I loved your poem "Morning Ardor" although I have never been a morning person myself.
Thanks also for including your lexicon. The word aubade is new to me, but I will definitely be using it in the future. I love finding new and fun words.
You have done an excellent job with this form. I see no spelling or mechanical errors here.
I enjoyed reading your lovely Thanksgiving poem. And you truly do have something to be thankful for. What a wonderful sentiment. I love the last line: "no stumbling blocks--only stepping stones!" So often we forget that simple truth.
You have written a good free form poem, which has a nice rhythm and flow.
I enjoyed reading your poem about life's storms. It is a lovely poem with a beautiful sentiment.
Your quatrains are excellent and well-contsturced. Poems with such long lines are often hard to write, and to keep the rhythm and flow going. You have don a great job with this. Good rhymes also.
What a lovely tribulte to one that you loved so much, and who loved you in return. I am sorry for your loss. You have truly touched the reader with your poem.
This is a really nice free form poem. I see no obvious mechanical errors.
Congratulations on winning second place in the Acrostic contest. This is a wonderful poem with a lovely sentiment about a special gift. Thank you for sharing it with us.
You have done an excellent job with the acrostic form.
What an interesting little poem. I don't think I have ever seen a shaped poem, and I really enjoyed reading it. The poem itself is really nice, and you have obviously done a great job with the shape.
This is a nice free form poem. You have inspired me to try something like this also.
I loved your poem about the old deserted shack. You have described it so well the reader can really see it and feel it and taste the dry dustiness all around.
I especially liked the line: For it's warm and holds the memories of good cheer.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your Saraband Sonnet. It is a beautiful love story. I did not know that there was such a thing as a Saraband sonnet. I will definitely have to try this form.
I love to play Sarabandes, and especially my favorite, G.F. Handel's Sarabande from the Keyboard Suite in D Minor for harpsichord. I have had the pleasure of actually playing it on a harpsichord, but usually play it on the piano when I am performing. LOL, which has nothing to do with reviewing your poem.
I really enjoyed your poem "Bridge Across the Atlantic". Your words and images take the reader to an interesting fantasy world. I especially liked the first two lines.
I wonder why you picked the Atlantic to cross in your fantasy, as I believe the deepest part of the ocean, the Mariana Trench, is in the Pacific. LOL, just a bit of nit picking, as I love the beautiful Pacific, and was blessed to be born and raised along its shores.
I really enjoyed your poem "Message in a bottle" where you, the writer seem to actually be the message.
You have well constructed quatrains and good rhymes. In verse six, line two is very short compared to your other lines. But surprisingly this works in this poem, and does not break the rhythm and flow of the reading.
And i love the way you call the Pacific Ocean "mystic." There is just no other ocean like it.
You have written a wonderful poem on this subject, and I enjoyed reading it very much. I especially like the way you question when the reader will start to help.
This is a good free form poem. It has a nice rhythm and flow. I found no obvious grammatical or spelling errors.
Really enjoyed your little poem about Altos. I am a first soprano, and you are right. We always do seem to get the recognition. However, I have always longed to have a beautiful deep alto voice like my Mother's. Maybe it is just that we do not appreciate what we have.
Anyway you have written a cute little poem with rhyming quatrains, and have done a great job.
I really liked your little poem "Calling Me Home". I loved the images you painted with your words. I especially liked the last verse, as I return from my wanderings in space to come home. Only someone who knows the night well could create such images.
You have a nice free form poem with a gentle rhythm and flow.
I enjoyed reading your little poem about a secret. It really was fun. I think many of us can remember little secrets that we had when we were small. Sadly it seems, the secrets we have as adults are so much darker than those little secrets from long ago.
I really liked your little poem on silence a lot. I love the way you compare sounds and sight, and sounds and light. One does not usually think of sounds as something visual. And even in the last line your silence still asks the reader to see it by comparing it to dreams appearing.
I enjoyed reading your little love poem very much. I thought it was interesting that your poem is titled "I Keep Tears", and in all the verses until the end you do not shed your tears. Then suddenly you do.
You have done a good job with your format, and I see no obvious mechanical errors.
I enjoyed reading your most interesting poem. You are right. It could be interpreted in a number of ways, which made it a challenge to read. Well, I do have my interpretation, which I shall keep to myself, as yours may be quite different.
This seems to be written in sonnet style, and you have done a good job with it.
I really enjoyed reading your poem about your totem animal, the wolf. I especially like the way your free form poems leads the reader on a journey with you.
Although the poem is long, the way you have varied the lengths of the lines and punctuated the poem made it easy to read and follow.
This is an interesting and fun little poem you have written. I am not sure that your description of the poem really describes the poem accurately, as It does not seem to be about a typewriter at all.
This is a good free form poem, and you have done a good job with that format.
Best wishes, Cynaemon
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