lovely
bit of prose and I look forward to stopping by again very soon to read more from your port.
Sincerely
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I truly like this poem written from the heart! Your words are blissful and a blessing to the eyes. The
visual is very nice and I can see that you put yourself into it 100%. Thank you so much for sharing and I look forward to coming to visit again very soon.
A lovely poem; written with so much tender loving care; for the person who holds your heart. Just a few suggestions, you don't have to except them of course, but it would be so much better to read if it was broken down into stanzas. Maybe written in your favorite color, remember this is just a suggestion.
I found just a few little typo's happens to everyone.
Over all it is lovely thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
It is in the way you touch, look, and smile at eachothereach other
Love is knowing that this person competes you
completes you
What a unique idea, and a great way to use the emotioncon decorations for your beautiful tree.
Every emotion was captivating and enjoyable to read.
This must have taken a lot of thought and I'm sure it
was very time consuming to be sure. Good luck in the contest and welcome to Writing.Com.
Wow! This was told completely in the first person, and left me feeling so sadden by the hopelessness for the life of your character. The things that she endured while she lay in this suspended state, and all the time talking to those who came to visit, unable to make them hear what she had to say. What a smart thing for the police to do having her room wired in order to catch the perpetrator. I felt she was redeemed somewhat due to his being brought to justice.
He was very sick and hope that he gets his just dues.
Thank you so much for sharing this story and I look forward to reading more from your port.
Very nice piece on the whole! Just seems a little lost for words-that would give it a real meaning. Some of the words have been over used and lack what would make your poem unique and totally yours.
Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com, I look forward to reading your work again in the future.
Eight little lines of pure beauty, you make me wish for the snow and ice covered lakes, children on ice skates and sleds on mountain peaks. A lovely painting
I could see the visual so very clear and the ghost of winter soon to be here.
Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Today is one of those days when you do a few reviews and each one you read feels like it was written just for you! Well, this was just such a day each verse felt like it was written just for me and touched me very tenderly and deeply. Thank you so much for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
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I admit that I had to read this story twice before recognizing that something didn't quite go here! That these are the words of a famous woman writer of which you did not even give a mention. You cannot assume that because you change a word or two that the writing becomes yours with out it being a quote, unquote. Its my feeling that you should go back over this piece and put it in your own words. Or at least give credit where credit is due.
Sincerely
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PHENOMENAL WOMAN
by Maya Angelou
Pretty women wonder where my secret lies
I'm not cute or built to suit a model's fashion size
But when I start to tell them
They think I'm telling lies.
I say
It's in the reach of my arms
The span of my hips
The stride of my steps
The curl of my lips.
I'm a woman
Phenomenally
Phenomenal woman
That's me.
I walk into a room
Just as cool as you please
And to a man
The fellows stand or
Fall down on their knees
Then they swarm around me
A hive of honey bees.
I say
It's the fire in my eyes
And the flash of my teeth
The swing of my waist
And the joy in my feet.
I'm a woman
Phenomenally
Phenomenal woman
That's me.
Men themselves have wondered
What they see in me
They try so much
But they can't touch
My inner mystery.
When I try to show them
They say they still can't see.
I say
It's in the arch of my back
The sun of my smile
The ride of my breasts
The grace of my style.
I'm a woman
Phenomenally
Phenomenal woman
That's me.
Now you understand
Just why my head's not bowed
I don't shout or jump about
Or have to talk real loud
When you see me passing
It ought to make you proud.
I say
It's in the click of my heels
The bend of my hair
Hello smiley14U,
The palm of my hand
The need for my care.
'Cause I'm a woman
Phenomenally
Phenomenal woman
That's me.
This a beautiful and haunting piece, which tells me the story of one nearing death as we know it, far from home family or friends. It is not their wish to die, and he begs to live for today and leave him his life until tomorrow, when he may be stronger and regain his life. Written with much knowledge and wisdom a great writing and wonderful read, thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.Com.
Sincerely
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The cycle of life is such a beautiful inspiration of the nature of earth and its abounding habitat.
You've filled your canvas with the entire spectrum of varied colors splashing them across the vastness of your huge canvas. Your mixture was a pure delight and I changed with each different color scheme, according to the season.
Thank you for this perfect picture, and welcome to Writng.Com.
Sincerely
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