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denbo356
This is a interesting and unique story with all different emotions packed together and as a reader I did have nice laugh and enjoyed direct and rather subtle way of putting the ironies of life in a interesting manner. Nicely written details and I can see reaction and surprise in face of Jimmy when told by Miss Urquart to remain in cheap looking American Indian head dress, all this and other scenario makes this a descriptive, good imagery and nicely written fascinating details. This kind of story holds a reader's interests and is easy to follow. An eerie twist but delightfully done. I enjoyed reading this..Sindbad
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Averren
This is a nice and interesting story that did fulfill all the components of fantasy as a reader I was deeply involved with Rena's sixth sense her heightened sixth sense and the way you presented different situations. I congratulate you with such a lovely and unique story line and wish you all the best for your future endeavors.The words flow well and I feel like I was there.No errors. Excellent impression. Hope you get to do these things you mentioned...Sindbad
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Jack Goldman
This is a interesting and rare story I have come across in WDC. I have gone through a lot of content I was lured by the dynamics of the defiant race. The balance between the myth and current events. Your ability to create and maintain suspense and simple dynamics of the plot did leave a deep impression. I have limited suggestion on improvement however I did feel the need to get further clarification of the events that happened inside the cave...Sindbad
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Survivor48
A good style, nice poetry style, a nice touch of humor and heart warming, well written details. A lot of time and thought went into this. A nice rhyme pattern compliments this poem and gives it the right touch. Nicely done."Society states wealth dominates righteousness,As unethical results overpower principles." Easy to follow and as usual, you write from the heart. Creative and great presentation...Sindbad
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Survivor48
A nice style with a lot of thought provoking details and good and bad reflections "Sorrow doesn’t want to stand alone,
Wanting other people to feel depressed." Good potential as I enjoyed reading this. A good style and nice form of poetry. A nice style, good tone and it looks like you put a lot of time and thought went into this...Sindbad
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Handle
This is a nice and interesting story with nice and elegant take on a era that remains a golden era for lot of readers. I was impressed with free flowing and rather fertile imagination in this short story. Good presentation and a pleasure to read. The details and your thoughts come together very well and makes this an enjoyable piece of writing. Excellent impression...Sindbad
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and short observation on a profession, that I have read and understood in novels. I did feel the basic nerve and practical greed you have expressed. I was impressed with strong and highlighted expression of your point of view in such a subtle and simple manner...Sindbad
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Tim Chiu
This is a simple and creative piece you have written, I am trying to follow the trend you use in formulating a poem. I can comprehend your secret formula, as absorbing the essence of the title and expressing the crux of the title in a lucid and creative manner and as a reader this is a learning experience. A good style with nicely written details and good imagery on resting. Easy to follow and a neat rhyme pattern gives this a good flair. This is creative and it looks like a lot of time and thought went into this in coining lines like "You cavort with on a regular basis..." . No errors. Excellent impression...Sindbad
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and simple poem, and as a reader I enjoyed your writing style and focus on the kitten and an inherent purity of love. A good style with lovely reflections as I love my kitten and it did bring those emotional and unique moments in life. Overall a nicely written details, which gives this good imagery. A good word flow, nice tone and a neat rhyme pattern gives this a good flair. A pleasure to read. Nice presentation..Sindbad
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and pristine poem, and like all your poem has a heart and life of its own. You at the beginning explored the innocence of children, and creatively moved to the subtle nuances of adulthood. All this with a glaring and rather deliberate deviation from the innocence of youth. Overall I liked this poem and expect eagerly more such innocent, pristine and creative poem that has a vibrant heart of its own..Sindbad
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and deep poem, as a reader I did get the see- saw pattern and basic heart about human efforts, expectation, troubles and other emotional swings we all experience in different degree and level as per our environment. As a reader I did feel the heart of heavy words like inadvertent, ineptitude, magnanimous,constancy, beleaguered, systemic, conceptualize, chalice, and triumphant all this reflect to different ability and deep intention for getting recognition in form of love. Overall a excellent and rather creative poem that reflects and highlights the unique position we as human occupy in this cosmos..Sindbad
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Paradoxical
This is a nice and profound take on truth. They are real, and can be identified with in so many ways. All of the wishes and dreams, prayers and tribute to truth about history has given us this mortal life with its trials and tribulations, awakens the spirit in such a profound way. Nice and elegant touch..Sindbad
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Serenity
This is a open ended and creative poem you have written on rainbow and as a reader I find this fulfilling, inspiring and simple with no room for correction or suggestions.You constantly create beautiful, stories and poetry that capture the heart and I will writ more of reviews on work from your portfolio..Sindbad.
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Steve Jebson
This is nice and rather special tid bits you have captured and as a reader I can appreciate and judge your inner outlook and spirit. Your favorite, likes dislikes and all other idiosyncrasies have been captures with short and simple words.Nice and short way to bring the reader right into your world as you have scribed it for us...Sindbad
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Hyperiongate
This is a short and simple story about a candidates preparation, apprehensions, fears and peer pressure. All this you have captured with smart and simple words. As a reader I was appalled with your sudden and surprising end. Great job..Sindbad
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Duane Spanel
This is a nice and active poem on anger as an American and as a citizen. As a reader I was able to relate to direct reference to the problems and high pitch conviction in moving towards a solution. This poem as well reflects your inability and to an extent inability of majority to proactively support and implement the solutions...Sindbad
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Kevin♥
This is a creative and poetic take on a tragic emotion. I was impressed with your style of writing about the depressed feeling in so subtle and creative manner, and a reader who has similar experience will identify with this poem and the drip drip with real significance ( from the heart). Overall a impressive and creative take on silent rain..Sindbad
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Mouser
This is a nice and elegant take on sun sign and its relation between soul mates. You did a great job in securing a new and refreshing meaning and direction to compatibility between different elements like fire, water, air and earth. I am impressed and appreciate your identifying the uniqueness and subtle difference in reality..Sindbad
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Basilides
This is a interesting article you have written with scientific and practical facts on existence of God. As this is a personal and inner revelation of each and every wise and articulate person, the discussion and their end arguments were convincing and intelligent. Although this is a short piece, you've crammed a lot into it. I am looking forward for the sequel of this same topic..Sindbad
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Acid Wire
This is a nice and action oriented poem you have written.A nice style and this speaks out to you. Nicely chosen words that interweave well with the rest of the poem. A neat rhyme pattern and looks like you spent time with this. Best Wishes..Sindbad
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Simple Dykie
The topic and its unique bend did catch my attention and I was not surprised with interesting twist and creative flow on this story. A good setting as the beach is always a beautiful place for good imagery and makes you feel like you are there. Nicely, written colorful details, Good job..Sindbad
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Simple Dykie
This is a nice and deep story wherein you have explored certain untapped potential, and the timeless quality of the same. I liked the title and its inherent meaning. Written from the heart like all your other stories. A good style and great writing...Sindbad
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Simple Dykie
This is a nice and subtle glimpse of the unexpected and your unique style of making this a interesting story. A good style with nicely defined details and questions that are answered with humor style. A lot of time and thought went into this. Good job and a nice read...Sindbad
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Simple Dykie
This is a nice and somber piece you have written on boy. You were able to initiate the basic strength and awareness you gave to the main character. I did feel like I was living through the era and surroundings you have written. Overall I wonder In any case, there is still some story left to be written and you have built up enough suspense for the readers to wonder how it will continue. I am eagerly waiting for the sequel..Sindbad
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ozhan
This is a nice and interesting story. I was able to comprehend your simple and practical style, that goes on to express your grasp and control on the plot of the story. Life in the bubble does not seem to be as safe as written, for living vicariously through the actions and adventures of others is depressing, and living life taking too much energy and love causing pain makes the safety implied inside the bubble to seemingly burst through trials and tribulations. The story is extremely emotional. I liked that...Sindbad
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