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Your metaphor using "matter", "petals" and earth soil is wonderful. I like how you got the word "reaper" and "disguise" to fit with the theme. Very creative thinking. I imagine it took some time to compose this. 
Thanks for the convenient link about how it works. I did check it out and your example reflects the forum correctly. 
Another beautifully designed page with lovely images and colourful font. It would be cool if the picture of Jane at the top could be centered. 
I always learn unique information in your sharing!
Your accurate observation of the scene in the meadow was calming and captured the essence of nature's beauty and the poet's feelings about it brilliantly. I enjoyed the personification aspect and descrptions like "comforting gibberish", "quiet tangle", "civil unrest" of the fox etc. I like how you bring us closer to your spot in the canvas from the wider vista. The ants and bee on the coffee center us in.
The ending memory reflection was potent and one can feel for the poet. It makes me want to appreciate the moments that we have, knowing that all things will pass away. 
The short verse is clear in its imagery and I like the mirror effect of a rain storm and the inner termoil that you show. The third line is wonderful in imagery and soundscape. "water cure" is cool!
I wondered about the last line "with out" as to whether it should be one word, yet the pause is interesting. Regular spelling is "without" and can mean outside. So I understood it. 
Wow! I would love to see whales in the wild...one day! The theme is so appealing as these creatures are majestic and magical.
Greetings! Thank you so much for entering the "
I love the image of the cascade of yellow and the description of the fence in the prompt picture. So clear for me to visualize even if I did not see the picture. 
Your poem really gave the feeling of heaviness as the poet struggles to handle everything that comes up. Words like "try", "wearing" and the image of the battle vividly portray this notion.
The key word "frenetic" describes life's pace in contrast with the slowness the poet feels she moves at! Nice comparison! 
I like fairies so I could not resist your interesting title. I never thought of a fairy living in a hovel!
The setting is vividly detailed and the situation that unfolds is unique. I can imagine it like an interview and your dialogue is well done. The twist at the end made me laugh! OMG. What a crazy thought? Now I see why you used so many z's and the multifaceted eyes. 
This was fun bit of fairy flash! 
The form is fairly well composed keeping in mind the comic element and the Irish theme suitable to this time of year and the form itself. I did notice that the line one and line 5 are 10 syllables instead of 8 like line 2. Usual formats keep lines 1,2, 5 equal counts. Adding a word to line 2 would keep the consistently.
Your first line hooked me in as with the character we do not know where we are or what is happening. You portray his confusion and later his tension clearly as he realizes the full extent of the chip's power. Scarey.
I enjoyed the humour in the name and at the end as he finds a cool positive possibility that could counter his loss of control.
Having the "smile" image show up again is effective. Nicely planned out.
The story flows well and the dialogue serves the story. I can almost make out chip's personality and you show that he is quick to pick up signals from man and net! It was useful to put the words in italics and all of the conversation would be going on in his head. 
Your poem is a model villanelle with its elements intact. Your rhymes are well chosen and give the sense of light and dark as you describe the journey of one place to another, life and death. The sand image is unique and so apt as a metaphor. 
The key lines tell a lovely story on their own and sum up the journey in a stellar way. I enjoyed reading it several times and entering into the vision. Peace and acceptance resonates with the wisdom of living well with trust in the journey. 
Thanks for sharing your vision and well conceived craft. I am sure Sticktalker smiles from afar. 
Wow! I so enjoyed reading this amazing and well crafted story poem. The structure with its quatrains and consistent rhyme flowed quite well and has lots of detail. It was so cool when the Ghost lab folks come and solve the puzzle in a surprising way. Very creative and original expression! 
I was drawn to the title as it made me curious and it fits well with the concept of an unbroken love connection in your romantic expression. 
I did wonder about the word "thine" as I read that it might be used with nouns beginning with a vowel or silent "h" and that "thy" is used with nouns like "wonders". Yet I am not an expert and maybe it is not a hard and fast rule. 
The contrast of the "pencil-like sentries of evergreens" with the "sprinkling of deciduous hardwoods" is appealing and vivid image set in the descriptive scene. The personification works well too.
Wow! This is a brilliant picture, painted with well chosen vocabulary that was fun to read.