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Wow! I am so impressed with this creation with its fine form and specific detail about the subject of skin! What an intriguing topic for a poem and your genius thinking is apparent. Well done.
The title suggests humour and ironic as the poem is not "skinny" on detail and fact. The tone has a lightness too it as it examines the aspsects of skin and its care. The vocabulary is well chosen and themeatic and I like the variety...words like "hirsute" and integuement" give it a scientific vibe and I had to look them up. lol. Awesome when I can learn something. Your observation and knowledge on skin is well illustrated in the facts you weave into the commentary. 
The structure was effective and punctuation served the read, adding to the drama as well. The voice was strong and consistent and key opinions were pursuasive. 
I had such fun entering the vision! 
I am back again enjoying your poetic gifts and found a great laugh in your limerick.
The way you got to use the word "canoe" as a way of delivery is brilliant and funny, though I know canoeing can have slowups in travelling. LOL One could canoe down the Amazon. Awesome. The rhyming is excellent and fun too.
These acrostics are amazing and totally capture the essence of doing crosswords and highlight the famous New York Times puzzle. Amazing that so many people do them. My mom used to do crossword puzzles all the time in the Canadian papers. She knew an amazing amount of words in her time.
You did a super job with the interesting long phrase in the last poem. It is a lot of letters for the theme. I really got the vibe of how challenging these puzzles can be from your descriptions especially the examples of the answers to find! Wow! Adding clues that had empty lines shows a way clues are given as well.
I am here with a review to celebrate you! 
My review has been submitted for consideration in "
Thank you for sharing your true to life vision to spread awareness.
I appreciate the effort it took to create it. I have tried to do these without much success. 
The poem is a delight to read with its inner rhyme and use of assonance and consonance added to a cohesive soundscape. The personification is excellent and I like the way you weave in the elements of candle life. 
OOPs. I see a little typo in "shinning"! 
I like the positive vision of partnership that is conveyed here and feel the gratitude of the poet for the gift. A wonderful weave with a gentle tone and romantic flair. Thanks for sharing your 
I loved the image conveyed by "cavernous fiefdom" and it really sums up your point of view brilliantly. I really enjoyed reading this verse aloud for its pleasing flow and descriptions. The writing is coherent and I like your style. It is a sad commentary as to where people's treasures seem to be. Wow!
Hail Jimminycritic! I am happy to read your entry in "
I like that it had a journal like feel to it though.
The first line I felt was long, filled with many ideas and could be more interesting to draw me in. A comma after "space" would have helped in the read. I had to reread to figure out what was meant.
You set up the characters and their background clearly in the second paragraph so I got a feel for them. A few of glitches occurred to me as I read.
Where you begin with "Brandon suddenly begins...you start to use the present tense from here on instead of third person "began to" etc. The voice changes. I think consistency is more effective. eg. Brandon began... Sarah ran..etc" 
The photo of your truck is incredible too. Looks like a near miss and I remember living through a couple of ice storms and the damage was pretty freaky. Awesome that you could capture it in pics. It would make a good prompt for a story! 
Hiya Dave! Happy Party Time! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! 
The first verse is my favourite for its vivid images like "plumes" "stardust" and "wings" with their descriptions 
In the second verse the last image is brilliant and the close sound of "unknown" and "moon" echoed well. I think the word "previously" is a bit heavy and not so poetic as in the first verse. It through me out of the piece a bit. I think "constellations unknown" says it all as it would mean they are still unknown til they get there, so why say "previously"? 
I was glad you found a way to make it positive... in looking to the future rather than complaining and getting sucked into the dark. Like you mentioned, it could be suicide making experience. 
We could all take a lesson here...and many of us have had less to go through that this. You are an inspiration. 
I could feel the devestation of not even being able to say goodbye to family. Again, for no good reason. I can see how Fear really runs the show and denies common sense and decency. You really reveal the dark side of this structure that is supposed to protect the innocent.
I am delighted to review your piece from 'I Write in 2018"! Congrats on making it to the end! 