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Review of Space dream  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good afternoon!

It is inspiring that you had a dream about going to space. Your dream didn't stop there; you took the necessary steps to make your dream come true. This is fantastic. I admire your courage. Being an astronaut is hard work. Being afraid of heights, being an astronaut would not be a profession for me to pursue.

To be remembered, I am considering having my body launched into space after I die. I figured I could float around in the universe encouraging people on Earth to hang in there. I would let them know that they are valuable and precious in the sight of God. They would be able to feel my presence around them. Future generations would know that I existed here.

I hope you will experience joy, happiness, and good health throughout your lifetime.

Keep writing; I'm sure that you will be an inspiration to many. I hope that this review will bring a smile to your face.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Vernal Equinox  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening!

I read your writing entitled, "Vernal Equinox.", and decided to give you a review. Even though I am not a professional reviewer, I can offer feedback on how I reacted after I read it.

I enjoyed reading your poem. I can tell that you expressed a lot of emotion when you wrote it. I encourage you to write. I believe people can relate well to this. It takes courage to express how you feel. Please don't be shy; share your talent with the world; you are talented; I see your talent progressing in the future. I hope my review will bring a smile to your face.

I hope you will have many blessings of health, and happiness always.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening!

I read this poem you wrote entitled, "My Beautiful Survivor.", and decided to do a review for you. Even though I am not a professional reviewer, I can offer you feedback on how I felt after reading your poetry.

You wrote a beautiful poem about your beautiful survivor who put on a facade about being strong when she wanted to cry. I can relate to this. I've had men scold me for shedding tears when something hurtful was said to me. They wanted no part of that; I was told I was too weak to handle anything. Men are often told not to cry. It's okay to cry; it takes a person of understanding to tell someone that they're there for them and that they can permit that person to cry.

I encourage you to keep writing. More people need to let someone cry when they need to. It's nice to know you feel that way toward your beautiful survivor.

Have a beautiful day with many blessings of health and happiness from this day forward. I hope that I made you smile with this review.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of FAVE WRITERS  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good morning!

I reviewed your writing entitled, "FAVE WRITERS." I am not a professional reviewer but after reading your story, I can offer input on how I felt after I finished it.

I am thrilled that you like to read. I read a lot but haven't heard of most of the authors you have listed. My favorite author is Dr. Charles Stanley. I like reading stories about the true stories about people's lives; I find them very interesting.

I encourage you to inform people about the titles of the books you've read and the author's names too. I do this myself.

I hope you will be filled with blessings of health and happiness today and in the days ahead.

I hope that my review has put a smile on your face.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good afternoon!

I reviewed the piece that you wrote entitled, "Tell Me About Your Heart Please." I am not a professional reviewer but, I can offer my input into how I felt after I read it.

I can relate to your story about relationships. I was in a relationship with my second husband, who didn't talk to me for about six or seven years. This wasn't a pleasant time; it felt awkward. I felt that I was walking on eggshells every day. He had problems with chain-smoking, alcohol, and drugs. I eventually ended the relationship by walking out and later divorcing him. I was married for about 18 and a half years. He also had a mental health disability.

I enjoyed reading your story. When you were asking him how it felt when he ended the relationship, I thought the same thing. I encourage you to keep writing. I believe it will help others who have been through the same thing. Even though the situation was painful, the love was still there.

I hope that my review has helped you.

I hope today and the days ahead will be filled with blessings, health, and happiness. Remember to keep your head up high and smile; this helps to ease the pain.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good morning!

I am reviewing your writing on, "The Calling of Tomorrow." I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer my input on what I thought about your writing and how it made me feel.

You made a valid point with your question on whether we can hear the calling of tomorrow for future generations. If we don't do something, how can we hold our heads high before them? I would want a better future for our future generations. With the non-sensical happenings occurring in our society today, it doesn't sound like there's much hope for them. We need to stop the hate that's out there; we don't need to encourage violence and remarks about racism. The immigrants that arrive here should be treated with kindness and respect. My father was an immigrant from Sweden; he didn't know any English when he arrived in the United States of America He became a citizen and worked hard in his life. I heard good stories from him; I regret not remembering them.

I encourage you to keep writing. I enjoyed reading what you wrote.

I hope your day will be filled with blessings of good health and happiness in the days ahead.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good morning!

I reviewed, "Your Face Inside the Quiet Room." I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer input on how it made me feel after reading your love poem to your wife.

I thought that your poem was beautiful. Your words to her were very touching. I can tell that you loved your wife very much. It was meaningful and caring. I encourage you to keep writing; I believe that your poem can reach people in a kind and loving way. I admire that you took the time to write such a beautiful poem.

I hope that you will have many blessings of health and happiness today and in the days to come.

I enjoyed reading your poem.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of A Lost Escape  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and good evening!

I reviewed your poem, "A Lost Escape." I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer my input of how I felt after reading it.

Your poem was well-written with descriptive words. It was relatable to find that the things that were enjoyable to us in the past were no longer enjoyable. Even when we have lost a place in our memory where we had fun, we can still remember it in our minds.

I encourage you to keep writing. Perhaps a new memory can be beautiful even when times have changed. We can adapt to changes with hope in our hearts, then we can look forward to a fun-filled day again.

I hope that you can find places where you can have fun once again.

I hope that you will be filled with many blessings of health and happiness today and in the days ahead.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning!

I reviewed your piece entitled, "The Wise Carpenter." I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer my input of how I felt after reading it.

It is true that when you're frustrated, it shows in your work. When your attitude is right, you will do better work. This is a good lesson to learn. I enjoyed reading this. I wish that more people could recognize that.

You have a terrific day filled with many blessings, health, and happiness, now, and in the days ahead.

I hope that this has made your day start with a smile.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Hope  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer input regarding how I felt after reading your piece.

I have reviewed, "Hope." Your writing brought back a lot of hope. It was well put together. I encourage you to keep writing; it will inspire others to have hope when going through struggles in life. I know that you inspired me. Keep up the great work!


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Pocket Watch  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening, Grace!

I reviewed your piece entitled, "Pocket Watch." I am not a professional reviewer but I can give you input into what I thought after reading it.

Guilt is a tough weight to carry around. Guilt can overcome us when we can free ourselves from it by turning to Our Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ. When we pray, we can feel relieved from that guilt and it won't have to weigh us down.

One doesn't need to keep checking to ensure that guilt is with us daily. I hope that you will continue to write. You were precise in explaining what guilt can do. I desire that you won't have to check a pocket watch to keep track of guilt. Once you can be free of guilt, a huge weight can be lifted. Break the chain that keeps you locked into it. You will be amazed at how much better you'll feel.

It is my sincere hope that my review has been a help to you.

Have many good days of happiness and health ahead.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Spilled  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I reviewed your piece entitled, "Spilled." I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer my input on how your piece made me feel and give you my best thoughts for a good review.

You have an excellent way of describing about the great depression. I could feel the emotion of what depression feels like. I have battled depression in my life since 1074 through 2006 having been diagnosed as having a Schizo-Affective Disorder. You have described the heaviness or darkness that depression can bring. It is a feeling that doesn't seem to go away, no matter how many times people have told us that by keeping busy, our depression will go away.

I hope that by now you have been feeling better. One thing is to believe in yourself and not let the depression keep you in a dark place. I encourage you to keep writing; I have found this to be a good tool for feeling better about ourselves. Keep your chin and head up; this can be not easy to do, but in time, we can be more accepting of going through it and know that we are okay. Taking the right kind of medication can do wonders for our mental health. I am taking Bupropion and Abilify. Abilify was like a miracle drug for me.

I am thinking positively that my review has helped you to feel better.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I am not a professional reviewer, but I enjoyed reviewing your story, "Sergeant Gus and the Day of Joy." Your story brought a smile to my face and joy in my heart. It's hard to know what the military has to do in different situations. Gus seemed like a jolly soul who wanted to do the right thing. It seems like all of us should have the right to free speech, but it seems like there are those of us who get in trouble when we speak out.

Keep writing. This is a great story for anyone to read.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of New Year's Mood  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening!

I enjoyed playing the word search "New Year's Mood". I was able to get all of the words. I hope that you will have a Happy New Year filled with many blessings, health, and smiles. I hope that you can have more Happy New Year's Days in the future.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Paul Ryan!

It took me a few attempts to find all the words for the grammar word search. I finally found all of them. Does this make me a grammar expert now? I wish. I still have a lot to learn about that.

I had fun looking up all the words. I encourage you to do more word searches; they do my brain a lot of good.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Penguins!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! I found all the words in the word search about penguins. It was fascinating what the different breeds of penguins were. I enjoyed doing the search on the penguins. I like to watch penguins go on their journey; I am amazed at how far they travel.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hey! I scored 5 right out of 10. That's better than I thought I would do. Thank You for the opportunity to take this quiz. I went on instinct and a hunch for the correct answer. I am in a learning mode. I like to take a quiz to find out how much I know. I encourage you to do more quizzes; you did a fantastic job on this one.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Mystery TV  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening!

I enjoyed all the word searches that you provided. I got done with it faster than I expected to. Some of the shows I remembered, and some I didn't. I encourage you to come up with more word searches; you did a fantastic job. My memory was refreshed by some of the former shows that I watched years ago.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This puzzle was somewhat challenging with longer words to solve. I found all the words. I had fun. Thank you for the puzzle of the Proverbs 31 Women. The puzzle got me to think. I want to encourage you to do more puzzles like this one.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Mochoa  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening and hello, Darth Owl!

I am not a professional reviewer but will do my best to give you a good review. I have reviewed "Mochoa". This poem is well-written. The ending was said when a man asked another man to marry him. Later on, the other guy told him that he wasn't in love with him. Any break-up is hard and painful.

I am proud of the fact that you dare to share your story with the public. I encourage you to keep writing. I could feel the emotion of pain that you were trying to project. I could feel the tears that were held inside from a proposal that went wrong.

Overall, I could understand the reasons why you would want to run away. It's a feeling of disbelief and shock; the after-effects of having a broken heart. You could continue with the feeling(s) of how you felt (what was going through your head) when you were told that you weren't loved by him.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening and Hello, Amy Jo-Spooky Season is Here!

I got all the words solved in this puzzle. I had fun trying to find them; some were easier to find than others. I am learning new words, which is exciting! It's like searching for eggs and then putting them in the Easter Basket.

I like to find words; still, there are words that I am still trying to find, but, then again, I find the words and then give the writer an encouraging sign for them to continue going on with their work.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Wily, and Good evening!

I was able to get one out of two correct. I noticed that it was the same question. This may be a trick question. I gave a different answer to both. I was not sure how this quiz was going to go, but I was happy to get one out of two correct. I enjoyed taking your quiz; it got me to use my brain.

I want to encourage you to keep doing quizzes; you've done an excellent job. I want to send you many smiles and hugs for your effort to put this quiz together. Let them bless you tonight and continue throughout your future.

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I scored 40 on this test. I enjoyed taking the test. I didn't think that I would do so well. Keep on writing quizzes. You've done a great job.
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Review of one piece quiz  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good Evening!

I got three corrections out of ten. I got brave and took this test to find out what I knew. I will not give up. I will try again at another time.

I encourage you to keep on doing quizzes.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of SHADOW  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening, Kayden!

I am not a professional reviewer; however, I can give you feedback on anything that needs to be corrected and how your poem affected me.

My sister, not a twin, was not a happy camper when I came into the world, because of our parents being older. My dad was 56 when I was born and my mother was 39. Out of four siblings, my sister, who is the oldest, was 18 when I came along. My sister is 85 years old and I am 66. Since I was about 11 or 12 years old, I felt like I was the black sheep of the family. I can relate to the feeling of being the shadow because she hasn't been that nice.

Keep believing in yourself. You are a good person. Don't let anyone take you away from that. Give yourself a hug to remind you that you are special.

I encourage you to keep writing. I admire the courage you put forth in writing this poem.

Anna Marie Carlson
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