I thought you captured the sense of this poem really well, the mistake made by the child and having them wished it rectified, but without luck. Nicely done.
That was a nice poem to read. Well themed about this site and the early days of navigating. I think that generally everyone here would be able to remember. Nicely done.
Good effort at describing this situation in a poem. I only noticed one problem with grammar. In the line - He life is troubled. Should that be her life?
This was an interesting poem to read. I found it to be well and accurate to the theme touching on most, if not all aspects of love. Nicely done, good work.
I thought this was an entertaining version of the theme and I enjoyed reading it. good work.
I have only one suggestion. In the segment below, I think it would work to word it this way. As dawn approached, the house...........
As dawn approach the house was a pile of charred wood. Ivy’s father turned toward the couple and smiled. He was told what happened and accepted the fact that Ivy couldn’t stay with him.
He walked over to Ivy and hugged her, tight. “I just want you to be happy.”
I thought this story was nice to read. It captured the stage of first holiday alone very well. In this instance, Christmas. The ending where the pieces came together with the wording blocks and Garfield was good too, it added a bit of hounmor into a seriosu topic. Good work.
This was a nice poem to read. It stuck to the fourth of July theme really well. Not only did it have the freedom symbols, the wording backed it up. Great result on the freedom contest last year though. Nicely done.
This is another well ordered folder. Good work at keeping all poems under one main theme. The titles look really interesting and I'll be checking them out. Nicely done.
Nice idea. Not sure about clutter, but this is very well arranged. Interesting contest though. it was a good idea to put up the link at the top for anyone who didn't know about it.
The contents of this folder look quite interesting. I see that there is a nice variety of poem themes and types from the titles and descriptions. Good work.
Nice work on this style of poetry. I thought you captured the sense of summer really well. It's certainly something to look forward to. The layout was nice. Good work.
I thought this was a very interesting wording on the experience of an earthquake. Tying it in with dance styles was something I haven't seen before. Good work, nicely done.
This was an interesting poem to read. I thought you captured the setting really well, giving it a cold undertone what with being late at night, on one that seemed quite dreary. I guess that climate was normal for the location. Good work.
This item was amusing to read. I enjoyed seeing what the solution was in the end. Well done at putting humour into it. I found it funny the contents of the teacher's desk drawers.
That was a sad story/memory. I thought you recalled it really well. What I found most distinctive was the yearly visits didn't give much chance to see the transition. Instead the change was very notable from one visit to the next. Nice work.
Reviewing folders is new to me. But I liked the way you laid this out. The decription above is really well done and it certainly sets the tone really well.
That was a good entertaining story to read. The quest went off well, enough problems arising in it for the girl to overcome that made it a challenge. I liked the ending how the court dispersed as if it had never been there. Good work.
I thought this was really interesting to read. You summed up the genre picks very well. Fantasy travel. Certainly was quite a trip. Neat choice of names also. Nicely done.
This article story was really good to read. Cats can be so amusing and you've got some really good memories here. It certainly made me smile. Kittens can be even more amusing and this item reflects that quite well. They certainly have disctinctive personalities. Nicely done.
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