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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's one of the greatest rhyming poetry ever read before. Due to the blessings of God, we saw Lahaina and West Maui as the paradise of the heavens on the earth. But they were in utter chaos which was the cause of their destructions. It is very difficult to rebuild them once again but not impossible.
It taught them a lesson. Unrest, jealousy and pride always hamper our unity and cause severe damage. It will take time to make that huge loss. They also learn if you ignore the gifts of God. So they learn some useful lessons. I hope that will help create a good society.
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Review of Broken  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is the real truth of every life. We don't know what will happen tomorrow. We would expect something. But, there is no certainty, that will occur.
That lady is brokenhearted, hurt and scared today. Do you find any shine of confidence in her? No!
But, if you saw her before that bitter experience. You would find her in a completely different direction. She was complete, confident unblemished and always ready to fight against evil powers.
Is there not a mirror image you? Maybe or may not be. But you must see some similar characters in your way.
It's an excellent poetry.
Write on!

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's an erotic story but a well-built short story. The central character is none other than Apple Bloom and another important character is a shy guy Wave. How do they spend time in the gas station? That is the subject of the story.
At the Gas Station, Apple Bloom made her feet dirty to attract the guys. Wave responded very quickly. Her purpose served. Wave cleaned up her feet. She left that small Gas Station.
A well-paced story. The reader will be happy to read it. That's all. A short time entertainment. Not much left think later.

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
It's another excellent addition to the blog by the blogger. How Long Does Writing Take? It is very difficult to predict. Many things act at the same time. Your thoughts, expressions and style of writing may differ from each other. So, you may take any sort of time to prepare your first draft. Every idea or concept is correct. But, do you connect with the mind of that particular reader? That is the main subject. If you do, you must be a good author. If not, don't be frustrated. Try again, patiently, you will perform better.
It's a very important writing effort which has enriched us very well.
Write on!

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is truly a brilliant poetry. The poet tells us the real truth of our lives.
What should be our best policy? That strategy must be admired by all. How can it be possible? As per the poet, a kind word is more effective than beauty. You can easily win other's hearts through a nice and kind word. If you develop this weapon, you will be a popular person.
This tiny poetry has enough strength to win our heart.
Go ahead.
Keep writing.

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Review of On the Other Side  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a story of true love. This type of love is the birthplace of acute romanticism. Not only that, but that kind of perfect love can tune two souls as a single soul. So, despite the physical distance, they can listen to the melody of others.
These types of lovers can feel others' presence always in their minds.
It is a wonderful poetry.
Write on!

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for entry "20240502 Drafts" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
It's a very vital blog. The blogger wants to intimidate us on how to create a Novel. Though, every novelist is an artist. But it is a very laborious job.
One draft is not enough for any kind of literature. First, you need to correct your spelling or technical errors. Secondly, you will find the mismatched portions and rectify those. It's an unavoidable part. After doing that, you will find something that demands change.
After that, your draft may be proper. Even, you may require more dafts for your perfection. But, none can get an absolute perfection. It's impossible. Don't compromise with your artistry on the way.
We will remain grateful to blogger for this blog.
Continue this performance.

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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
What a brilliant poetry it is! Through this beautiful tree, the poet wants to show how wonderful our life is! We should enjoy every bit of it. But unfortunately, it doesn't happen at every moment. Many people complain about their mournful life. They ignore the little blisses for an attractive target. These blisses are a gift of God. After failure, they feel their faults. But it is too late to realise. Their physical condition doesn't permit them to begin afresh. Time already extracts their level of energy to a great extent.
So a wise person always does the same as the poet's recommendation. That human always honours the closest relationships. They prefer love and a peaceful life and hate unrest and lust. However, we prefer to live in childhood trauma as they have joyful experiences. But in our lives, we have pain, hurt and hard struggles. Those give us experience on how to overcome adverse situations. It's a big lessons of every life.
It's a great beginning.
A bright future is waiting for you.
Keep writing.
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's a brilliant chain of five Shadorama is a syllabic poem. It originated in Spain. It fulfils all the characteristics of that type of syllabic poetry.
In April, we saw the lovely excitement of "Game of Thrones". Every participant and other WDC members enjoy it very much. I especially like how Jace congrats every participant. It's a lesson for us on how to adopt true sporting attitudes. It gives you a boost and other participants, too.
It is one of the most valuable poems of all time.
Write on!
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Review of Lessons  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's truly a wonderful Flash Fiction. There are only two characters, Tim and the small boy. That boy wanted to know whether Tim saw any ghosts or not. Tim felt funny in his attitude.
But, the story was story was running at a faster pace and interesting way. Ultimately, the boy disappeared. Tim learned what the ghost was.
The compactness of the story must be appreciated.
Write on!
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Review of Summer  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's truly a fantastic rhyme that draws the image of a warm summer's image nicely. But is it a proper Haiku? It's a big question.
The primary condition of a Haiku is it should be unrhymed in nature. So, how can rhyming poetry be a traditional Japanese Haiku? So, it can't be a traditional Japanese Haiku.
The next important thing is the purpose. The main purpose of a traditional Japanese Haiku is to draw the beauty of the image of mother nature which is brilliantly performed.
A Haiku contains a single u rhymed sentence whereas that rhyme contains three rhymed sentences. It's a big mistake.
Other characteristics of the Haiku have been followed exactly.
The performance is truly notable. Except for the two important rules. I hope those mistakes will not be repeated in future.
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Review of I Forgive You  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a truly excellent poem of true love. If your love is real unconditional for someone wholeheartedly, you must forgive your lover though you know that the human is a guilty person. This is the beauty of true love. It is blind and can't be blamed on that person. So despite several faults, you will forgive that person.
It's a real-life story.
Write on!


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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's an extraordinary short story. The central character of the story is David Welton.
The beginning of the story creates an enormous suspense. He found himself in an unknown place in an unusual manner. What happened? He remained addicted, At last, he knew that he had taken a short-term loan. He had to pay it back now.
He was sent to jail if it remained unpaid. David could not find any way. He was forced to play poker. Bank intimated to him that an anonymous source paid twenty-seven thousand dollars. He could take a sigh of relief.
It is a well-paced story.
The readability is awesome.
Write on!
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Review of Promise and Hope  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is an important rhyming poem about how we feel this world has become. Despite a lot of problems and pains in our material world, we get some scopes of respite as Jesus Christ, our saviour, is there to rescue us. So why don't we rely on him? He shows us the proper ways to avoid pain and sorrow. A true devotee accepts those ways and enjoys an immaterial peace of the heavens though the soul remains in the planet.
This poetry is the true inspiration for us to adopt spiritual path.
We shall remain grateful to the poet for this poetry.
A bright future is waiting for you.
Keep writing.
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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In this chapter, there were three main characters, Toadette, Minh T and Captain Toad. Despite the main story, the side story intimates us about the environment and also entertains us. Here, it was very entertaining. They lived in a dirty society where we couldn't see minimum moral sense!
If it was not Hell, what would be Hell?
The story is moving smoothly.
What will happen next?
To intimate those, we have to wait for the next episode.
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Review of Winter Kisses  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! It's a superb romantic scene from the Winter days! Can we expect more Romantic? A kissing image between two lovers makes more sense of romance in the introduction of the snowflakes. That sends them into a frozen fantasy world where only whispers and winter kisses are there.
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a brilliant poetry for us! Can you read our minds? You tell the truth. WDC is our second home. Where we can get a sigh of relief. There are many creative ideas we can find here and there what helps our creativity. We can share our ideas and feedback, too. Even written and unwritten connection can be sent easily to other friends. Overall, a brilliant atmosphere is here to explore ourselves.
It's an excellent poetry.
Write on!
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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's a long chapter. How did Minh T and Toadette spend an evening in the Mushroom City? That is very simple, not very important. It just shows that your work can create a huge impact on your attitudes. Toadette and Minh T we're slaves. So, their mentality were very narrow. It was very unfortunate but true.
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Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This rhyming poetry is dedicated to her departed soul of twin sisters. When she remained alive, her movements were strictly restricted by the advice of a physician. It was truly a painful life. Everkund God made her free from all sorts of illnesses and sufferings through death. She can go anywhere freely.
The teller felt it from her heart and shared it in the form of emotional poetry. Though there was death it was not so tragic. When someone suffers due to an incurable disease. That death can only give relief to intolerable pains.
Excellent piece of poetic work.
Write on!
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Review of Intro  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Duane Stockwell,
You are truly a creative writer whom everyone wants to read. Writing a novel needs patience and efficiency. It also requires adding some art in the story what time demands. So, the novelist is an artist.
I hope that you will begin one of them chapterwise. I love to read good novels.
I am welcoming you in this literary community.
I'm waiting for your first chapter of a novel.
Keep writing.
With good wishes,
Ashok
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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The aeroplane was out of control. There was no scope for survival. The pilot did not have the efficiency to handle this type of plane. What would happen? So, Toadette came forward with Minh T. Her leadership did miracles again. They, all passengers, arrived safely in the Mushroom City. Toadette became the heroin. Every toad tried to connect with her.
The chapter was written very dramatically.
What will happen next?
We have to wait for the next chapter.


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Review of Toe in the Water  
for entry "Music to My Ears" 
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Music is such a thing that can easily connect with your heart through the ears. That is the most simplest but effective way to make a connection. It's truly electrifying. So once the heart of the audience catches it, it is not easy to forget. Despite this fact, we hesitate to create a relationship with that musician. Why are we feeling shy? We don't know the answer. But it happens.
It is an excellent observation power.
Write on!
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Review of Closer to older  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poetry is a bit longer but tells the ultimate truth of every life. Her past was not peaceful. But she had to live with those. She is the representative of all humans. Our lives are a mixture of love and hate. All feelings of happiness can't last forever. So we have to stay in pain. But, in each moment, we are getting closer to that moment of everlasting peace.
After death, God embraces our souls, and at that moment, we get everlasting peace. So, wise people always consider death as the beginning of a new part of life which is full of love and
peace.
What thoughtful poetry it is!
Write on!
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Review of Prologue  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The prologue suggested that the novel would be an interesting autobiography of the teller. It was an ancient period's story. Every kingdom liked to control over the neighbourhood kingdom. It was very brutal. They always searched for the weak points of others. To perform they could make joint ventures with the same dirty mentality.
Even, today that dirty politics. So, wise people advise us not to disclose weak points to anybody.
I expect a nice novel.
Write on!

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Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Ashok Banerjee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
What the scenarios! Toadette and Minh T learned a few lessons for another time. Toadette was a feet slave of Princess Peach. So she behaved roughly with Toadette. Everything that Toadette did on the journey was nothing but her orders. It was quite natural. Being the Highness, the Princess should have control over her servant.
Toadette loved Her Highness's daughter Penelope as her own fairer. She also depended on her. But Penelope also began to use her power on Toadette. Penelope ordered as a Princess, that was remembered by her. Therefore Toadette had to obey those orders. In the chapter, Penelope repeats the same.
Servant and Highness can't make a relationship.
Even today, in the era of democracy, we often bosses get pleasure in harassing the subordinates.
These are important and unavoidable lessons.
Write on!
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