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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and good evening, George!

I scored a five on your quiz. I wish you the best in deciding a title for your project.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Celebrating WDC  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening!

I am excited. I took the "Celebrating Wdc" quiz and got eight out of ten correct. Not too shabby. I like taking these quizzes to help me know how much I learned. Most of the time I need to guess what the answer might be.

Keep up the fantastic job of putting these quizzes together. I appreciate your time in doing this.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! I solved your puzzle and had a blast doing so. I appreciate the time and effort that you put into preparing this puzzle. Keep up the nice work! I enjoy learning by doing word searches and it keeps my brain active. It works out, especially when you're sixty-six years old like me.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have a total of 17 reviews so far. I need to know if I am posting it right before I go any further. I may have put one in twice.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Thanksgiving  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning!

I completed another puzzle; this one was on Thanksgiving. Thanks again for the word searches.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning,

I solved your puzzle on Elemental Discovery. I remembered some of these terms when I took science in Middle School. I enjoy doing word searches. It keeps my mind active and alert. Keep on doing these puzzles. Keep on bringing them.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Keep smiling, you're doing great!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer feedback on what mistakes I may find that could be improved and how your story has affected me.

I edited all of the editing points to possibly make it sound better. I would suggest having a professional editor to do this. I decided to take a try at it. You can change it if you would like or leave it as is.

I enjoyed reading your story. I hope that this will bring a smile to your day today and in the future days ahead.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Unforgotten Souls  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer you feedback on anything that I come across that may need to be corrected and how your story has affected me.

Your story was very interesting to read. I did not see any spelling errors. Even when people get to be 106 years old doesn't mean that someone didn't have a love life. It was sad that she lost Cristopher at 23 years old and David died after over eighty years. Christopher and David were happy together. She was asked by her great-great niece if she was poly. She never thought of that at the time. The three of them were all happy being together.

It's sad when someone is being shuffled into a nursing home. After my mom had to go to a nursing home, it was very sad. She had dementia. I remember my mother crying when I had to leave her. I know how that felt.

I encourage you to keep on writing. I can only imagine the sadness that the lady felt when her great-great niece was moving away to live with her fiancée.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Farewell  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer you feedback on whether I noticed any mistakes that need to be corrected and how your story affected me.

This was an exceptional story about a man who played baseball for nineteen years playing for Denver. At an age of free agency and frequent trades, he never left the team and he was proud of the fact. He met his beautiful wife, Jessica there. He noticed that the clubhouse was empty when he walked in, turned on some music, and sat in front of his locker to relax. He noticed a small box on the top shelf; it was a box of Geritol. Dave, the clubhouse manager, laughed behind him. The baseball player said, "The jokes have already started" he said, laughing. It was hilarious and definitely what he needed to ease his nerves.

Joe Hardy, who had been with the club for ten years, said, "Hey, Jake, how are you feeling?" "I'm doing all right, Skip. Been here for a little while, kicking back and taking things in".

"Sports Network is here. They wanted him to ask Jake if he would like to be available for an interview before the game. Are you up for it? 'Not before the game. Tell them I'll give them as much time as they want after the game. They've been great with us. They'll understand."

The crowd got on their feet. He heard 46,000 people in unison saying, "Thank You, Jake. Thank You, Jake'.

At the end of the story, Jake plays a good one for his final game. This was a great way to say farewell to the game.

I encourage you to keep on writing. I'm confident that others will enjoy reading this too.

Have a great day and I hope that this brought you a smile.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer feedback on how your story has affected me and point out any corrections that need to be made.

I enjoyed reading your story "Probable Circumstances Surrounding the Disappearance of the Vanishing Man". I saw no spelling errors in your story. I had some laughs when I read it and was embarrassed for Bob when he was doing an impromptu striptease dance.

At the beginning of your story, it tells of a seven-year-old boxer named Rosco, as he was sniffing about, he noticed a pair of pants with a brown belt. A man's collared shirt was noticed further off in the wood line. (I found that this was two words rather than one word).

Chapter Two tells that Bob Thompson was invited to a "Dress Backwards Party". He pulled a prank by wearing his clothes the right way around. The attendees were to dance the night away. Bob was beaming with pride about his prank.

Your story was well-written and very detailed. I encourage you to keep on with your writing. It was interesting to read.

I hope that you will be filled with smiles today and on into the future days ahead.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good Evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer feedback on how your story affected me and help point out any mistakes that might be there.

I thought that travelling was spelled with one l, but I looked it up and found that either way is correct. Spelling it with a double l is the way the British do it. Look it over then you decide which way you would like to do it.

It was nice of you to share some helpful tips while traveling; this was good to know.

I encourage you to write. I'm sure that these tips will be useful for those who are out traveling.

Have a smile today and in the future days ahead.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of The Book  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello and Good afternoon!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer you feedback on any mistakes I may find for you to look over and how your story affected me>

I reviewed "The Thief". I enjoyed reading this story; it was well-written and I found no spelling errors. This is remarkable.

For this story, you asked whether he would retrieve the wealth or fail. My answer to this question is that he will. When the soldiers gave him another horse, this was a chance to go back at another time to retrieve it.

I encourage you to keep on with your writing. The story was interesting. Edward could get away, even when the man threatened to hang him if he didn't get his coins back.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and good morning!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer you feedback and what I thought after reading your piece.

You left an email address here. Is this a book? I will have to read it sometime. What I can gather here is that this piece is about survival and conquering. I love to read books about someone overcoming obstacles that they've been through.

Keep writing and thanks for sharing.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Might I?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer feedback to you on any mistakes I see that may need correcting and how your poem made me feel.

Your poem "Might I?" was very well written. I could feel an image as I was reading it; it was very detailed and descriptive; I could feel the emotion behind it.

I did not see any spelling errors in your writing.

I am hoping that many smiles will come your way today and on into the future.

I encourage you to keep writing.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Echoes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good Evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer my feedback on what may be a mistake and how your story has affected me.

This was a short poem; The words were strong: I felt as though you were talking to me. It looked like you gave a lot of thought to this poem when you wrote it.

I enjoyed reading this short but powerful poem. I encourage you to keep writing. I think that your poem was interesting enough to write more about.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Theirs  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good afternoon!

I am not a professional reviewer but can offer my feedback on mistakes that I may find and how your poem affected me.

You wrote a beautiful poem. I did not find any A's in it. It was well written. I encourage you to keep writing: I'm positive that others will find it interesting too.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of The Sunglasses  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good afternoon!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer my input on how your story affected me and offer any corrections that the story may need in the best way I can.

I saw places where a semi-colon or a colon could be used but not exactly sure where to put them.

I enjoyed reading your story "The Sunglasses". It goes to show that the reason the Wild Hair Lady wore sunglasses was the fact that she had no eyes because they never developed.

It only takes a moment for someone to look down before something happens; in this case, it was because of an accident: The driver looked down at a text message from his girlfriend; It only takes a split second for something bad to happen.

I encourage you to keep writing. I look forward to what happens next. Was the Wild Hair Lady dead or did she survive?


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning!

I am not a professional reviewer; however, I can offer you input on any mistakes I might see, and how I felt when I read it. I am happy that I chose your writing entitled "Blank Pages of the Past". I did not see any spelling errors. I enjoyed reading your story; it gave me some food for thought. Re-writing history would be great for one reason that I'm thinking of; changing the worst people of the past into good ones for the future would end up with a happier ending.

I encourage you to keep writing; you have the potential to be a good writer. Keep up the excellent work.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of MISTAKE  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello! Good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer, but I can offer you feedback on how I felt after reading your story on "Mistake".

It's hard being a teenager. Even though I am a senior now, I still remember my struggles as a teenager. Your story was well written. You used excellent detail in describing what you may have been going through. I want you to know that there's always hope. When feeling down, look up to God and Jesus Christ, our Lord and Savior. He always listens to us and never judges us when we ask for help in any situation. Remember to ask him for forgiveness. It's amazing how quickly someone can be lifted out of despair into a happier state of mind.

I felt sad reading your story because I've been there and I'm happy that you dared to reach out through your writing. I encourage you to keep writing. This helps to get over the pain and to help others through their pain.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, AmyJo!

I found all of the words that you put out for us to find. I like to do word searches; it keeps my mind active.

This word game was fun. I want to encourage you to do more. I am glad that you are part of our team.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I got five correct on this history quiz. My mind went blank on the others. It was fun to take this quiz.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, my name is Anna Marie Carlson, and I will review your story, "The Rise of Robots: Shaping Our Future". Although I'm not a professional reviewer, I can offer you feedback on places I see that need improvement and how your story made me feel.

I enjoyed reading your story. Robots will be entering our world to make things better for us. This sounds exciting and a bit scary at the same time. Our lives will be less dangerous when we have robots that can do everything we can, without putting ourselves in harm's way. They can do operations on us without getting tired and be more accurate in the process. You mentioned that the recovery time will be much quicker when robots perform surgeries. They can be our companions when we are lonely. Just being there to talk to you will remedy this situation. I have already used AI with some questions I had about different subjects. They give encouragement where it's needed.

I encourage you to continue with your writing. I found it to be interesting. You express yourself well. Robots give us hope for the future. Soon they will be in cars for safer driving.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Good evening Etelan!

I am not a professional reviewer, yet, I can give you feedback to let you know what I saw and how your story, "2 Slavers and Worse".

You have a nice way of showing how Oribio felt amongst 2 men, 6 women, and 60 children. The goblins weren't nice to them. Oribio's skin was covered in grime, sweat, and scratches, like his sad companions. The adults were restrained by fetters of iron, and the kids by exhaustion and the menacing sight of the Wargs.

It didn't sound like there was any way out for the ones being treated by the Wargs. At the end of the story, it sounded like they were being surrounded by even more goblins.

Even though I'm not much of a fan of scary stories, I felt that you did a tremendous job of explaining what Oribio went through. I would encourage you to keep writing; the more you write, the better you get.

I hope this was helpful to you. Have a nice day today and more days to come in the future.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of the perfect me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning, BINX!

I am not a professional reviewer, but I can give you feedback on what your story meant to me.

It's amazing how much your story is exactly how I feel; it's nice to know that there's someone else who feels the way I do; it sounds like we have a lot in common.

I can relate to your story when you say that perfection is forced on us sometimes to be the perfect image of who they would like us to be. What's wrong with just being ourselves? I've had a lot of people who were mad at me because they thought that I thought of myself as being perfect, which can be no further from the truth. I have never claimed that I was perfect; I have flaws just like anybody else. I don't know why they think the way they do.

Many times, I wish that they could accept me as just being me. They have high expectations of me that I cannot fulfill.

Thank You for sharing your story. This took a lot of courage for you to do that. I encourage you to continue onward with your writing. You have expressed yourself well.

Have a nice day filled with tons of smiles.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening, BINX!

I am not a professional reviewer, but I can give you feedback on how your story made me feel.

I can relate entirely to your poem. I remember what it was like as a teenager to be in love. The one you loved was on your mind every second of every day. When your favorite song came on you couldn't get the music out of your head. You were hoping that he/she would've noticed you, but then he/she didn't. This was something that would break a heart.

I enjoyed reading your story. For myself, I would hear the song, "Seasons in the Sun" by Terry Jax (I hope that I got the singer's name correct). This song always made me cry because the one I loved drowned. We were just friends but I hoped that he would've been my husband in the future. It pained me to know that whenever someone asked me on a date that they wouldn't show up. I felt this way a lot of times. The tears came flowing down. I thought that I had done something wrong.

Continue to write. I can feel the emotion that you have felt.

Anna Marie Carlson
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