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A Simply Positive review. This review, the suggestions and views, are my personal opinions. My wish is for the review to be helpful and positive. Please take what you can or wish from the review, and disregard the rest. |
17cherry
TITLE:
A title full of emotion and strength as it sums up the metaphor of the for this great poem.
FORMAT/STYLE:
A free-style poem written in four verses. Each verse reads as a run-on sentence.
RHTYM/RHYME:
With no set rhyme, the rhythm and rhyme is set by the punctuation or lack there-of in a poem.
SUGGESTIONS:
~Some will tell you that punctuation is needed in poetry. Others will argue that it is not needed and makes no difference. Still, there will be those who say it is up to the particular poet and the poem itself. Personally I feel that the way the verses flow down the page, that punctuation is necessary for this piece. Though without it, the message is still there, it just isn't as strong.
For me, I use to write poetry without any punctuation. Somewhere down the line someone gave me sound advice and it made sense to me. The punctuation, or lack thereof in a poem, is the direction of the writer, guiding the reader. The punctuation is where the author wishes the reader to take a breath; to contemplate; to pause for dramatic effect. The lack of punctuation says the same thing, "Read in one breath, whether slow, or fast, down the page". To me, punctuation is direction from the author to the reader. Use it, or don't , to your heart's desire and don't let anyone persuade you otherwise. However, if using it, be consistent throughout the piece. My personal opinion, this poem would benefit from punctuation.
POINTS TO PONDER:
Sometimes something as simple as where an item is placed upon the page can help to determine how it is interpretated. Poetry is up to the interpretation of the reader. What a poet writes, and the message a reader gets isn't always the same, especialy when using metaphors. That being said, aligning a poem to the left of a page implies unification; all is right in the world. Centering an item so that all of the lines are askew, based upon character count, can have the meaning of chaos and turmoil in life or emotion. With the consistent rhyming pattern, I felt that the emotional aspect of this poem deserved centered spacing as to show the various emotions and pull of the poem. Though keep in mind, this is just my personal opinion, I am but a novice when it comes to poetry and its teachings.
OVERALL IMPRESSION:
With a metaphorical twist this emotional poem uses objects which can be related to the emotions of the poem on a private level, yet also one that others too can relate to. A very clever twist.
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