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Review of Best Friend  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is such a nice poem. I have had friends like that and have lost them as well lol. I will do anything for a friend but they tend not to feel the same way. This is a nice ode to some good friends who i am sure know how talented their friend is in writing poems thank you for sharing
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Review of Meet New Writer  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi I like your introduction, I am also a newbee. I am working towards a open university degree and have one child who is at college. I live in Chessington England and have always wanted to be a published writer. I am very glad to meet you and I like the way you write
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
this is a good story just a few things, 1)'But like I said, be careful what you wish( you)' I think instead of (you) you mean (for)
2)'and I will grant it' it would sound better by saying (and I'll grant it)
3)' Cursing loudly and unaware of what he was doing, he threw the burger' I would write ' Alex cursed, threw the burger on the ground, and
4) the speech seemed very wooden and not natural
5) I think leave out - the young man' as it's very repetitive
Apart from these few points I thought you wrote this very well and have great talent thank you for sharing
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