Hello and thank you for sharing this with all of us on WDC.

I must say that if it wasn't for the distracting usage of numerals alongside letters, I believe I would have rated this piece higher. Was this meant to be on Twitter or something?

I can understand the need to be different in one's writings, but at least try a little more consistency in your endeavor. What I mean by that is, for instance, you use the letters 'U' and/or "Ur' in place of 'you' and/or 'your' in one sentence, but in the next you use the actual word.

"U speak, and Ur voice caresses my ear.
I pull you close and music plays, softly easing the tensions of life."

I am not trying to nit-pick or anything.... it's just distracting I feel.
But it's your work and you know what you were wanting to convey, but I had absolutely no clue...
In fact, I had to read this more than once just so I could attempt a review.

Other than that I feel you have talent.
Keep writing!

Thank you for sharing this. I've seen glowing reviews about this particular piece and decided that I would take a moment and see for myself what work warranted such high praise from so many... and I would have to say that overall I liked what I read. I would have to agree with my fellow 'reviewers' and with their positive comments as well.

Although I must admit I am not all that fond of 'feel good' nostalgia-based literary compositions in general, having a tendency to shy away from reading those forms or genres personally, but indeed you write well and therefore I will definitely be reading more of your work in the future. Till then I wish you success and congratulate you on such a fine job. Your talent and its praise is evident, earned, and most importantly, well deserved.

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Permit me to start this review by stating that I feel you are a fine writer
and I applaud your work thus far.
You capture emotion as easily as you convey it.
Because this was composed so eloquently and concise, It is with little wonder why
this reader can so easily relate to what you say.
The portrait your words paint is beautiful and shall
remain in (my) memory for quite some time.

Again for the record, this piece was well written and I cannot find any errors within.
Keep writing like this and you shall indeed soar above us all.
Thank you so very much for sharing this remarkable piece.

Hello and thank you for sharing this with us here on WDC.
I'd like to start off by saying that you have what appears to be true depth and feeling when it comes to composing literary work. However this particular piece was not long enough to adequately convey this and I feel that there is more to this idea than what lies before us.
Try expanding upon this piece.

There were a few inconsistancies that I noticed- keep in mind though, I firmly believe that authors and artists too often have their work judged by their spelling or grammatical ability rather than the context or content of what they write. But that isn't necessarily the case with all those here at WDC. Nevertheless there are those here who will dissect any and all errors they see. Albeit helpful in general, it might deter your creativity at times. I speak from experience here so forewarned (perhaps though that is and was merely something only I dealt with.....hmm...).

Watch your capitalization, and more importantly, your rhythm. Again this is merely my opinion.
You have the potentials to be a fine author, and I wish you all the success you deserve, whether heeding my advice or not. Most important thing is that you keep writing!

Hello and thank you for posting this, Overall I would have to say that I liked this piece. It was short, concise and well written. I applaud your efforts. It is refreshing to see that individuality is alive and well in this day and age. Keep on writing items such as this one and I am certain that you shall go far here on WDC as well as the literary world in general!

I found no grammatical errors within this composition. Although one thing that I might point out is that the timing or flow is a little bit off, nevertheless I found it interesting to read and look forward it reading more of your work in the future,

Hello and thank you for sharing such a powerful, personal piece with all of us on WDC.
That in itself reflects more about the author's character than the items within any 'portfolio.'

I feel that there is an underlying sense of rage in your words.
An emotional issue that is beyond passion, but not quite to the level of hate.
Or perhaps it is hatred touched upon, but never fully released- only the author truly knows.

You have talent, and for that I congratulate you. You have the ability to convey certain tangible feelings we all face or often feel whilst living out our daily lives. Again I offer kudos.

Be careful that the passion that hate embodies
(again-as far as this reviewer interprets and sees)
within isn't kept entirely at bay or denied from being.

Let it flow via the written or literary form and I believe the solace you so
desperately seek will finally be within your grasp.

Keep writing. You're a natural.

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Again you prove your abilities with ease!
I have to admit, I am very much impressed with the way that you write.
The story is interesting, the conversations are easy to follow, and the effect is memorable in every aspect of the word.

If you are not already a published writer, I suspect that you soon will be.

Very good!
Keep up the wonderful work!

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