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Review of Dirty Sinks...  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Telboy
I need to congratulate in getting such a simple and poignant story, this story is a pleasure to read as each word and its meaning gives a new meaning and fundamental to this story. I cannot think of anything to use to change the lines without effecting them...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Joel Cobbs
This is a nice and emotional story. As a reader I feel maximum readers should go through this story as this story expresses a very important phase of life. Every sentence relays how much this person means to you. I have no personal favorites. I liked the entire story...Sindbad


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Review of DRIVE-IN  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Ben Garrick
This is a nice and elegant story you have written about drive-in theater session. I agree and you have expressed the same in this story about the right and true education doesn't come from books.Not an error of any kind was seen. I cannot think of anything that will improve the drive in experience or any other style, to do justice to this story.he imagery used in describing your emotions with action and hers is awesome like " I held her a little away from me while she took several deep breaths and slightly calmed herself. In acknowledgement of my statement she put a searching hand in my lap and what she found made clear the truth of what I'd said. I continued on, verbally, to give her all the reasons where, in my case, the 'little head' was going to be controlled by the 'big head' to turn around that oft-used phrase. I probably said, about ten times, that I was going against all male-sourced motivations. And I restrained her hand before I made a mess of things.". I Loved It!..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Joey's lost his mind!
This is a nice and simple poem on loneliness, and awareness of a soul with inner consent that has left deep impression in mind of readers.The imagery used in describing your emotions and hers is awesome. Loved It. The entire poem is terrific!..Sindbad


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Review of Christian  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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mdstryker..is back
This short and sequential poem expresses the basic contradiction on everything and nothing with final shot on search of Self or Me. Every stanza relays the depth and beauty of true identity amidst so many divergent acts..The rhythm is good, and the imagery just as good.The entire poem is well written and from the heart...Sindbad


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Review of The Home Sampler  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Fyn-Celebrating!!!
This is a nice and mature take on patient with bipolar disorder, the way you expressed the constant vigilant and room for unexpected turn in health of the patient is indeed a learning experience for readers. Overall I did feel the inner sentiment and unexpected result very subtly expressed in this poem " Often I wouldn't know who was sewing until I'd been basted" Overall a nice and unique style in expressing myriad health conditions..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Ben Garrick
This is simply a sweet and precious story that made me feel active and positive.What struck me first was how seamlessly you introduced Wayne Kuchtyn, by the simple sentence and elegant competency level. This was quickly followed by a concise paragraph that determined his mastery over automobile. The plot whizzed past, but never felt rushed. I was impressed by your ability to write and express dialogue with subtle and effective impression on readers. Thanks for the opportunity to read and review your work!..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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BScholl
This is a nice and interesting story that did leave deep impression.The first paragraph hooked me with Hank Matthews and his humble nature. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.I like the was this story ended because it suggested there was more to the story of Ruth and Mr. Marzetti.I enjoyed reading this intriguing story. Write on...Sindbad


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Review of Number Ten  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Lynda ~ Wishbone Laughing Tree
The poem's second stanza establishes the rhythm, rhyme scheme, mood, and theme. The rhythm and rhyme scheme compliment each other, while the rhythm move the theme forward at a good pace. The main agendas of this poem are hunger and routine.These are my favorite lines because they emphasize this is a poem "As they scattered around the pens.The rooster came out loudly crowing" I am giving this sing song and well-written poem a 5.0. Write on...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu
This is a beautiful poem, and it expresses your keen observation on "Doesn't faze what truly mattered, God's unspoken, gifted ways! " as this thought and impression of the sky above adds to a majestic grace. I enjoyed reading this inspiring poem because it caused me to think about how may clouds formation leads to God's awe-inspiring gift, His sweet, merciful blessings. Write on...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dis-Ease
This is a very interesting and logical essay you have written on a subject that is very close to my heart. Mysteries and unexplained phenomenon and their investigation is a very specialized task, and special skill set and lot of nerves and patience is needed to accomplish any result. You have written about such a relentless scientist and his work. Your writing skills are impressive and have a certain mysterious quality that made reading the work a pleasure...Sindbad


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Review of ENDLESS REBUKE  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tee
I did read and enjoy this story endless rebuke, and was moved with your in depth understanding and subtle nuances of the main character. You have captured subtle emotions and reactions in a exemplary way and as a reader I remained interested and absorbed all these subtle variations.The mood and word choices were consistent throughout the story, keeping the reader cocooned in the story you were weaving. No errors or missteps jumped out to interrupt the flow. Excellent impression..Sindbad


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Review of Amsterdam  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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druid
This is a subject very few writers write or do full justice to. I did feel and comprehend that you have done a great deal of research in representing very natural and practical incident, quite an unusual story, not just the plot but also the way you told it in a interesting manner is worth full appreciation. Nice and excellent take on relation that has not been expressed in simple and threadbare manner..Sindbad


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Review of American Suffrage  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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April Desiree
This is a bold and sensitive story you have written. I am impressed with your deep study and capturing a era that was remarkably different from today's era. I did feel like being present and motivated with a issue that was a matter of great concern at that time.You gave the groundwork well and nicely laid out plans. Nicely written details that are easy to follow with a perfect title to start with..Sindbad


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Review of The Old-Lady  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Snder
This is a touching story and I did feel emotionally charged. This basic and dedicated approach of Megan and her firm believe on old lady has been nicely packaged and as a reader it did leave a deep impression. Good characterizations and this is easy to follow. This draws the readers in. A pleasure to read and wish you all the best..Sindbad


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Review of Rockabee  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Basilides
This is a nice and interesting story. Your creative energy and observation did make a rather difficult topic, about movement in two dimension stage.Your story gave this day a jolt of surprise and delight at having found something so compelling from an author so versatile and imaginative. Excellent impression..Sindbad


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Review of Worm Meets Apple  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Josh S
This is a nice and very interesting poem with rather creative meaning and style.I smiled all the way through while I read this. I liked the rhyming lines, and the pauses came at the right moment to keep the poem flowing. The line I liked "Go forth I must, to find a savory red to slay." Overall, the poem was uniquely presented, and I don't think any other format would have worked for this piece...Sindbad


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Review of ICEBERG  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Jayson
This is a nice and interesting take on iceberg. I did appreciate your unique and informative link to the past. I give full credit to your sensitive observation and subtle relation between the conscious and un conscious level of communication. I liked the line " common phrase "let go and let God". In this slowing, this widening, one can observe the field of awareness expanding, while stress is melting away as would a cube of ice on a stove." as its significance with inner meaning did leave a deep impression..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Ember
This is a nice and neat story, and as a reader I got a complete analysis of the new generation and their basic reservation to act. This general and neat presentation and its consequence have a very logical and certain conclusion. We need to implement the steps mentioned at the earliest. Overall a nice and interesting take..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and educative pun on boss, and his position among the workers. I did like your unique and free flowing style that has creative and educative element for the readers. Overall nicely, written colorful details like "gracious and authoritative aplomb". A nice tone and a nice rhyme pattern blends the words together leaving a well balanced and positive finish. Good job...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Ben Garrick
I am indeed fascinated with your ability to write interesting and intriguing story, that keeps reader glued to the end.As characters go, this one was about as well defined as it could be. Not only did the readers learn about his life, you also let them into his way of thinking and his emotions. The readers will by now have formed a bit of an attachment to him and even if they can’t relate personally, they will be able to feel for him as he is likeable and deserves a bit of good luck in the daily business. Excellent style with interesting plot..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Ben Garrick
While this perhaps wasn't the most riveting story I've ever read, your ability to tell it was excellent. It was centered on the main character's life and plight and as such, it was quite intriguing. The mixture of humor and serious intent worked well and the tale progressed at a good pace, never getting boring despite detailed descriptions because the readers will be mesmerized by the picture you managed to paint. I couldn't fault this tale; it was a pleasure to read this sequel..Sindbad


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Review of The Beginning  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Ben Garrick
This is a refreshingly nice and I like the first person point of view because it reveals the personality and creative flow of thought in such a sensitive position. I was able to relate to the dialogue and open ended interaction. Overall a nice and rather mundane love story with a twist..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Ben Garrick
This is a nice and short take on love, and has a appropriate end that did leave a deep impression. Overall this style and deeper meanings have very interesting take on this short poem. Your grasp on vers libre is worth recognition. I didnt find any improvement on this take on love..Sindbad


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Review of Greed  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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John Nation
You spent a lot of time with this and I have read some of items before and you sound like a devoted man who spent a lot of time collecting and writing some of these items, in this chapter the will of David Rivers and his basic stand did leave a deep impression. The story with different attitudes of different characters and a popular theme makes reader guess on a lot of your time and thought that has gone in making this story enjoyable. Creative with nice imagery. Good job...Sindbad


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