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Review of “Let it out”  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good morning to you!

I have finished reading "Let it Out", and I will do a review for you. I am not a professional reviewer. I can give my feedback on how your short story inspired me.

Dancing is freeing. I like the freestyle form of dancing. I don't care if I have a partner, although it would be nice, I get myself out there on the floor and dance anyway. Dancing is a form of expression; I go where the music leads me. Having my choice and style of dancing is nice; I don't have to worry about stepping on anyone's toes. I have, from my experience of dancing that the best partner to have while dancing is a broom. It's amazing how many moves you can do when you have a broom in your hand. You don't have to be criticized hard by someone who can destroy your love of dancing. Criticism is harsh.

I encourage you to keep writing. I enjoyed reading your short story. I am excited that you shared your story with the public. It takes courage to do that. Don't give up when you are criticized for your writing.

I hope you are blessed with friendships, good health, love, and happiness throughout your lifetime.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good morning to you!

I read your story "Quest for the Homestead". I am giving you a review of your story. I am not a professional reviewer, but I can do my best to offer feedback on how your story has impacted me.

When you wrote this story, I could feel the emotion behind it. I admire you for having the courage to share your story with the public. The emotions felt at the time were understandable. You must have had a lot of questions that needed to be answered. My mother had dementia, and I know the struggles that come with this disease. Having a nice relationship with your mother can help you cope; it will give you hope. I knew my mother loved me because she told me how much she loved me daily. It would be devastating to find out that your father wasn't your father. Agent Orange was terrible, and it must have frightened you to see him in the condition he was in because of it. It was sad that your father was killed in a horrible automobile accident. It was nice that you were given a photo of the last time you were together.

The following paragraph went as follows:

"My brother could not conceive children; nor could I," she said. "Your mom and Curtis conceived you. I forgave him, but my brother could not forgive your mother; and, so, he left to join the Army. Her husband, your father, was killed in a horrible automobile accident soon after that picture was taken of you and him together" It was good for you to have that memory.

I made some minor corrections to the above paragraph. I hope you find my suggestions helpful.

When your mother had an affair because your brother could not conceive children, was shocking, no doubt. I know it's hard to forgive someone who has done that, but, it would be best for him to find forgiveness in his heart. If he does that, he will find a huge load lifted from his shoulders. He will find peace.

I encourage you to write. Your story can help someone else who has also gone through the same or similar situation.

I hope you receive blessings of friendships, good health, love, and happiness to last your lifetime.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening to you!

I reviewed your poem "To The Man Who Deceived His Own Heart". Although I am not a professional reviewer, I can give you feedback on how your poem impacted me.

I wrote a poem "Cold-Hearted"
 Cold-Hearted Open in new Window. (E)
I wrote this Acrostic Poem thinking of a person who has suffered from a broken heart.
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when I went through a similar situation. I was told that I would be picked up at a certain time when I was dating, but they turned up being no-shows. I fell in love with some of them, but they didn't love me. When they showed up and we went on a date, they treated me like a stranger. That broke my heart.

I realize it must have been hard to write the way you felt. It takes courage to write your feelings down for the public to read. I admire your courage for taking this step.

I encourage you to keep writing. Other people can learn from your experience too.

I hope you are blessed with friendships, good health, love, and happiness throughout your lifetime.

Don't let that guy destroy other relationships you may have; it's not worth it.

I hope you have a smile on your face today. Feel free to read my poem or any others you may want to read.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good evening to you!

I am reviewing "Negative & Positive Thoughts". I am not a professional reviewer, but I can do my best to give you feedback on how your story has impacted me.

I have a suggestion to give you. On the first stanza, it reads as follows:

A negative thought can be like a glove,
But instead you could just go outdoors and look above,
And see a mysterious little white dove

Put a comma after instead and leave out the word just.

The second stanza reads as follows:

A negative thought can be like a bull's sharp horn,
From a beautiful ruby red rose's thorn,
But a positive one can be a lovely song being played from a horn.

You can leave out the word being.

The third stanza reads as follows:

A negative thought can be like soggy morning dew,
But instead I'd look up into the sky if the wind blew,
And see the vast sky's sapphire blue.

After the word like, add a comma, and after the word instead, add a comma.

I hope these suggestions were helpful. You may want to try to get an editor to help with the punctuation. This would help your story sound better.

I enjoyed reading your poem about nature. I encourage you to keep writing. The more you write, the better you'll become.

I hope you find blessings of friendship, good health, love, and happiness throughout your lifetime.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good afternoon to you!

I am proud to review your love story "Engaged and Married". Although I am not a professional reviewer, I can give you feedback on how your story has impacted me.

Your story was both happy and sad. Being a Christian, we know your wife has gone to a wonderful place. Even though we know this, we still miss their presence here on Earth. I am happy to hear that her family is supportive of you. Always remember the wonderful memories you shared. She would not have wanted you to be sad.

On July 27, 2006, was the day I lost my mother. Life is emptier without her, but I remember the wonderful times we shared. I met my boyfriend the day before she passed away. There is a good story for that. I will share it at another time.

You should have a special day of remembrance for her on July 12. Having time to reflect is good.

I enjoyed reading your story. I am glad you shared it. Both of us shared the loss of someone we loved in July. Let's celebrate the happy times we had with them.

I hope you have many friendships, good health, love, and happiness. You are deserving of that. May you have many more blessings during your lifetime.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Finding Freedom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, there, and Good afternoon to you!

I am doing a review for you on "Finding Freedom". I am not a professional reviewer, but I can give you feedback on how your story impacted me.

I am glad you found your way in life. What I wanted to do in life is to be happy with the one I love, and be with friends who genuinely care. I am 67 years old. It's a hard life today. A lot of people are angry. This is not good. My hope is for us to get along in society without fighting. I don't know what's happening to our freedom. It doesn't look good right now. I trust in my heavenly Father to put the right leader in charge of our country. It is scary at this point.

It's okay to be alone, but I would rather be alone with someone who genuinely loves and cares for me.

I remember when I was a teenager, I didn't want anyone telling me what to do. What I didn't realize was how bad society was. It used to be whenever you'd shake hands with someone, it was a done deal. There was a trust factor; your word was solid. I believed I could adapt to changes okay, but, now, I see the benefits and the destruction of our freedom for making choices. I wish time would go back a little. I sit back, relax, and hope the best for our future.

I hope you will have blessings of friendship, good health, love, and happiness to last a lifetime.


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Review of Untitled  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good afternoon to you!

I am doing a review of "Untitled". I am not a professional reviewer, but I can share how your story has impacted me by giving you feedback.

You are off to a good start. I have a suggestion that might help. If you jot down some ideas for a title for your story; you can decide which title looks the best. I know you can do this. I have faith and confidence in you. It takes a lot of work to be a writer, but the more you write, the easier it will be. It takes practice. When you're finished writing, read it back to yourself out loud. This way you can find out how you sound. I do this myself.

I encourage you to keep writing. Don't give up. You did well; you wrote something down to share with the public. It takes courage to do this. I am proud of you for taking the first step. If you get criticized too much, take what you can from it, and proceed with your writing. You will get there.

I hope my review has helped you. I hope your life will be filled with blessings of friendships, good health, love, and happiness.

Don't get frustrated with your writing. If you become frustrated, take a break and return to it later. You will have fresh ideas on what to add to your writing.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good morning to you!

I am doing this review for you on "Nights of Dreamless Slumber". I am not a professional reviewer, but I can do my best to give you feedback on my impression of your poem.

The last four stanzas of your poem read as follows:

Theres more of that I want to write
but that's only for me and the moon to know.
When the lights are dim, and the moon arose
I'll be writing like I never intend to be.

If I were lucky enough and have the stars on our side
we could finally meet again in the end,
and I could bring you the thousands of letters I write
that I desire to give to you in the night.

So when the time has come and you had seen
the bunch of papers left of me,
glowing under satin sheets of light
that screams for you to set them free.

Please read them in the night
So that the moon can join in delight,
of what they had helped to make
To give to you until this day.

I have a few minor suggestions for you to correct:

1. The first line should be: There is more of rather than Theres more of.
2. The fourth line should be: I'll be writing like I never intended to be rather than
I'll be writing like I never intend to be.

It's nice to know that you want to set the papers free of what's left of you when you're gone. This is how I feel about all the writing I have done, so others can read what I've written. I want others to enjoy reading my material.

I enjoyed reading your poem. You expressed yourself very well.

I encourage you to keep writing. I am certain other people would like to read your work.

I hope your life is filled with blessings of friendships, good health, love, and happiness.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good evening to you!

I am doing a review for you on "How to Look Naturally Beautiful and Attractive". I am not a professional reviewer, but I will do my best to give you feedback on how your writing has affected me.

I enjoyed reading what you wrote about being beautiful and attractive. It was an interesting read. It was very well=written and informative. There were things who wrote that I wouldn't have thought of.

Feel free to read any of my work when you have the time.

I hope you are blessed with friendships, good health, love, and happiness on a daily basis.

I encourage you to write. You have covered a great topic with your writing.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good evening to you!

I am going to give you a review on "A Magazine of Verse". I am not a professional reviewer, but I will do my best to give you feedback on how your poem had affected me.

I am not sure, but I am thinking that the magazine you're referring in your poem talks about guns.

The first stanza reads as follows:

All the days pavement has been black
with rain, but in our warm brightly-lit
Room, praise God,
I kept to saying myself,
And saying not a word,
Amen you Answered

If the rain has been black, it must have been from the bombs bursting in the air, which was the cause of black rain.

In the brightly-lit room, you were praising God. That was wonderful!

I encourage you to continue on with your writing. It does wonders for your heart to share with other people the experiences you've been through.

I hope you have blessings of joy, friendships, good health, love, and happiness throughout your life.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good evening to you!

I am going to give you a review on "The Everlasting Promise". I am not a professional reviewer, but I'll do my best in giving you feedback on how your poetry about love impacted me.

I love the whole poem. It is very romantic. The last two stanzas read as follows:

The bells danced harmoniously
She stood amidst the chapel light
With her eyes glistening so bright
and they began their sacred vows.

Time ceased its endless march
As their souls intertwined
The hearts sworn an eternal oath
When love's symphony played as one.

This showed genuine love as they began their sacred vows.

The first two stanzas showed their love from her point of view and his point of view.

The first two stanzas read as follows:

She walked down the aisle
Enrobed in a white gown
glazing the polished floors down
like the silent fall of winter's first snow.

He gazed at her with pearls
of tears rolling upon his cheeks
battling with the hues of his heart
with a crescent of delight

The bride and groom are very much in love with each other. Your poem was well-written. It talked about two people saying their vows to one another. She was beautiful and he was handsome in their attire.

I encourage you to write. It's does a heart good to express yourself to other people. I admire your courage as a new author branching out.

I hope your life is filled with blessings of friendships, good health, love, and happiness. You are deserving of that.


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Review of Warrior  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good evening to you!

I am doing a review on the nice story that you've written entitled, "Warrior". I am not a professional reviewer, but I can offer my interpretation by giving you feedback on how your story impacted me.

I liked how you presented yourself by having the courage to do different things. For that, you are a true warrior. I liked the following part of your story:

Each thudding heartbeat is my body reminding me
That I have battle wounds from greater things than this moment
And a spirit within me that simply can't be broken
Each thudding heartbeat is my body reminding me
That I can keep going.

I see a few minor corrections for you to think about.

Each thudding heartbeat in my body reminds me instead of is my body and reminds instead of reminding

And a spirit within within me that can't be broken. Leave out the word simply.

I hope these suggestions are helpful to you.

I encourage you to write. It takes courage to share your story with the public. This makes you a warrior.

I hope you are blessed with friendships, good health, love, and happiness daily.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good evening to you!

I am reviewing your poem "Talking to Strangers Who Claim to be Kin". I am not a professional reviewer. I am happy to provide you feedback on how your poem impacted me.

It's interesting how you get the same questions from strangers as you do from your kin. When you get to the age of leaving your family, you find out that it's been a long time since you've heard from them. When you hear from them, it's something else when you realize that you've been gone a long time. You miss out on what everyone else is doing. You don't seem to be included in the family conversations anymore.

Due to a misunderstanding between my sister and me, she doesn't say much of anything good about me. When I do see her, the same questions get asked time and time again. I tried to make things right with her, but she has kept some unforgiveness in her heart.

I encourage you to keep writing. You have legitimate questions you've written down in your poem. I can see other people relating to your poem as well.

I hope you have friendships, blessings, good health, love, and happiness surrounding you daily.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good morning to you!

I read "Questions and Thoughts...". I am going to give you a review of your work. I am not a professional reviewer. Giving you feedback on your work is something I am honored to do

The questions you've come up with are fascinating to me. It puts my brain in motion to learn new things. Pondering over things we're curious about is good for us. I'm sure you'll have fun coming up with more questions for our learning experience. I wouldn't have thought about the question you asked about the rainbows.

How come there are single rainbows and a double rainbow? I saw a triple rainbow once. I couldn't believe it when I saw it. Triple rainbows are pretty awesome. A photograph I saw in a picture frame was of a triple rainbow. I saw this in a restaurant. I haven't heard of anyone seeing one.

I encourage you to keep writing. It's pretty amazing how you came up with these remarkable questions. It's good to be curious about why certain things are not called something else.

Blessings of friendships, good health, love, and happiness are the things I hope surround you daily.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good evening to you!

I am doing a review of "Can I Belong To You?" I am not a professional reviewer. I can offer you feedback on how your prose impacted me.

This is such a beautiful love story. I'm sorry it left you brokenhearted. I can tell how much love there was for this person. It made me want to start crying. I could feel the emotion behind this.

Getting into arguments is not a good thing. We need to de-escalate arguments; they're no good for a relationship. We need to agree to disagree.

I suggest you get a professional editor to read your story. They can help you make your story sound better.

I hope you are surrounded with blessings of friendships, good health, love, and happiness daily.


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Review of Realization  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good evening to you!

I am reviewing your poetry entitled, "Realization". I am not a professional reviewer. I can offer you feedback on how your poem impacted me.

I found your poem interesting. I remember dressing up as Santa Claus on Christmas Eve handing out presents to the kids. I looked forward to Christmas. I enjoyed opening up presents. It was a lot of fun. These days I look forward to Christmas to get my special boyfriend and me a photograph with Santa Claus.

When you get older (I am 67 years old), things begin to change. In my life, I don't get too many gifts. It's a rare occasion when I get some. My sister gives me a gift card for Christmas. This is something I can count on two days a year. Once on my birthday and one for Christmas.

I remember as a teenager wanting to have my own freedom by getting out of the house. Once this happens, life happens. There's a charge for rent on an apartment, electric and water bills, groceries, etc. When you're on your own, you begin to pay bills. After you pay all your bills, you will find that you don't have much to spend on yourself.

Times have changed. There's a lot of chaos and stress. Homelessness is around everywhere. It all changed when political parties began to fight with one another using words that would attack the other person by threatening them or destroying their reputation.

I encourage you to keep writing. I hope I have helped you. Don't be discouraged. Hang in there.

I hope you have blessings of friendships, good health, love, and happiness.
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Review of The Call  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening to you!

I am doing a review on your story "The Call". I am not a professional reviewer. I can give you feedback on how your story impacted me.

Your story was interesting. The part I found to be a part of your life is as follows:

In hindsight it feels like that was my turning point. Since then I feel like I've been lost not sure where to go with my life. I've tried everything, The Police, and EMS Academy, CDL School. I even tried a second run at UNT. But I find myself where I am now. Looking not only for a job but for a purpose. So, I've come back to the drawing board, a place where I once felt safe, writing. It's been a while since I've written anything meaningful. Even now as I type these words, I wonder if they have anything of value. I was an avid reader in my teens. I could sit for hours immersed in a world of my making.
It was my escape from the world, a place where all the worries and tribulations would fade as I made a world from a blank eight by eleven piece of paper. I felt as if the world I built rivaled that of Inception, a place where I was God.

I suggest you find a professional editor to view your work. It helps to make your story even better.

I encourage you to keep writing. I'm happy you got the courage to share your story in public.

I hope for the best for you in friendships, good health, love, and happiness.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening to you!

I am doing this review entitled, "Dementia, Alzheimer's, and Parkinson's"... I am not a professional reviewer. I can offer feedback on how your story impacted me.

I can relate to your story since my mother had dementia. She never let a day go by without
her saying how much she loved me. She also shook her finger at me when she said, "Now, Anna, don't you ever let anyone tell you that you didn't help me, because you did". I can still see that visual in my head.

People with these diseases need to know how much they are loved. Showing you care goes a long way for them. We don't need to be known as a disease. They need love and attention just like we do. They love to be hugged. When a person feels unloved, they feel like giving up. My mother was a good person. I loved to hear her sing songs and do a little wiggle for a dance.

Dealing with dementia is sad. My mother cried sometimes, thinking no one cared about her. There's so much to learn about this disease. I gave my mom hugs every day.

I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with smiles and happy thoughts. I hope good health lasts a long time.

I encourage you to keep writing. The information you shared was very informative.


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Review of choke  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good morning to you!

I am doing a review for you on "Choke". I am not a professional reviewer. I can give you feedback on how your writing has impacted me.

Yes, I have a sister who has suffocated me with holding on to the past. She won't let go of it. I can feel the emotion you've expressed in your prose. The one thing I've found working for me is forgiveness. Once you can put a hurt behind you, healing begins. Don't let bitterness destroy your chance for happiness. You will find a tremendous load being lifted from your heart. Don't let one man affect you to the point of not liking any man. There are good ones out there.

It takes courage to share your innermost feelings with the public. I admire you for taking that step. I encourage you to write. Writing is therapeutic. It's important to get your feelings out there rather than holding them inside of you.

I hope you will have many friends to support you. I hope you will let the bitterness go, and experience the joy you deserve.


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Review of Summertime  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good morning to you!

I am doing a review on "Summertime". I am not a professional reviewer. I can give you feedback on how your poetry impacted me.

It's good to have a poem out about summer. Summertime should be filled with warmth. I ended with an allergy in the spring, now I have a cold in the summer. I have allergies to the Elm tree and there happens to be many around here in Washington State.

I enjoyed reading your poem. The rhymes are flowing well. Yes, children are happy in the summertime. The flowers are in bloom. They bring beauty all around. My moods are better when I see the sunshine and a smile on people's faces.

I encourage you to keep on writing. You have a delightful way with words. You have brightened my day with gladness.

I hope many fabulous times come up for you daily. Let showers of blessings come down upon you. May the joy of summertime be with you. Let many friendships come your way.


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Review of I Love The Rain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening to you!

I reviewed "I Love the Rain" for you. I am not a professional reviewer. I can give you feedback on how your poetry has impacted me.

I like your second stanza a lot. It says the following:

I love the rain.
It's a kind of peace on the roof.
Keeps you calm in your room.
The pane it drips on makes it cool,
For instance when you plant it makes it bloom.

In the poem, there are two corrections to be made. These are minor. They are as follows:

It should read on the third line: It keeps you calm in your room.
On the fifth line, there should be a comma after instance,

I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you.
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Review of biograph  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening to you!

I am doing a review of "Biograph". I am not a professional reviewer. I can give you feedback on how your story impacted me.

I noticed that the last two verses of your poem repeated itself. The words are as follows:

I gave up all my sanity so I can be alone.
I gave up all my sanity so I can be alone.

I am concerned about this. It sounds like you are dealing with isolation. There are, however, times when I get in a mood like this. It's nice to mingle with people but it's hard at other times. Are you experiencing depression? I find myself thinking I can do so much better. Staying on my medication helps me. Taking Abilify (Name Brand) and Wellbutrin (Name Brand) are like a miracle drug for me. I am taking the generic brand for these two. Aripiprazole and Bupropion are the generic names for these. If you're not taking these, ask your doctor if you can take the above medications.

I have a schizoaffective disorder. I isolate but focus a lot of my time on writing. Writing is good therapy. It takes courage to share what you're going through. I admire the fact that you've taken that step.

I hope you're feeling better. I would like for you to smile again. It's important to keep our sanity.


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Review of Spring Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good morning to you!

I did a review of "Spring Time" for you. I am not a professional reviewer. I can give you feedback on how your poem impacted me.

Your poetry describes Spring perfectly. Sounds like you were happy when you wrote this. Now we are into Summer. It would be nice to write about summer. I woke up with a cold this morning; I hope it goes away soon. It's hard to believe someone can get a cold in the summertime. The flowers are in bloom, the sky is blue, and the clouds are a beautiful white. It doesn't make sense.

I wrote a poem about Spring called "I Welcome Spring"
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. Feel free to read it whenever you have the time.

I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the last verse of your poem that goes as follows:

How much I love spring,
Yes, it's in the air,
not here, nor there, but everywhere.

I look forward to the warmth of Spring and Summer. It puts me in a good mood for writing. It's harder for me to write in the winter when it's dark longer and the days and nights are colder.

I encourage you to keep writing. You have a nice way with words.


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Review of The Gifted Girl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and Good evening to you!

I just reviewed your story "The Gifted Girl". While I am not a professional reviewer, I can give you feedback on how wonderful your story is.

This story is about a gifted girl named Brenda. She had an IQ of 200 and around 500. Her intelligence was far above the average human. She also could bring dead humans or animals back to life and take them back to heaven. One day she noticed a spacecraft that she was curious about. Finally, an alien emerged from the spacecraft. The alien was there to protect her and be her friend. It would teach her how to use her special gifts. The second time she saw a little boy. This little boy was also an alien. She found out he was dead. She told him she was going to save him. He said he didn't need saving, but was there to protect her and be her friend.

The alien's purpose was to be her friend and protect her. Brenda was fortunate to have both aliens as her special friends. To have friends who understood her must have made her feel special. The average human being doesn't have her kind of intelligence.

I encourage you to keep writing. Your story was fascinating and enjoyable to read.

Let many blessings of hope, friendships, good health, love, and happiness surround you daily.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening to you!

I am reviewing your story about "The Pilot Fish: A Joe Barrett Series". This non-fiction story is very well-written. I am not a professional reviewer. What I can do is give you feedback on how your story impacted me.

I enjoyed reading it. Your story happens to be a non-fiction one. Is this a true story about yourself? This introduction to your story makes me want to read further.

I encourage you to continue forward with your writing. I'm sure there will be others who will enjoy reading this story also.

I pray for many blessings of good friendships, good health, love, and happiness to surround you daily.


Anna Marie Carlson
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