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I believe in constructive criticism and honesty. I can adapt my review style to fit the kind of feedback an author is looking for (e.g., developmental suggestions, fine-tuning, proofreading, etc.), but will always try to be as encouraging and helpful as possible.
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I read almost everything. I particularly love genre fiction (mystery/thriller and science fiction/fantasy especially) and nonfiction of all kinds.
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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this piece. It was concise, to the point, and you did a great job of providing enough description for the reader to easily follow along without getting mired in the details.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed the read. Nice work!


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Positives

I thought you did a great job comparing and contrasting the book and the film that you chose to highlight. You presented the information in a clear and easily digestible way that made it an easy read. Nice job!


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No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Positives

I really enjoyed this poem. I particularly liked the prose format, and the questions it asks of the reader to prompt their engagement. Overall, this was an interesting, compelling read. Well done!


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No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this piece.


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Positives

I enjoyed the structure and the imagery of this piece. I thought it flowed well, was engaging from beginning to end. It was an all-around solid piece.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Positives

I like the detail and description that you put into this piece. As someone who doesn't remember their dreams, I'm amazed that you recall so many details of yours! I thought you did a great job relaying those details to the reader.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Positives

I thought you did a good job with this assignment. The prompts were clearly posted and addressed and you did a great job laying everything out clearly.


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No specific suggestions for improvement.


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Overall I enjoyed reading this assignment. Well done!


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Positives

I really enjoyed reading this piece. It was well written, descriptive, and evocative. Really nice job!


Suggestions

No specific creative suggestions, although from a visual perspective I would encourage perhaps a slightly larger font size to make it a little more readable for your audience (WdC tends to have default font sizes on the smaller side of the spectrum).


Overall

Overall, this was an enjoyable read. Good work!


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Positives

I like the setup and some of the details you've provided here. In a couple short paragraphs, you've set up a story that feels like it's authentically part of a larger world.


Suggestions

The narrative itself feels more like a vignette than a full story with a beginning, middle, and end. It's a great setup, but it would be great to flesh it out a little bit.


Overall

Overall, this was an entertaining read. Nice job!


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Positives

I really liked the structure of this piece. The brevity of the lines created an impactful, quick read that really stood out. Your imagery was also excellent.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Positives

I enjoyed this poem. It was engaging, entertaining, and well structured. I appreciated the note at the bottom mentioning that it was from the unpublished work of Mary Pavey, which is great context for the reader.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought this piece was a great read. Well done!


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Positives

I enjoyed reading this piece. In only a few quick sentences, you managed to say a lot, and it was engaging from start to finish. Nice job!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this piece was brief but engaging. It was effectively written and compelling. Well done!


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Positives

I liked the imagery and structure of this piece. It was an interesting, engaging read that kept my attention from beginning to end.


Suggestions

There were a number of technical issues with some of the lines, mostly related to the wrong form of the word or word tense. For example, some of the ones I noticed early on in the poem:

traped down myself into the darkness.
Is that supposed to be "trapped" or maybe "draped"?

My inner heart was full of ambitious
Based on the tense of the piece, I think this should be "ambition"

My life seems enigmas
I think this should be "enigmatic"


Overall

Overall, I think there's a bit of work to be done to polish this poem up a bit, but you've got a great foundation and there's a ton of potential here. Nice work!


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Positives

I enjoyed the worldbuilding and the mystery elements of this story. With only a few short paragraphs to work with, you created a compelling, interesting hook for a narrative that could potentially be expanded upon. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading this story. Nice work!


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Positives

I enjoyed the structure and the imagery in this piece. It was clear, and kept the reader's interest throughout the lengthy piece. Nice job!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this poem. Well done!


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Positives

I really enjoyed the imagery and structure of this piece. It was evocative and well-written.


Suggestions

The only small quibble I had with the piece was the rhyming couplet where both lines ended with the same word ("damned"). That's not an easy word to rhyme while maintaining the pace and imagery, but it would have been great to find an alternative option to give things a little more variety.


Overall

Overall, I really enjoyed the read. Well done!


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Positives

I enjoyed reading this poem. I thought you did a great job with establishing visual, clear imagery in the first two lines, and then bringing it home with a very impactful third line. Short, structured poems can be very difficult to do, but I think you did a great job.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed this poem a lot. Well done!


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Positives

I think there's a lot of great perspective in this piece, about the importance of setting healthy boundaries and having relationships where there isn't an unhealthy amount of dependency. Even though this piece speaks to "family people" that aren't biologically related, I think it's an important reminder for us to be mindful of in all of our relationships.


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No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Nice work!


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Positives

I thought this was a really charming story. It captured the magic and the excitement of early love, and your use of description kept things engaging and easy for the reader to visualize. Nice job!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece.


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Positives

I thought you did a good job with the figurative language in this piece. It was short, but to the point and evocative. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a good job creating this short prose that really had an impactful effect on the reader. Well done!


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Positives

I really liked the message of this piece. I think you've packed a lot of observations and practical advice into comparatively few words and that creates an important reminder for many of us on where we should put our focus and our attention. Nice job!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Positives

I liked the imagery in this piece, and I thought you did a great job with the structure. The rhyme scheme was easy to follow along with, and several of the rhyming couplets you selected were really catchy and memorable. All in all, this was an engaging read.


Suggestions

There were quite a few typographical errors in the piece.

For example, A place man fear to dread should either be, "A place man fears to dread," or "A place men fear to dread."

Additionally:

To prove their ambition

Some are lost, some are dead

As the dead let their wings soar

A thorough proofread would really help take this poem to the next level.


Overall

Overall, I thought this was an interesting poem that kept my interest throughout. You're off to a great start!


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Positives

I think you did a great job with the visuals and the description in this piece. In just a few short paragraphs you managed to engage the reader and create vivid imagery and a narrative that moved along at a brisk pace.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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*Train* Positives

I thought you did a great job with the imagery in this poem. Several of the lines really stood out based on your descriptive word choices. In particular, I thought "Dreams I wake up apologizing to God for" and "Nightmares illuminate what I deny" were both really visceral and engaging. The Rebel Poetry Contest has always been one of my favorite poetry contests (when it runs) and I think this is a worthy entry that has a lot of potential. Well done!


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Structurally, there were a couple of places where the construction of the poem occasionally disrupted the read for me. While the visual appeal is there, breaking "No one guesses monstrous insanity / lurks beneath:" across two lines felt a little jarring too me, and earlier in the poem the "I wear a mask each day: / Good girl, proper, angelic" felt a little jarring to go from a narrative construction line to one that just lists three nouns/adjectives.


*Train* Overall

Overall, I think you did a great job with this poem. It was very visual, and was a great fit for the prompt. Well done!


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Positives

I enjoyed reading this item. It read like an allegory that you might read in a religious text, where there is a moral behind the tale to be learned and studied. Nice work!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement, other than that I would have loved to have seen this piece expanded a little bit to tell more of the story.


Overall

Overall, I think you did a good job with this piece. Well done!


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Positives

I like the description in this piece. You did a great job of creating a vivid atmosphere early in this piece.


Suggestions

As a story, it's lacking a little narrative. The protagonist wanders into an old house and finds a pearl necklace... and that's about it. Even though it's only a 300-word story, I was hoping for a bit more in the way of backstory, or conclusion to make it feel like a story as opposed to a vignette.


Overall

Overall, this was an enjoyable read. Nice work!


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