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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
BEAR

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*Jackolantern* *Pumpkin* *Leafo* Fall into Halloween Raid *Jackolantern* *Pumpkin* *Leafo*


I am falling in love with your style. You have a unique ability in creating a picture with limited characters that leaves a deep impression in the mind of readers. Here you were able to do the same with a stray cat, a silly dog, and two people. I was impressed with ending -
And please don't take forever, make up your mind,
this porch can get real cold sometimes.
We could be together, with Sam my brother,
then no one would be left behind.
This was well written and I enjoyed reading it all the way through. I was surprised at the end to see the result, it was not the direction I thought this was going. Overall, this is a well written piece. The poem looks great centered on the page. There are no noticeable spelling, punctuation or grammar errors. The voice of the poem is clear and delivers a great tapestry for the reader's mind. .Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
*Jackolantern* *Pumpkin* *Leafo* Fall into Halloween Raid *Jackolantern* *Pumpkin* *Leafo*


This is a nice and emotional short story and as a reader I did feel the different emotions starting from happiness and starry eyes of falling in love to intense grief of not meeting at appropriate time, a sense of despicable dislike of being dump in love for no apparent reason. All this and more has been beautifully captured in words by you. Overall this is a unique and rather out of the stream love story wherein the main characters meet under most creative and unlikely circumstances that can be guessed by an author.Great job this is well written and was a joy to read specially the ending. Thank you for sharing..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and simple poem signifying the importance of watching performance of wining athletes in tape and adhering to same level of performance, commitment and overall resolution in winning. As a reader one gets feeling that you have been through all the best practices that brings laurels to competing athletes.You have a good flow and a strong ending, captivating our attention.
The title draws us in and you explain the very same throughout your poem, not leaving us to doubt anything. My favorite part: "But honestly able and truly exemplary,
Their film school belief is quite complimentary -
Their analysis in earnest has yielded a prize
Which all film studiers must recognize! "

As I could relate to it from heart.Thank you again for all your creativity you allow us to see,specifically the vital components in your words...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a poem that captures your experience and rather first hand awareness of dilemma of purchasing a property that cant be resold and same or higher price.This was a clever read from the beginning i.e ones health equate to one's wealth or many time broken promises.I liked how this was a surprise at the end. You don't know what you are getting until you read each and every word like selfishly aware intent of prior owners or journey of hope, prosperity, and gains etc..Overall a wonderful piece that I could find nothing to add to.. Sindbad


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Review of The Time Spent  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and humorous take on our limits and how we over estimate the same.Overall I thought this was a great tool and information for many people like the job we are seeking are like roof leaking or that bullish demeanor, makes all the grass greener. But work world's still meaner and trying to get leaner... This is a thought provoking piece that evoked great contemplation. I didn't notice any errors to comment upon. Great piece of writing, though I thought it could be expanded upon specially the end but just paying the rent will make you Clark Kent..Sindbad


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Review of Poetic Canvas  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dan Sturn
This is a nice and rather refreshing experiment or take on journatation. A term I did find catchy and savvy as well. The witness consciousness of the canvas and the poetic representation of the world its changing events did leave deep impression in my mind.Overall this is a terrific piece as it is.The words paint a great picture that is easy for the reader to interpret. Great imagery is cleverly created through the poem...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a wonderful, inspirational and very personal poem, telling some of the poet's history and experience with a child and his rebellion nature, this is well highlighted with words like, "A tribute to virol, brute strength Along with vivacious arts; Handed down by habit" I particularly love the ending of the poem but the whole thing works well and flows nicely.Thanks for sharing your work. Keep writing! Best wishes..Sindbad


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Review of In Sweetness  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
BEAR
This is a nice and moving song about melodies and sweet moments. A loving poem of memory and senses that bring on a smile as one is transported back to that first encounter. A poetic verse of deep sorrow and sadness and from this sweet and nourishing memories are beautifully expressed here...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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drifter
This is a very touching and admirable speech you have drafted for your mothers funeral.A title that sums up the writing with great accuracy and directness.This is a story that not only showcases the love felt, but loops it in time so that the memory is infinite. A very clever piece that I enjoyed reading..Sindbad


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Review of Eyes of Mist  
for entry "6 - The Guardian" 
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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ForgottenDreams
This is a long and interesting story and it touched spiritual nerve in me. I felt the spiritual power and subtle nuance of protection and sacrifice.A twisted tale of devotion and loyalty, this is dark and has a plot that will give you the chills. Well written, you don't suspect a thing, right up until the end. With misdirection this thriller takes us on a journey through friendship and the sacrifices that are sometimes made. I didn't notice any spelling or technical errors to comment upon. This was well written and I enjoyed reading it all the way through. I was surprised at the end to see the result, it was not the direction I thought this was going...Sindbad


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Review of Eyes of Mist  
for entry "5 - Dark Journey" 
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi
ForgottenDreams
This like the previous sequel was equally intense and invigorating.This is a well written piece that was easy to read and get caught up into. The foreboding was so strong that it lept off of the page and had me on the edge of my seat.Lines I liked "Warily they went on. Suddenly the cave's roof retreated into darkness and they found themselves in a large cavern. In front of them, on the hall's opposite wall, there were two stones cut like gems that emitted a pale glow. Yet the moment they stepped out of the hallway into the cavern they flared with blue fire as if greeting them. Now they could discern between those two light sources the outline of an ornate gate." It is deep and dark with twists and turns that keeps the mind engaged as well as the reader. An excellent piece of writing...Sindbad


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Review of Eyes of Mist  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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ForgottenDreams
As I read through this dramatic crime thrilling story, I was struck that I had reached the end so soon. This was an intense piece that held me spellbound and in the moment. Time flew as I read and was involved in the action as it spilled out onto the page I was impressed with Ayana, and overall title as a perfect name i.e voice of enemy...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Team Contract
The preamble written in black really draws my attention and sets the scene for the story. It is a great lure that gives footing for what is to come. With this as an opening, the reader is already immersed within the story without being aware. The action packed sequence is on the edge of your seat and like the title the readers gets the full worth of excitement in this long and interesting sequel and eager to move to the next sequel...Sindbad


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Review of Death Bed  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Dan Sturn
This is a nice and moving poetry you have written in memory and honor of your Grandmother. I was moved by the first paragraph stating plastic rosary left by the plastic priest. Both signifying the so worldly with context to the soul that remains changeless, birth-less, deathless and hence remains our witness consciousness for infinity. The second paragraph highlighted by limitation of time space and causality. The final moment and its reunion did leave deep impression on me. The third paragraph reflected the dignity and spirituality of your grandma. The forth paragraph shows your deep understanding and take on knowledge or the right knowledge in short.I found this to be a very spiritual piece that speaks of a religious tone and of a higher power. The more I read I found the reverence and love for grandma and faith was the theme of the poem. Full of love and discovery, this is a journey of the soul of your grandma that is laid to rest before us. Thank you for sharing...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Teguettler
This is a nice and interesting story on Hadrian and as a writing class assignment you have been very specific and following the guidelines to the hilt. Overall I did learn the different heads and how to accordingly change the writing style to suit the heads like in Dialog or in Action the subtle changes you brought were creative and truly appreciated. Overall a nice and refreshing take on retirement and its appropriate time..Sindbad


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Review of Kinkaid's Heir  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Kitt
This is a nice and interesting set up, and I did feel the order and basic introduction about finding love to be catchy, and it becomes all the more relevant when you are trying to avoid it. A good style with lovely reflections about journey and love, we can write about love and journey in poems and stories and make it happen. Your setup in Texas city is interesting and intriguing as well. I wish you all the best for this endeavor..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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The Phantom
This is a rather unique topic and the way you presented it, I was hooked. You have a unique and dynamic story here and as a reader I appreciated and enjoyed the unconventional approach on this story. The next episode will certainly be full of excitement. Nicely written dialogue and good details that build up to this and finally I feel you need to develop Natasha's character further for the readers to understand the challenges she is on for in Naomi's stomach. Good presentation and nice job...Sindbad


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Review of I am Sam  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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LuvinmyPoppingcorn
This is a light and defining poetry you have penned here. I did like the rhythm pattern. I liked the basic simple and yet contradictory words like, "All these days are passing me by I don’t have a choice; no, there’s no other way—
Please just stop squirming; I won’t go away.
You can run all you want; feel free, try to hide,
but I told you already: I can see with my mind." This shows a complete and rather 360 degree view on the situation. I feel the same way as the person you are referring to. Written with a good style, heartfelt words, a nice tone and the words blend well together. Good reflections and bad ones that give way to promise and hope. Beautifully done with a strong title..Sindbad


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Review of Eyes of Mist  
for entry "3 - Departure" 
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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ForgottenDreams
This is a long and yet interesting sequel and like the previous sequel was very interesting and dynamic. I liked the unique style and action that kept me captivated. Overall I liked your sense of timing and intense urge to keep the plot moving. This underlying current was visible throughout the story. I did have a pleasant and vibrant memories of this chapter.The details are as graphic as can be. More then one storyline going on at once as you went back and forth. I like that. Excellent impression...Sindbad


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Review of Eyes of Mist  
for entry "2 - Dark Clouds" 
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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ForgottenDreams
This is a long and exhaustive sequel, however I did like the chilling mystery and experience. I was fascinated and rather intrigued with the plot and specially the adventures of Jorcan and Ayala. The lines I liked "Ayala froze with shock and horror. Since she had been a little child she had heard stories of the Shakaree time and time again. But in spite of that she had never wasted a thought on the possibility of one of these cruel people entering her life. Still he loomed before her like a nightmare come true." As this paragraph shows your skills of creating a scene the readers can feel and live. A great and thrilling scenes and we knew origin of the same as well. The style is good and you leave the reader wanting more. Easy to follow and as a lover of fantasy, this is easy to appreciate. Excellent writing...Sindbad


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Review of Eyes of Mist  
for entry "1 - Peaceful Days" 
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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ForgottenDreams
I had reviewed the introduction. Now I have gone through the first chapter and and slowly getting hang of the plot. To be honest I am enjoying the feeling and the aftertaste. Overall a nice and creative setting, from here you can certainly create a strong and vibrant story.This is informative with in depth details and a good style. Looks like you spent a lot of time with this. Good research. Nicely done. Always..Sindbad


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Review of The Flawed Gods  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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J. Thayne
This is a evolving story and I did feel the inner turbulence and some level of mistrust. I couldn't pinpoint the exact mental block however one thing was certain about your restrain in expressing the full potential of your character. I know why you wrote this my friend and I do admire you for it. I feel the same way as the person you are referring to and the mental block. Written with a good style, heartfelt words, a nice tone and the words blend well together. Good reflections and bad ones that give way to promise and hope hence in short this is one hell of a science fiction story that will act as referral point for would be Sci-Fi writers..Sindbad .


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Review of Eyes of Mist  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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ForgottenDreams
This is one interesting and wholesome story you have on the Shakaree and the Falamar. I have been a stickler for such marathon struggle and twist. I have gone through few of your chapters and did feel the thrill and excitement of a long and vibrant epic. Off to a good start. I found this entertaining and hope you will be adding more..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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druid
This story with a well oiled sequel did make a deep impression. I could feel your old timer approach in writing about relation and culture that cotradicts the old tradition and culture. You have shown a matured and direct approach in penning this very interesting story. The lines I liked, "A pause on the line, and then your voice comes back to me across the wires, across the miles of land and ocean that separate us, "I don't know … is it?" You sigh softly, and continue. "How are you, Ru? How have you been?" I hear a chair creak as you move or maybe sit down and the sound of the phone moving against your cheek. I'm still in a daze, still not really believing this is happening after all this time. "I'm okay," I answer, taking a deep breath. "Missing you… still." I can hear you breathing on the phone line, hear the unevenness of your breaths, you're either nervous or emotional, maybe both, and it tears at my heart. I take pity on you, on both of us, and try to break through the uncomfortable, slow, "niceness" that is getting us nowhere. "I still love you, if that's what you're wondering about. I still think about you, dream about you, want you in my life. I'm not angry with you and I don't blame you for anything. And… well… I still don't think we could be just friends, so I really, really hope that's not why you're calling. It isn't, right?" This paragraph signifies your clinical and yet creative approach. As a reader I give the best ratings to this story as it is in par with the best short stories..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Nemesis
This is a nice and interesting story, and as a reader I did feel and appreciated the aspirations of Peter Doleman.Good characterizations with well detailed storylines interwoven. Easy to follow. The lines I liked, “No, it was just an icon. You know, Prism Environmental Laboratories? It was just the company logo. A piece of art at best, but a big one though, made out of glass or something. It was mounted on a pedestal just inside the entry.” It was a gleeful recollection and Peter finally had the chance to share his incredible discovery. Surely, he would become the most famous man in history. This was as good as discovering God himself." Creative, entertaining and looks like you thought about this story awhile and spent a lot of time with this. No suggestions for improvement. Excellent impression..Sindbad


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