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When I saw the prompt words I was going to pass this by. So many prompted rhymes have the ability to feel like they were forced to complete the task. I'm happy to report I got over that feeling after the first few lines. Not one of those forced-fed poems, trying to fit within certain prompt words. 
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A Journal is a very personal writing. I enjoy the thoughts each person has to present within their entries. I found many links within your blog where I may search for more information or knowledge about different celebrations and teachings of which you speak.
My first Impression:
Keeping my Attention:
The mysterious mirror was a fine addition to the Bush House. It gave it a magical quality and built up the reader's curiosity all the more!
Techniques and Suggestions?
Final Thoughts:
Actually, I didn't come away from this story feeling it was any less impressive than your many blood curdling horror stories. 
Simple and clear cut. Put all the death row thoughts behind. Put all the emotions this man is going through on a back burner for a moment. What really is deep-down frightening and chills the very core of my soul, is the fact that this man is truly innocent.
I know that death row can last for years. Appeals and waiting for them just seem to drag on. However, there comes a time in one's life where there must be closure. Here, our inmate gave up hope of ever being saved. Despair was his everyday on death row, with no end in site -- until it was!
Accepting his fate was the present, he felt relieved that he would no longer suffer the wait, and live without a dream of hope.
He went out with no remorse, as he was innocent. He also went out finding the secret revealed! As for us? We must all wait our turn, however it appears to us. The end is guaranteed.
I noticed this was created using particular prompts named after very popular horror/supernatural movies. Not easy to do when talking about a farmer during his growing season. 
Yes, I agree. There is much wisdom that can be learned by listening to the reasoning of a farmer. He knows how to provide from using the world of nature before him.
This photo is gorgeous! Love the Mexican shoreline framed by two palm trees. I could almost feel the warm breezes. The quality is lovely, seeing that the star of the Title can be seen in her rising glory. Good shot of Venus, there. It's also romantic as I spy tow branches reaching out and touching the other's palm leaves. Another great point about it!
Just kiddin'!
This story had an adventurous side, Sci-Fi to give it some time-travel qualities and a setting that brought in the dark side.
Norman is a very determined man. He continues his mission no matter how dangerous it could be for him. I liked him and was curious about what he was trying o accomplish. 
There are so many layers of the story to keep in mind. The umbrella is helpful marker for the place he needed to be and the boots had the power to reach the past. Perfect timing requires the exact spot to be placed at the right time. After many "misses" Norman finally, with the help of Ariel, gets to where he wants to be so he could try to change the past.
Unique Interpretation of the Picture Prompt:
The boy was a lovable individual and he had a fine sense of humor (evident at the end) that had probably been masked by the other issues he had to deal with regarding his Autism Spectrum Disorder. It showed the reader how tough it is when a loved one is super sensitive to everyday things that most of us don't pay any attention to. Besides his social issues with others he had a heightened sensitivity to noise and scents around him.
I loved the boy's interpretation of the drawing that the boy gave to the psychologist who was testing him. 
I got a chuckle out of it. It's a combination of innocence and confidence in his witty response.
I saw no errors that jumped-out at me. 
Picture Prompt Interpretation:
I can't tell you how much you grabbed my attention from the start. But, I'll try. 
You chose a Thriller/Suspense genre, which fit easily within the prompt. The photo, though simple can be fertile within a writer's mind with its interpretation.
You had my attention with those lines. Great opening! My curiosity was raised. I needed to know what sort of mission this man, braving the elements, was so important to brave a day such as this one.
Nope! Found nothing to make me pause.
I wish you gave me more time with the characters, let me savor the moments. 
However, this was a fun and unique interpretation of the picture prompt. Thanks again for entering. Love seeing you at The Bard's Hall!
It's a complicated plot to try to cover within 2000 words. It would, however, make for a noteworthy longer story where the characters would be fleshed-out thus allowing the reader the opportunity to get to know the character and visualize her better.
OH, THE POSSIBILITIES:
This mystery begs to be lengthened and perhaps find itself in a novella or book. There is enough going on in it to be able to do that. Might be an idea worth considering when NaNo Writing Month comes around. 
Starr was quite a character. I like how she defends not quitting smoking while pregnant because the shock to her system could harm her baby. 
This was a hilarious read, thus, I am highlighting it in this week's Comedy Newsletter! 
Sounds a lot like me. Except, my sweet Volvo SUV is a 2005! 
I loved the way you described just how much attention the wife paid to her new " Yes, car-love can be difficult to overcome -- or compete with! 
I loved the ending. Hey, he's had enough of her giving all her attention to her new love. Sometimes revenge is best served cold, and this proves it as her hubby shows off his hot cutie! 
I am also reviewing your item as a judge at "
Love the quote by Harlan Ellison! 
I found the ending clever. Questioning the birth of the universe and then actually becoming the beginning of the universe to become time as we know it. I had to twist my mind around that one. However, you did a mighty fine job with the past/future way home prompt. 
I am also reviewing this item because it popped-up on the random Read & Review generator.
Oooh, I like when that happens. Take the simple story and bring it to a stunning conclusion. It will make a reader remember this story long after leaving the page! 
I am also reviewing your item because it popped-up on the Read & REview, random generator.
Nothing too critical that needs attention, just a little tweek here and there.
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I totally understand your frustration over the whole "never Trumpers" residing in Congress. We the people need to be heard over all the yelling and screaming. We placed him in this position for a reason — we want our country back on its feet and thriving. The idea that there are those who would plot a way to keep him off the 2020 ballot is disturbing and disgusting. 
