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Melizabeth
This is nice and rather special poem you have penned on a sentimental and very subtle feeling that were expressed in clear and moving piece of verses. I did like lines like "I must continue on my way.White ivory, black as night,worn wood smooth to my gentle touch.." this depicts your inner feelings and clear head on moving ahead.
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Simple Dykie
This is a nice and creative take on promise. You have expressed the different phases and dynamics of expectation, and its subtle link to promise. Overall this did impress and make me feel and appreciate the creativity that you have in writing poetry. Expecting some more of the same.
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Ann Ticipation
This is a nice and sincere summary about your life, experience and journey. You have been lucky and strong willed in achieving what your instinct and inner voice willed. Hence your have a clear and rather educational recollection that can inspire readers to follow their own calling and hence get the maximum out of life.
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RedIniquity
This is a nice and creative beginning of a interesting story, Joven and her journey is indeed a nicely woven tale with right amount of twist and interest. You have done a commendable job with this story, and I wish you all the best for the sequel.
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Simple Dykie
This is a nice and creative way of expressing the subtle and salient transformation that can happen, and you have expressed all this in a humorous and balanced manner, without any sign of inner anger or frustration.This short story reflects and highlight a very important phase in a life of an individual. Great job
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Robert Thomas Atwood
This is indeed a touching and short sequence on Wanda. As a reader I did feel the emotional force and the way you have expressed and pointed about the unfortunate incident. Your qualification and sincerity is expressed in so few a word. Great job.
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Robert Thomas Atwood
This is a long and yet action oriented sequence and you did keep a excellent balance between the will of God and the unforeseen violence that did cause casualty and distress. The way you positioned Susan and her inner belief. Overall a touching and rather creative sequence that can be appreciated with faith and simple will of God.
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Robert Thomas Atwood
This is a nice and free flowing story, that has a sequential continuity and a unique storyline that did keep me glued and fascinated. I was able to grasp your inner understanding, and right amount of twist, that will attract and leave deep impression regarding your style.
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This is a nice group with excellent credential, and enough material that will certainly help me in understanding the plethora of activity in this community better. I see this group as a ideal platform for me, and hence will be eager to join this group. Please do the needful for the same.
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Dan Sturn
This is a nice and strong poem on Mara and his infinite charms, enticing to touch the turf all this and more with silent and all knowing awareness of Buddha. I did feel a basic fact about the transient nature and the acknowledgement of the same by Buddha. Most impressive line I felt as "Like throwing poison spears at dust motes in a sunbeam,"
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and meaningful poem you have written on love, you expression of love not being perfect and a fine line expressing the limitation and dilution of love due to defining factors. Overall a delicate and bold handling of the boat of love with a experienced and seasoned captain.
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and high caliber poem you have written. You mentioned accurate measurement of faith and opportunity. Such poem with perfect balance and unity comes with extreme observation and experience. Nice and well balanced poem.
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Magoo
This is a nice and short poem with smooth and even pattern and sequence, and as a reader I did get the grasp of the story. However you were expressing something more, as certain sentence like points towards the same "A shanty near the water's edge
was dim and dank inside; a shadowed figure crept in close with stench upon his hide." Overall a nice impression.
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J. A. Buxton
This letter did bring tears, and was written from heart. I am sure this must have got a special mention in the competition.However this letter expressed hope for the future, and this balance is a strong point that no-one can take away from you.
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Dan Sturn
This is a nice poem you have written about loss, and as a reader I felt the positive and rather honorable heart that expresses such a devastating loss in a simple and touching manner. Overall this poem did leave a deep impression and I agree with you about stores of love and honor. The feelings are exclusive.
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Dan Sturn
Music indeed is the best and satisfying way of expressing your inner feeling and l;ove, and like things of creativity, music as well gives a all satisfying and spiritual way of expressing the purest form of emotion,untainted and unblemished called love. You have done the same beautifully in this poem.
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Dan Sturn
This is a nice poem, and you have expressed the journey from birth to the old age in a subtle and clear manner.The final moments and your inclination of slipping into river and river meeting the sea is a nice and revealing outcome from this poem.
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and intelligent poem, you have written on American (and worldly) belief in idealism and identity, however I did find the words oneness, or the line "As our friendship grows,So will our gains" not giving justice to this prose. However this prose leaves a positive impression.
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Tim Chiu
Cherished brood is a poem with a unique and defining style, that leaves readers appreciate and enjoy the warm feelings and images captured in the poem. The ending was indeed very subtle and indicated the obvious and rather simple truth and I felt a deep bonding.
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and adventurous poem, and captures the essence of the sea voyages and mysterious waves. This poem give a nice and eventful outcome for fisherman and his bounty. I did feel the spiritual essence in mundane description of the event. The best part of this poem was the subtle and mysterious attraction of the ocean.
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Tim Chiu
Dream continues is your personal representation of very tense and action-packed 2013 MLB postseason. You have done a excellent and creative representation of the same.The lines I liked "And a future of pride, celebration –
For defeat extends that duration
Of dedication, hard work, exhalation."
Overall a nice grasp, however the momentum of the poem got down a bit at the end.
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Dan Sturn
This is a nice and comprehensive essay, and you have expressed the point of saturation from Presidents view in a creative and brilliant manner, I agreed with your point of view, and wanted to add the uncertainty factor, and abuse of the same leads to some unpredictable results.
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and creative poetry and expresses guys perspective and the learning process at the end was indeed nice and makes this poem complete. I felt the poem did have some subtle humor that can be highlighted and expressed with bold and yet poetic manner.
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Iva Lilly Durham
This is a nice and emotional poem, that flows in a smooth and anticipated manner. I did feel the child and its stubborn and yet innocent understanding and belief clearly reflected in a creative and rather overwhelming manner. I did feel that grasp and yet no hold on friend Jack. Nice and creative piece with excellent capture of the moment.
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Dan Sturn
This indeed is a nice contrition and deep observation, you have expressed in a smooth flowing and yet in a deep manner. The balance and the inner meaning have long term effects and cant be ignored in today's scenario. Overall a gem of a poetry that reflects your refined and dynamic skills.
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