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Review of Remind me  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Fool of Thoughts
This is a nice and unique poem you have written on remind me.A good style, nice tone with lovely reflections and this is easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern in the one stanza. Good presentation and a pleasure to read specially "So i'll always know, My life, is what i make." Such poems indeed uplift our spirit..Sindbad


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Review of On the Sidelines  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Survivor48
This poem captures the rise of the dream while waiting in the bench in a beautiful and direct manner. As a reader one cannot ignore such bare and direct thoughts while waiting for any or all types of opportunity. I was moved by lines "While sitting on the bench,Adrenaline is sparked by a dream." This short and yet poignant take on waiting on sidelines is indigenous and creative, and leaves a deep impression in the mind of readers..Sindbad


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Review of Against Cheating  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Survivor48
This is a nice and direct poem on cheating and its temporary benefits, however in the end how much harm this brings has been beautifully captured by you in this short verse. The verse "Throwing ambition down the drain,Deciding to follow an effortless path." speaks a lot of the similar intentions.A good style with nice inspirations and a clear message and if I dare say it, words to live by. Nicely written and has a good flair. Thanks for sharing...Sindbad


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Review of A Fake Smile  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Survivor48
This is a nice and elegant way you have taken this topic of fake smile, as a reader I am impressed with your direct style and upfront expression of emotions in, "Showing tranquility when we are smoldering,Staying calm when we are terrified over normality." A neat rhyme pattern gives this a good flair, a nice tone and makes this easy to follow. Good job of writing...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Survivor48
This moment in morning after a nights sleep is indeed a delicate moment and you have captured this moment in a beautiful and creative manner. Overall a nice style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern pulls the words together and makes the words flow well...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dan Sturn
This is a nice and elegant poetry you have written on thoughts and their consequence.Sounds like the perfect problem of listening. Thought,always active, light and fluffy, swirling crazy, and all this poem was written with a good style, nicely defined details that are easy to follow. This has good imagery and I feel like I was facing my enemy. A neat rhyme pattern gives this a nice flair. Lovely reflections and excellent impression.You have expressed the problem of listening in so few and perfect words..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Teguettler
This is nicely written and the dialogue and details are in depth. Creative and excellent writing. I am a great enthusiast of war story and I was not disappointed with the setup and sequential representation of command and adherence to orders. I enjoyed your story. Great war story..Sindbad


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Review of Just Be It All  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu
I have been a great fan of your poetry. This poem as well did live up-to your high standards of creativity. As a reader I was made aware the boundaries in a subtle and beautiful manner. The lines I liked were "Then there's times an ounce of thought, Can save the day from pain so fraught." Creative with well chosen words. The words flow well and this is easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this. Excellent impression...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi
kyuna
This is a nice and perfect setup for a reader to understand and show their writing talent the options are inviting and easy to write and express a favorable outcome. Excellent impression and a great presentation. Finally I am looking forward in participating in this interactive story..Sindbad
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Review of The Book  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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RodneyGray
This is a nice and rather heavy sequel, in a way I did get the religious and medieval anecdote. I did get very strong nuance of tradition and style that is long forgotten. Something that leaves a taste of rich medieval aristocracy, honor, valor and loyalty. The lines that did leave deep impression are "Deal found himself locked in place, caught himself unable to move during the entire situation. He slowly looked over the entrance-way, still feeling numb and disoriented. When he came back to his senses, he noticed his own legs bent at the knees, bleeding from the hard-edged rock beneath them. Both hands clasped together longwise holding palm to palm and unmoving, unwarranted yet it was an instinctive and pleasurable position to sit. Both elbows dug into his sides and painfully poked ribs. Deal also found himself rocking back and forth, still shaking as he saw the woman shaking. Worthington stepped outside, stared up the hill and laughed loudly, scaring Deal, who fell over on his left side, breaking the spell and causing the Knight to laugh even harder." This is a long paragraph however it did capture the essence and beauty of the story and did leave deep impression. Overall this story is one of the very rare ones in which I did feel and enjoyed the hard work you put in to make it natural. I do congratulate you for writing such a stirring and complete story, wish you all the best and luck to get aplomb and recognition..Sindbad


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Review of The Book  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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RodneyGray
This sequel is different and rather creative as you tried to extract the hidden creativity of each character here. The lines I liked were more from creative perspective "Deal pulled the chain down until it clicked and the other chain receded inside the clock. The long chain almost touched the floor. Connie winked and regressed inside her double-door home, leaving Jeffrey and Deal glancing toward the clock for a minute or so." As this came all of a sudden and caught my attention. Overall a nice and bold sequel with more action oriented credence..Sindbad


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Review of The Book  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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RodneyGray
This is a nice and interesting sequel, and from personal view I did feel and understand your experiment with freedom and its natural benefits and debacle. I felt the story was written with nice and interesting flow with lot of anecdote and fillers to keep readers occupied. In short this sequel came as one whole amalgamation of different plethora of activity all subtly interrelated. Lines I liked "She brayed often after he lost the short-lived ‘God Speak’ spell. He assumed she still tried to converse, but thought it more amusing to hear her native tongue. She’d never been so lively, though he knew she felt deprived and, maybe, a little lonely. Deal would keep her company in the many chats he imagined them having. ‘A horse worth owning’ could be said in the McShane tradition of needful things and terrible wants. Jezebel, the horse refined." I don't have to explain why, as these paragraphs highlighted the trend and course of the story. Overall a nice and compact sequel..Sindbad


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Review of The Book  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi
RodneyGray
This is a nice and interesting story and as a reader I did get acquainted with your unique style of writing with a interesting and creative twist. The lines that did leave deep impression are "The book answered, in a sort of roundabout fashion. “God Speak.” he proclaimed. ‘A spell allowing one to obtain fellowship with the animals. Beware, the angels.’ He chanted the verses, “And God created the animals, allowing them the will to think and a voice to communicate amongst themselves. God’s will be done.” He walked outside and gauged the treeline. The piebald crow observed from a distance." I zeroed on this paragraph simply in comprehending the plot and hence remained one of the focal points in this story. Overall an interesting and rather mysterious sequel eager to move to the next sequel..Sindbad


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Review of The Book  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi
RodneyGray
This is a nice and interesting story you have written and as a reader I could relate to your hard and sincere effort in making the characters as realistic as possible. This effort is clearly visible in the dialect and natural emotions as captured in this story. I did feel the story to be long however to capture peoples interest I felt the need for some simpler and lighter moments..Overall I was impressed and commemorate your effort in writing and epic. Keep it up and let reader enjoy your style and creative imaginations...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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J. A. Buxton
This indeed is a smooth and hard hitting story you have written beautifully. You have significantly answered the prompt and adhered to the meaning of the same with your style and command. As a reader and a frequent participant to this contest I salute you and admire your skill-set with aplomb and respect. Overall a nice and thrilling short story that sounds like a winner to me..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and heart warming poem and as a reader I did envy the state and thought process flowing in your mind when you penned this poem. Overall very strong and rather revealing words used throughout the poem like.."velvety, juicy rainbows" or "Almighty's pleasurable,Passionate, and fatherly role"". However some word choice can be customized according to the flow of the poem like "Forever unblemished and sparkling With peace and wonder.". As the rhythm and moment was not given justice. However as a reader I did get the import and deep inner meaning that remains priceless and precious...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and simple poem dedicated to loners, and as a reader I did feel the sympathy and balance you have shown in penning this prose. However I did feel certain personal touch like ""Are ever available and acknowledged To be of much use and desirability"" Here I did glimpse the subtle and distinct otherness or connectivity. Overall a nice and proficient take on individuals with loner profile syndrome..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and strong poem you have written and is dedicated to a active, vibrant and sportfull lifestyle. You have been a active and rather passionate advocate of sports in all your writing and as a sports enthusiast and critique I have enjoyed all your poems.A good style, nice tone and this is easy to follow. Lovely reflections with nicely written details which gives this good imagery. A neat rhyme pattern gives this a lively beat. Creative with a good presentation...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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jackneigut
This is unique and very soothing read. As a reader I was getting the vibes of your spritual advancement and rich source of purity in your writing style. I was indeed moved by the innocence and faith you have and your constant prayer has been a source of inspiration for the readers. I did find certain place wherein improvement in word choice can be suggested. Overall I was moved and felt the spiritual surge with this excellent writup that summarises mans truimph on misfortunes that befalls...Sindbad


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Review of A Father to Us  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a broad and perfect tribute to a father and fatherly qualities in this poem. As a reader I could fathom the depth and sacrifice with nice connotation to honor.Overall a professional and no nonsensical effort however I did feel the voidness of ownership,passion and love. Probably the spirit covered it all...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu
This is a nice and educative piece you have written. As a reader I immediately get the gut feeling of unknown fear well captured in the first few lines. I feel you omitted some more emotions and feelings in the beginning of the poem before " you promptly right your mistake." Overall a very interesting and complete poem did feel role of impulse and instincts that comes before fear missing...Sindbad


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Review of Time to Go Away  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and rather strong take on certain behavior that leaves a strong imprint in mind of readers. I have read lot of your poetry however in this piece I couldn't fathom the utility of certain words vis a vis the subject line. The words are.. cognizant,sacrilegious. Otherwise a very interesting and strong piece with a strong and hard hitting message..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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J. A. Buxton
This is a nice and comprehensive take on chocolate and its relevance in valentines day. I did enjoy reading this short story and felt mouth watering take on chocolates. A good style with nicely written details and a nice play on words like "The melting creamy material circled around her tongue and attacked all the taste buds throughout her mouth. Up into her nasal cavity went the pungent aroma of mint, causing her eyes to start watering. She started swallowing as fast as she could, trying to get the peppermint cream away from her rebelling mouth and nose. Never in her life had she tasted anything so intense and overpowering that caused actual pain." . Colorful, good descriptions with lovely reflections. Creative and you spent a lot of time with this I am a fan of your style and such story enhances the festive quotient a lot. A lively rhyme pattern sews the words together. Great job...Sindbad


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Review of Patience  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Survivor48
This is a well balanced and simple poem with deeper implication. As a avid reader of poem with deeper meaning I did enjoy and appreciate your creative take on Patience. A neat rhyme pattern gives this a good flair and binds the words together and are interwoven nicely in this poem. Excellent writing...Sindbad


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Review of Acceptance  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Survivor48
This is a nice and smooth poem you have written n acceptance. I did follow your inner vibes while penning this poem.A good style with nicely written in depth details. A good style, nice tone and the words flow well. You captured the essence of acceptance in so few a words. Lovely reflections with good imagery. Nice presentation...Sindbad


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