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Review by Ashok Banerjee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
First, I want to pray for the departed soul of the author. It's a very important article that tells us how Lighthouses began. The ships were in severe trouble, especially in the night. Everything was dark. So, accidents happen frequently. For the security purposes, Lighthouse began. It was built in 250 B.C., in Alexandria, Egypt, on the island of Pharos, named "Pharos Light".
The Lighthouse maintenance is tough. Once, one takes charge of it, his job continues until death.
Superb writing style. But, we will not be able to see her new creation anymore. We are indeed unfortunate.


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Review of Masks and Myopia  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It's a poem about a riot and people too willing to join it. When the ruler becomes too arrogant, the public revolt to bring a new and brighter era. The experiences tell us that people unite when situations demand to unmask the stronger but brutal ruler.
The poet exposes that fact once again.
A nice style of writing.
Keep writing.

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's truly an exciting book mainly for Young Adult readers. Something was happening, that was not natural, in the land of Elsano. The King told everybody to take some precautions.
The central character of the story Riko resided there. His mother died in childhood.
One day, Riko met a boy. Riko understood that he might be an elf. But, there was no proof. But, on that Riko and that elf disappeared.
It's an exciting beginning.
What would happen next?

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a perfect story poem. Though, it is a bit lengthy but very interesting.
Summary of the poetry
There was a girl named Lily. She was afraid of a big, wide world and grew up within her castle walls. Once, she went to the woods ignoring the advice of elders.
Suddenly, God made her and advised her to be his devotee. As he only can be the source of endless peace. Lily followed the advice.
The selection of genres were lovely.
Other comment
It's truly a lovely poetry.
A bright future is waiting for you.
Keep writing.

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Review of Eyes of Mist  
for entry "2 - Dark Clouds" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
We see incident after incident in this chapter. But, as a total, unrest and dangers were reflected everywhere.
Jorcan and Narcal were discussing their policies about war.
Inexperienced Ayala is in the trap of the Shakaree. It was very difficult to survive for Ayala. Would she survive? That is the most important question. We are waiting anxiously for the next chapter.


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Once, the teller went to Mali, the second-poorest country in the world, to build a water-pumping station as an engineer. It was organised by the United Nations.
The teller saw the children were desperate for a piece of bread. He felt for them and tried to do something for them but others did not.
He named a child Kicky. He felt sad to see his demands, that was none other than a little food. Staffs used an abusive statements to them.
Once Kicky died. The narrator buried him but couldn't forget him.
Poverty is such a curse that can destroy your childhood and even your life. Those painful scenes are nicely drawn by the writer.
Write on!

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It is a good short story. It fulfils almost all the characteristics of the short story. Except one. The number of characters is too many. That should be the minimum in numbers.
The central character of the story is none other than Ernest Campbell. He was patronizing a local bar called The Devil’s Chemistry. He was arrogant. Piece always hampered if he was present there, both at home and outside.
Another important character in the story is Stephen. Another arrogant and dark character. He murdered Ernest Campbell in jealousy and buried him in his garden.
Police rescued the body and the funeral began. Everybody admired him. He went well over all kinds of disrespect which he earned in life.
The pace is smooth and creating the interest for the next. It continues all through the story.
It's well written.
I hope that your good work will be continued in future, too.
Keep writing.

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Review of Trauma  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's wonderful rhyming poetry. Undoubtedly, it was an unfortunate incident, but it occurred in real life.
The teller showed enormous faith him in several times, but he broke it every time. He didn't care to honour her love and faith. Despite those dishonours, she couldn't leave him but felt pain.
Once, she didn't tolerate those and was in deep trauma.
He left her life. After a long time, she could recover from trauma, fortunately. After recovery, she wished to rebuild a strong future.
I especially like the positive end of what the poet does.
I can see a bright future for you.
Keep writing.

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Review of Eyes of Mist  
for entry "1 - Peaceful Days" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The entire environment was silent. It was not calmness of peace. It was the calmness before the storm or in a burial ground. Everybody was waiting for an unknown danger. War could not be a solution. That situation indicated that truth once again.
Tamril was the author of that time. He came to the forest in his youth and never returned. He wrote about the fates of great lords and commanders in the war between Falamar and Shakaree so far. He stopped writing. However, after seeing Ayala, he realized that his writing was incomplete.

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Review of Erase  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In our daily lives, many things happen that shouldn't have happened. The betrayal of a lover is one of them that hurts us most. The teller experienced the same. His lover damaged her faith too much. She was very much upset. But, being an ideal human, she tried to begin a fresh journey and decided to move on with a positive mentality. That type of attitude is needed if you want to go forward and do not wish to stop.
I especially like the last line,
"but I'll move on and figure it out somehow."- this line tells the entire story.
Suggestion
You have written well. But, you used the 'None ' genre twice. It is considered a negative genre.
If you follow carefully, you will find several replacements. It's your experience. So why should you not replace it with the genre 'Experience'? It tells about the relationship. So, why should you not add the genre 'Relationship'?
It's a good performance.
Keep writing.

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Review of Eyes of Mist  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Most probably, the centre of the story will be the enmity between the Shakaree and the Falamar. We would see Ayala as the central character. She knew well that the Shakaree were evil. Despite that fact, she tried for an honourable peace settlement or tried to destroy them. We don't know what will happen ultimately. But, an exciting story is waiting for us. I assure you.


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Review of Toressa  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a lyric of a true love song. The lyricist can touch our hearts. The teller truly loves Toressa very much. Their souls are joined as a single unit. So, the physical distance between them doesn't matter at all. They always remain in contact with each other. It will last forever.
It is a characteristic of real love that they can discover others' presence. That makes the entire environment romantic. The lyricist is fabulous. Overall, we witness a good romantic song.
I especially like two parts of the song.
"You're with me everywhere I go
No matter what I do"
Another important part is-
"I close my eyes and hear your sighs
As whispers from the leaves
Your gentle touch I love so much
Comes lightly with each breeze."
These two parts combined tell the entire theme of the song.
What a beautiful creation it is!
Write on!

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
It's a very common but important topic of discussion. We are very grateful to the writer for enlightening us about copywriting.
Yes, there are a lot of rules about copywriting. If your writing breaks any one of those conditions, that will be banned forever. If you use the creation of one person without getting any proper permission, your writing will violate the rule of copyright. So you beg for permission to use it for the owner. If he does not permit you, you can not use it. Where do you use something without violating the rules? Those were mentioned clearly by the writer.
Overall, a brilliant article that is.
Write on!

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Review of Love  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
There is indeed no guarantee that your love will be rewarded. It would get a reward. Why does it happen? Because we wrongly think of an infatuation as love. That can create a disaster in our lives.
Only the love of God is guaranteed. So, devote yourself to him. Our life will be peaceful.
Nice poetry.
Keep writing.

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Review of Night Shift  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
How difficult the night-shift duty is! That is explained here in the simplest of words. The poet may have some experience with night shift duty. Otherwise, it can't be such lively. Sleep is the biggest enemy of that type of duty. To avoid it, black or cold coffee is useless. After some time, the physical condition doesn't permit any more strains. We search for some rest. In that way, the night shift is another critical tired day over.
Write on!

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Review of Welcome Home  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Here the teller is welcoming his friend who remains hidden inside his heart. We know that God resides in our hearts as an eternal soul. But, due to our sinful works, sometimes we can not find him there.
The narrator wants to return to his sacred life. So, he is again starting to realise God's existence inside him. He requests God to give him company forever. Every human wants this. But, only a few feel this as they are sinless souls. If you want to realize his presence forever, you have to be sacred.

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is another great poem by the poet. He is thinking deeply about our society and how we get close towards perfection. It is not an easy task, not an impossible one, too. Nothing is possible without the wish of God. So, why should we not devote ourselves to God? If he wants, we can do miracles. So, there is an inspiration to adopt the path of spirituality to build an honest and powerful society.

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Review of Clowning Around  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a perfect Flash Fiction that fulfils all the characteristics of an accurate Flash Fiction.
A sad incident took place. Captain Smith and Detective Jones came for an investigation. Their observations and conversations were a source of the story. Those helped to come to a decision.
The story is well-written and full of suspense.
A bright future is waiting for you. Go ahead.
Keep writing.

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Pinkie Pie set her sights on the DJ of her fundraiser event and her silky feet. But, it was a pathetic experience. It was almost impossible to clean the dirty feet like DJ had. It was extremely dirty. But, for the fundraising, Pinkie Pie accepted the challenge. That should be appreciated.

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Gaining an unlimited weight is a curse that happens in Bowser's life. An uncontrolled life leading is the reason for that.
Is it possible for Bowser to regain normal life? We don't know. But he should make a try at least.
However, it is a burning issue. I must thank the author who prefers a real-life problem.

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Review of Rock Gets Revenge  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Rock and Roll were two siblings. But they were attached to a sexual relationship. They were very aggressive.
They had the contract for two weeks. Roll remembered Rock, there were another nine days left. So, did it perfectly. Those words strike in Rock's mind. How did he spend these days? He severely took serious revenge on Roll. Roll wasn't prepared for those. However, she survived.
Good and interesting story.
Write on!
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Review of Love for poetry  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Like other poets, this poet also loves poetry. The poet has been passionate about this artistic field of literature. Word selection is a key feature of every poetry. The poet is very much concentrated on that particular part. He would like to write various patterns of poetry.
You are now in our community. I hope that we will see many beautiful poetries in future.

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Review of The Hunter  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This chapter creates tremendous suspense. What will happen ultimately? That can not be predicted but exciting fiction will surround us, it is definite.
The main character is Eva. That can't be incorrect. The character of LA has yet to appear. The character of Ariel is looking ferocious. Though it is too early to comment on anything. He was alive eight hundred years ago! Eva got
Rakshasa Queen Erzabel's summon.
Anyhow it is going to be an interesting story.
Suspense is all over.
What will happen next?
Write on!

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Scootaloo was hungry. So she wanted to buy the premium "Blast Bar". It was nutritious. The cost of one was five dollars. She did not have half of that. She was very much insulted.
Hunger is such a thing, that it can hamper one's character. That happened in the case of Scootaloo. She saw an earning option. A few shy guys were there. She offered her body for their entertainment. They enjoyed it too much and Scootaloo got thirty-five dollars as a deal.
When she was released, she returned the bars from that money. What did she know? Encash your treasure, the sex, in a time of need. It spoiled Scootaloo and would spoil many. The authorities should take some action, mainly for the poor teens. Otherwise, we would see many Scootaloos.
It's a very thoughtful story.

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for entry "20240504 I Or Me?" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
It is also a very important topic. We often apply 'I' and 'me' wrongly. It's a very common mistake. So, the blogger like always comes again to break our misconceptions. It is obvious. He gives us complete knowledge with the easiest of examples. We remain grateful to him.
Write on!
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