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Dan Sturn
This indeed is a nice contrition and deep observation, you have expressed in a smooth flowing and yet in a deep manner. The balance and the inner meaning have long term effects and cant be ignored in today's scenario. Overall a gem of a poetry that reflects your refined and dynamic skills.
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druid
This is a nice and interesting story you have written, and you have done excellent subtle expression of love and ambiance. Great job and I thoroughly appreciate your creativity and emotions, these traits are critical in a serious and simple writer with basic grasp on pulse of the audience.
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Dan Sturn
This is a nice and rare poem, as it is rhythmic and unique in appearance. There is a nice and creative observation on onion peel, and further complexity with no valuable outcome. Overall a nice and deep poem on blade, with perfect and unique word choice and appearance.
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and insightful poem, and makes clear about your inner understanding and clarity on ego and its effect on life and the ongoing presence and uniformity of habit.
This poem makes one dive deep in our inner self and prospect of the technological changes happening in our surroundings.
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Brit Engels
This is nice and creative poem, that captures the creativity and inner flame, and poet tries to express and yet feel betrayed. This is short and intense poem that hits the basic human and poetic nerve. I feel the urge and basic inner feeling after comprehending.
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Dan Sturn
This is a nice and insightful introduction, and I feel the inner urge to go through all the ideas deeply embedded in your creative and brilliant writing. I was indeed moved by the line "and see we’re waiting here to dream,and watch us while the stars all gleam." I will certainly delve deep in your portfolio.
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MrsDesjardins2012
This is a nice and emotional story and did leave deep impression. The words “He may not be compatible with life.” still ring a bell.I will appreciate and enjoy the complete piece when this plot and rather unbridled emotions are given full justice.
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